Jean Valjean Posted October 22, 2012 Share Posted October 22, 2012 This is a review topic for The Immortals. Ths has nothing to do with the Henry Cavill movie of the same name (in which case, here's my review: it sucked), but a little epic I decided to start. At first I thought I was going to do a short story based off of a scene and inner dialogue I had in my head a couple of days ago, but the point that I wanted to get to needed more building up to it so I stretched out the story into several chapters. Either way, hopefully I can express some of the feelings I've been having lately in such a way that this resonated with readers.24601 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkyLandOceAnna Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 I found this to be a great start to your story. I look forward to see where they will be headed and what will occur once they get there and on the way as well. Also how long they will be able to resist going back if ever they do in your story. Thank you! Quote Wordsmith <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jean Valjean Posted October 26, 2012 Author Share Posted October 26, 2012 Chapters 2 and 3 are now up, and with these I am obliged to add that the word count has risen to OVER 9000!!!24601 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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