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Posted Oct 31 2012 - 02:00 AM
Posted Oct 31 2012 - 02:06 AM
you who tempt the fates
you have journeyed oh so far
to apparitions in the haze
rise up, you earth bound demons
rise up before me now and fight
your time has finally come
Posted Oct 31 2012 - 08:16 AM
Edited by Samhain, Oct 31 2012 - 04:27 PM.
Divinator of Dreams.
This Is Proud Stigma.
Posted Oct 31 2012 - 09:52 AM
Posted Oct 31 2012 - 01:59 PM
"As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender
Posted Oct 31 2012 - 07:39 PM
Posted Mar 12 2013 - 10:56 PM
But honestly, that's just a stylistic decision and it's fine how you have it now.Overall, one of the most well written pieces of literature that I have ever had the pleasure (or horror, haha) of reading. Well done.
Its tentacles consume youAnd it allEnds.
Posted Mar 15 2013 - 03:09 PM
[color=#0000ff;]Pretty short poem. While personally, I would have preferred a structure similar to The Raven, given the subject matter, it's no big deal. could over-analyze this, but it's really just a short poem, so it's no big deal. I was entertained the moment I saw the title, and I thought "awe darn" when I realized that it would make a great idea for a short story with the same name. Something about Eldritch Abominations translates real well to short stories, or at least as far as my imagination goes. So I'm just wondering, in case I do this, if it would be okay with you if I wrote a short story with the same title as this poem.[/color]
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