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Here's a try at an epic. It was originally going to be a Short Story, but I think I can expand on it. The review topic is here ->http://www.bzpower.c...p?showtopic=849

Chapter 1

Necron opened the door of the hovercraft. He slipped on his helmet, completing his armored glide suit. Necron's assistant, Vix, made sure that everthing was working properly on the suit. "Good luck!" Vix said to Necron as the lanky Shadow Toa jumped out of the hovercraft. "He must be psycho or something for using a glide suit at this altitude." The wind rushed past Necron as he went inot a full dive. Approaching his ideal landing spot quickly, Necron spread his arms allowing the glide suit's webbing to spread out. Instantly Necron slowed down. He leaned left and landed softly on top of a tall building. The building was extremely tall. It had to be at least 230 stories high. There was also a tall metal spire on the building. In Necron's opinion, it was too close to the rainy overcast sky. Lightning could strike the spire and electrocute Necron at any second now. The webbing on Necron's glide suit morphed into the suit so they wouldn't be a hinderance. Necron made sure that the super-strong grip on his gloves hadn't worn down. Necron took a deep breath and climbed over the edge.

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