Regal Posted November 20, 2012 Share Posted November 20, 2012 (edited) A while ago a made a self-MOC. He is a Fe-Matoran named Neekrah. Neekrah wears a silver Pakari, carries a curved blade, and is slightly hunchbacked. He is similar to the Voya Nui Matoran but the arms and head are different.http://farm9.staticf...b62d3f21b_z.jpgMy Photostream for more images:http://www.flickr.co...s/89417137@N07/I hope you enjoy! Edited November 20, 2012 by Suukorak12 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumiki Posted November 20, 2012 Share Posted November 20, 2012 Stylistically, it's pretty simple. I can tell that it was intended to be Voyatoran-style. It's very setlike, and pulls it off quite well. In fact, it looks like a better model than, say, Velika.It's hard to find critiques on creations so small, but I have to point out the odd silver they used for those '01 masks. Shapewise, the Pakari is nice, but the silver is a bit clashy. I think it could work if you removed his tool, though. Quote avatar by Lady Kopaka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Iron Toa Posted November 20, 2012 Share Posted November 20, 2012 Looks like a decent build from what I can see, but we need views from different angles! The tool looks good, from the front at least. The color scheme makes him more like a Matoran of Earth or Magnetism, though. Quote My BlogLatest Update: RPG: Character Creation and StatsMy Story CollectionStory Currently in Progress:End of Yrenta (Review Topic) (Currently at 55 Chapters)I realize I haven't updated my stories or posted much for quite a while. I will get back it it sometime, and I am still checking the site daily for any interesting topics.Brickshelf Gallery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted November 20, 2012 Share Posted November 20, 2012 Nice compact build. I agree with Sumiki, although the clashy silver doesn't bother me.Whoa what? A MOC comment from Sumiki? Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted November 21, 2012 Share Posted November 21, 2012 Simple, yet nicely done. I like the Voya Nui Matoran build and the mask looks grea on it. The tool also doesn't look too bad too. Also, I thought the title said "Nuurakh" for a moment . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Codin the Fe-Matoran Posted November 23, 2012 Share Posted November 23, 2012 I never really imagined any Fe-Matoran being hunched over, but it does add a nice hint of character to this MOC. I really like what you've done here.About the colour of the mask; I don't particularly mind it, but it does seem a bit off among the other grey pieces in his joints. It all hinges on your personal opinion, but perhaps switching it with an orange or copper Pakari would look better, if you have one of those. Quote "Danger is the anvil on which trust is forged." - Toa Jaller, Ex-Captain of the Ta-Koro Guard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Regal Posted November 26, 2012 Author Share Posted November 26, 2012 I never really imagined any Fe-Matoran being hunched over, but it does add a nice hint of character to this MOC. I really like what you've done here.About the colour of the mask; I don't particularly mind it, but it does seem a bit off among the other grey pieces in his joints. It all hinges on your personal opinion, but perhaps switching it with an orange or copper Pakari would look better, if you have one of those.Yeah I agree, a Copper or Dark gold mask would look better here. If I could I would have made the blade gunmetal/dark silver. Thanks for the constructive criticism guys. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klak Posted November 26, 2012 Share Posted November 26, 2012 The mask color is a bit off, yes, but it seems like a simple and small build (in a good way). The weapon/tool is definitely cool. I like it! Nicely done! Quote My Comedies: The Krika Show (Season 1)The Krika Show Season 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Cup of Fail Posted December 14, 2012 Share Posted December 14, 2012 To KlakWest for keeping his short and sweet Well i am with him on the weapon/tool it do look cool and same with the mask it is a bit off but i can see that if you make the mask black it will be a Onu-Matoran. But it is a Fe-Maotran and i thank if you make the mask a blakc and silver Noble Huna it will look good and make the Bohrok foot silver. but that what i thank you make him what ever you want. Quote My Topics MOCs: Construct-a-Astronaut __________________________________________________ Find Me On Flickr Twitter Youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Solon Posted December 27, 2012 Share Posted December 27, 2012 Gotta love the simple design. It's a classic. Very simple, but I still like it! haha Quote Credit to Spectral Avohkii Enterprises for the "Pride of Curses" banner, specifically Expired! and Credit to Populus for the Avatar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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