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How to Escape the Wig Salon

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#1 Offline Toa of Winds

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Posted Oct 27 2012 - 09:34 AM

And here we are: the third spinoff to TAoT (and hopefully this is more successful than the last two!!!).This comedy will last for 10-15 chapters, which should quench your thirs for TFC!Actually, the end of this comedy will be critical to TFC's storyline. So...you might want to read this, otherwise you won't understand TFC at all.Anyway.How to Escape the Wig SalonPrologue: QuestionsIn the Wig Salon… The Wig Salon is a dreadful place. Some, like Turaga Nuju, say that it is most relaxing. But others, like Black Hole, find it dreadful and want to escape. Take it from me, the one and only Narrator. Well, it used to be that way. After I annoyed my master ever-so much, he ordered me to the wig salon for eternity. But here’s the problem: the Wig Salon Retirement Home, or WSRH, is where dead people go. I’m not dead. I was simply ordered here for eternity. TN:TS didn’t stab me, or give me poisoned protodermis. He couldn’t, because all of us in, well, our company, are immortal. So how can I be here, then? And how can I get out?Chapter 1: Endings and BeginningsAt the Entrance to the WSRH… The portal opened up once again, to show the dead from Chapter 3.7 of TAoT file in. Tarix walked in, with a jagged line of black scratched across his chest plate. “Yeah, that’s how it happened,” Tarix said, showing Nuju how he’d died. “Hmmm,” Nuju thought. “Shadow bolt?” “Indeed,” Tarix answered. “It only hurt for a second, then it took me.” “I’m sorry,” Nuju answered. “But this is for the better. Welcome to the Wig Salon Retirement Home, where you can relax after death.” “Retirement home? I thought that this was a bad place!” “Wrong you are, young Glatorian. You’ll never need to worry about anything ever again.” “Good. Can I see Berix?” “Yes. Third door on your left,” Nuju said, pointing to the hallway. I watched as Tarix opened the door to Berix’s voice. It makes me wonder, how people can be so happy being dead. I guess, because, they’re dead, and I’m not. Not really, anyway. What makes this even worse, though, is that even if he wanted to, TN:TS couldn’t break me out. The same Great Being that created me, TN:TS, and the rest of our team, created this underworld. To get out, we’d have to overpower him. But can we? “Narrator, you can’t keep thinking about this,” Nuju said, interrupting my thoughts. “There’s no hope for any of us to get out of here while Ranox rules this world. We should just enjoy what we have now…“ But something popped into my head. We had defeated Ranox once before. Could we do it again? “There’s a chance,” I said, “isn’t there?” “Possibly,” Nuju said. “But we’d need an awful lot of help.”To Be Continued…How was it?~MN~
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Posted Oct 27 2012 - 10:10 AM

Interestingly enough, this seems more like a teaser than a chapter.
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Posted Oct 27 2012 - 03:04 PM

Interestingly enough, this seems more like a teaser than a chapter.

:yes: I agree there. Fairly good teaser, except I don't see any wigs. This is a wig salon?Although if the rest of the comedy is going to be like this, I suggest you make drastic changes...

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Posted Oct 27 2012 - 05:13 PM

Yeah, this chapter is fairly short and lacking in humor. Sorry about that :(.Hopefully this will make up for it...although it's also pretty short: EDIT: Wow, that chappy's a lot shorter than I expected it to be. Chapter 2 will be up hopefully tomorrow, but don't expect a chappy after that for a loooong time.Stupid Sandy.~MN~

Edited by Meta Nuva, Oct 27 2012 - 05:16 PM.

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Posted Nov 05 2012 - 07:02 PM

Here we go, the longer Chapter 2:How to Escape the Wig SalonChapter 2: Final Arrivals I watched as the characters from the finale popped in. There were quite a handful of them, the most noticeable being VN and Teridax. “So…is it really over?” VN queried, looking around. “Is this the—“ “Of course it’s not the end,” Teridax scoffed. “I’m going to get back to Spherus Magna—whatever it takes.” “Well, good luck with that,” the headless figure of TSO answered. “I’ve tried multiple times to get out of here, but it’s impossible without my head. And I blame it on you,” TSO said, pointing to Narrator. I adjusted TSO’s arm so that it pointed to VN. “Well, too bad,” VN answered. “To take control of your world, I had to kill you.” “Not really,” Teridax said. “Karzahni was still there, wasn’t he?” “Who in Makuhero City is Karzahni?” “Probably the only being who has power over TN:TS,” I responded. “He’s a handful.” “Is he here?” TSO asked, putting his arms in front of him. “Nope,” Teridax said, facepalming. “Nui sent him off to a random planet far, far, away.” “What a noble thing to do,” Nuju said, walking up to the group. He led Teridax and VN away, showing them around. “I take it that Axonn survived too?” TSO asked after a few minutes. “Well, he hasn’t come through the door yet, has he?” Amazingly, I still had a weak connection to the outside world, NAW and Spherus Magna alike. I decided not to bring up to the Dark Hunter that Tahu had survived as well. That would have been bad. “Great.” TSO walked away, attempting to cry before realizing that he had no eyes. Blindly, the Dark Hunter made his way down the long hallway to his room, before bumping into a wall and crashing to the floor. I went to my room as well, helping TSO up along the way. Nuju had given me a large room as compensation for my “troubles”. It was complete with the newest 50 inch Mac computer, thin as a slice of pizza. Here I was making my plans to escape the Wig Salon Retirement Home, and return to the world of BIONICLE. I sat down at the chair and pulled up my plans. They were full of scientific equations, describing how I was still alive, and more of that mumbo-jumbo. Currently I was deciding as to who’d come with me. “Definitely not me,” Nuju had said earlier when I’d asked him. “I have to stay behind and watch the other stragglers. Plus, why don’t you just enjoy yourself?” “For someone that’s younger than me, you are quite lazy,” I answered, angered at Nuju’s decision. “What? I created the Transport, for Karzahni’s sake! I’m an INVENTOR!” “It took you five years to find the blueprints for the Transport, Nuju. You’re an old, slow, lazy Turaga.” Nuju had huffed and walked away. Of course, his walk was and is very slow, so he really didn’t walk away. It was more like…not walking away. So Nuju wasn’t coming. Big surprise there. But Teridax was definitely interested. But the only problem with him: What would he do, terrorize everybody? I couldn’t allow that. But he wanted to come, so I guess I had to allow him. Otherwise, he’d kill me, and then I’d never be able to escape the Wig Salon.To Be Continued…

Edited by Meta Nuva, Nov 05 2012 - 07:02 PM.

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