I almost read the title as Meticulous, but alas, that's not the name.
My favorite part right off the bat is the upper legs. Good job there!
Just in my opinion, the chest looks a little empty. You should try and add some more stuff there, maybe a bit more armoring.
The lower legs, maybe consider revising the feet or adding something to the legs in general? Just a little uneven with the amount of detail in the MOC. Jumps from really detailed upper legs to empty chest, etc.. A smooth transition would look better.
Last but not least, the arms. Maybe consider making the upper arms more of something like the upper legs?
Overall, he looks pretty good, especially considering it's your 3rd MOC here. Like I said, good job!
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