Kronorak

[Master Inika]

Kronorak A powerful conqueror, Kronorak was once a benevolent authority figure on his home island. However, a Brotherhood of Makuta-organized Visorak invasion resulted in the decimation of his people. The Visorak left what was once a utopia as a barren wasteland. Kronorak continued to live on the island for roughly a year, being forced to kill his mutated former friends, or allow them to kill him. Those experiences left him insane, and he eventually left with a mission: defeat the Brotherhood. He was eventually found by the Dark Hunters, annihilation a Matoran village he believed a Makuta was secretly hiding in. He was recruited, and now fights for the Hunters, hoping a mission will one day bring him in contact with a Makuta. Among his many powers are shadow, Rahi control, and camouflage. Since joining the Hunters, he wears a Kanohi Mask of Vulture. Building Instructions Page 1Building Instructions Page 2Building Instructions Page 3Building Instructions Page 4Building Instructions Page 5Building Instructions Page 6 Edited October 22, 2011 by Master Inika

[Obsessionist]

From bottom to top: The feet are awkwardly long. I suggest moving the Hordika foot in a few studs. The one-piece lower legs in black would look better in dark red, or you could add more black to the rest of him. The upper legs are gap-y and awkward. Adding some more bulk and getting rid of the gap would do wonders for the MOC's overall look. The waist and lower torso are pretty cool, I like the use of Metru feet. The Metru shoulder armor above them, however, bulge out unnaturally. Some less bulgy pieces would work well their. The entire chest looks very hollow, you may want to fill it in. I like the shoulders and arm, simple as they are. They are very reminesient of Sidorak. Replacing the bohrok shields with a more rounded element would be great, though. I like the choice of mask! The neck could be shortened by a stud, but that's a minor thing. Overall you have some great ideas in this MOC, but it needs some work to really look great. I hope you will remake it, because it has alot of potential!

[Xeren Ozone]

Dang! Thats a great MOC. Despite what Lego Obsessionist said, the problem isnt in the feet, but Id say the head. the neck seems a but long, but that might just be the angle that we see it from. But I think that the mask is a perfect choice, and the color scheme matches, which isnt easy to do in MOCs. Overall, great job!