Simulacrum Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 Please review!http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/namealot/Jackal/jackal_0o8_copy.jpg http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/namealot/Jackal/jackal_010_copy.jpghttp://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/namealot/Jackal/jackal_014_copy.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MayFall Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 I really dig this. First off, nice use of Hero Factory pieces. The chest is super cool, but the waist could use just a little beefing up IMO. Not necessarily a lot, but just enough so that it doesn't look so exposed. I can't decide if I like the feet or not. On the one hand, they are the only silver pieces on the entire thing. On the other hand they create a nice contrast for that very reason. Either way, nice job. Quote (I am Tahu) (Echoes of a Dream)(The Further Adventures of Fithos) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted October 16, 2011 Author Share Posted October 16, 2011 Glad ye like it! Thanks for taking the time to review! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fsnorglepuff Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 Really well done. The color scheme is great, and the build is solid - aside form the waist. It is fine being thin, but some armor would be nice. And I'm not a fan of open sockets (the feet as armor). All in all, this is an excellent MOC! Quote Toa Gali Nuva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohannDakitsch Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 Nice one. A bit gappy on the chest, and waits could be beefed up. Hands could be bigger as well. Overall, very good. Quote The night is dark and full of terrors... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted October 16, 2011 Author Share Posted October 16, 2011 Wow. This is being noticed. Me happy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Marvel Posted October 16, 2011 Share Posted October 16, 2011 I love this MoC. First of all, the chest. It is simply amazing the way you were able to get all those pieces to fit together so well. On top of that, they were Hero Factory pieces, which don't commonly fit into the conventional Bionicle building system. The waist, however, is more than just skinny. It's so small that it would be impossible for the Jackal to actually stand up in real life. He just wouldn't have enough stomach mass to support that bulky chest. I suggest beefing up the waist a lot. Other than that, it's all really good. I love the custom, and the color scheme as well. Keep up the good work! -CM Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted October 17, 2011 Author Share Posted October 17, 2011 Yeah, the waist sucks. I couldn't find any good peices for it, but i'll try again soon. Thanks for reviewing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuna Toa of Sonics Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 Everything about Jackal is amazing. The upper torso looks realistic, the arms are sweet, the head with the upside down mata head, and the lower legs. What I don't really like are the upper legs and the hips. They look way to thin and unarmored. Quote Does anyone want to play the Master Chief Collection with me? I'm trying to get a team going for ranked. PM for GT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tahkuta Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 The waist is lacking wayy to much, could use some nice armor over it. Other than that, great moc! 7.5/10 Quote Song Of The Month: From Scythe to Sceptre - Be'LakorHau and Kakama collected!I accept PBZP Requests. Just PM Me the letter you want, and the details of what you'd like to see in the MOC.A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W Y X ZRed= Taken and in Progress, Blue = Open, Black = Finished Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted October 19, 2011 Author Share Posted October 19, 2011 Yes, the waist was done in seconds. I need to redo that. Would you mind telling me how I could do a better upper leg desing? I'm going to try to VASTLY improve this moc when i redo it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tahkuta Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 You could take a ball joint and connect it to the hip join on the legs using a 2' rod, and then attatch some HF armour like that. I hope you know what I mean. Quote Song Of The Month: From Scythe to Sceptre - Be'LakorHau and Kakama collected!I accept PBZP Requests. Just PM Me the letter you want, and the details of what you'd like to see in the MOC.A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W Y X ZRed= Taken and in Progress, Blue = Open, Black = Finished Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted October 19, 2011 Author Share Posted October 19, 2011 I think so... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tahkuta Posted October 19, 2011 Share Posted October 19, 2011 Alright, I look forward to seeing the revamp. Quote Song Of The Month: From Scythe to Sceptre - Be'LakorHau and Kakama collected!I accept PBZP Requests. Just PM Me the letter you want, and the details of what you'd like to see in the MOC.A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W Y X ZRed= Taken and in Progress, Blue = Open, Black = Finished Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted October 19, 2011 Author Share Posted October 19, 2011 It should be finished sometime in december. After i buy a few more sets. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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