[color=#000080;]Alright this is the review/comment topic for my story: Of Rahi and Toa. [/color]
[color=#000080;]So go ahead and start reviewing/commenting![/color]
[color=#000080;]Note: The ECC review below is from a while back when my story was still being edited. I have since finished editing, so most of the problems mentioned below should have been fixed.[/color]
Edited by Pikiru, May 10 2013 - 01:00 AM.