The Pyro (From TF2) Posted February 22, 2013 Share Posted February 22, 2013 Okay here's the review topic to Chronicles of Masuko. Thanks! Story: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=8772 Quote Herro there, person.How are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chronicler of the Ages Posted March 17, 2013 Share Posted March 17, 2013 Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Really captured the mystery/horror vibe with the coin. One little thing, though it is extremely insignificant. I sort of twinged at the word "dwelt." I think I would have stuck to a simpler word; for some reason, dwelt felt a little bit forced. But the rest of the diction easily made up for that. I mean, "good bad guy" ? Absolutely brilliant! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Pyro (From TF2) Posted March 31, 2013 Author Share Posted March 31, 2013 (edited) Okay, so I haven't posted in a while. The next chapter will be up soon, most likely tomorrow, but if something weird happens and all Karzahni breaks loose... I have no idea. EDIT: Okay, it's up!EDIT: And now there's chapter 3.EDIT: Chapter 4 is now up, too.EDIT: Chapter 5 is up... and it's getting preeeeetty creepy.EDIT: Man, haven't updated this one for a while. Chapter six is up. Also, I have a surprise that'll come for you later. Might lighten up the monochromatic look of the epic so far. EDIT: Okay, now come read chapter 7 everybody!EDIT: And now chapter 8. BTW if anybody aside from Flaredrick and I is actually reading this epic please leave a comment. While yes I am partly trying to just keep this topic alive I also want to update those who may be really reading this. Edited July 25, 2013 by ToaOfAwesome Quote Herro there, person.How are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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