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Auron v11

Toa Self-MOC MOC OP v11

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#1 Offline Cayde-6

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Posted Dec 13 2012 - 07:02 PM

Well, if you're a purist, I suggest leaving now. If you're not, and you think painting parts is OK, then feel free to stick around.

 

I present to you, the last version of my Self-MOC, Auron! (Hopefully, I have no real plans to update him).

 

(Link to MOCpages here: http://www.mocpages....348723#comments)

 

I'd also like you all to comment (yes, I already know that his really slim, so am I), if you have the time, because, if there's something I'm doing wrong with my building, I'd like to know, so I can become a better builder.

 

(P.S. Yes, I know he's OP as Karzahni, he's a MacGuffin, and highly valuable to my story because of it!)

 

(P.S.S. No bad words this time Windrider! I promise!)


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#2 Offline Kimiko Kusanagi

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Posted Dec 13 2012 - 08:21 PM

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][color=#808080;]But Karzahni isn't OP...[/color][/font]

 

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][color=#808080;]Anyway, nice build, but as you (and I) have stated, the midsection is way too slim. But the mask is cool! :lol:[/color][/font]


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#3 Offline M31

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Posted Dec 14 2012 - 11:37 AM

[color=#000000;][font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"]Awesome MoC, man!  The Kanohi is just amazing:wub:[/color][/font]

 

[color=#000000;][font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"]If anything, I'd agree with Chro, the midsection is a bit slim.  Other than that, I'm loving the (entirely) custom build.  Colors are great, and the layering seems pretty consistent.[/color][/font]

 

[color=#000000;][font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"]booooooiiii, you be MoCing all my chars! xP[/color][/font]


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#4 Offline The Manga Maniac Named Zac

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Posted Dec 17 2012 - 07:10 PM

I like how this version of Auron is fully MOCed (except the mask which is just a recolor and you added fangs). I'm just to lazy to actually make a MOC fully custom, minus the torsos for the girl mocs I make (in order to make 'em more feminine).And, aren't all self mocs OP? XDAnd Chro, I think he is meaning OP as Karzahni as in the BIONICLE slang version of OP as H-E-double hockey stick .
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#5 Offline Kimiko Kusanagi

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Posted Dec 17 2012 - 08:01 PM

And, aren't all self mocs OP? XD

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][color=#808080;] No. Mine isn't.[/color][/font]

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][color=#808080;]Well, he's a time-traveling Toa of Iron... so yeah, a little bit. But not nearly this overpowered. :lol:[/color][/font]

And Chro, I think he is meaning OP as Karzahni as in the BIONICLE slang version of OP as H-E-double hockey stick .

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][color=#808080;]I'm aware of that. Selective misinterpretation.[/color][/font]


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#6 Offline The Manga Maniac Named Zac

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Posted Dec 17 2012 - 08:19 PM

Yea LOLz Zacax doesn't seem to be OPed, he just has tree elements that form in unison, though he mainly uses guns
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#7 Offline Kimiko Kusanagi

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Posted Dec 17 2012 - 09:27 PM

he just has tree elements that form in unison

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][color=#808080;]That's called plantlife. :3[/color][/font]

 

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][color=#808080;]Speaking of my self-MOC's powers, Auron here actually guessed them correctly by accident when making his own version. XD[/color][/font]


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Posted Dec 18 2012 - 02:52 PM

[color=rgb(0,0,0);][font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"]Awesome MoC, man!  The Kanohi is just amazing:wub:[/color][/font]

 

[color=rgb(0,0,0);][font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"]If anything, I'd agree with Chro, the midsection is a bit slim.  Other than that, I'm loving the (entirely) custom build.  Colors are great, and the layering seems pretty consistent.[/color][/font]

 

[color=rgb(0,0,0);][font="'comic sans ms', cursive;"]booooooiiii, you be MoCing all my chars! xP[/color][/font]

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Danke, and I'm very slim! Ribcage-slim! =O

 

 

he just has tree elements that form in unison

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][color=rgb(128,128,128);]That's called plantlife. :3[/color][/font]

 

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][color=rgb(128,128,128);]Speaking of my self-MOC's powers, Auron here actually guessed them correctly by accident when making his own version. XD[/color][/font]

 

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Because, I can read minds via your IP address.

 

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][color=rgb(128,128,128);]But Karzahni isn't OP...[/color][/font]

 

[font="verdana, geneva, sans-serif;"][color=rgb(128,128,128);]Anyway, nice build, but as you (and I) have stated, the midsection is way too slim. But the mask is cool! :lol:[/color][/font]

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He's overpowered because for all intents and purposes, he's a MacGuffin.  I have plans to de-power him though, because I don't really like him being so OverPowered, because I don't like that kinda stuff o-o


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