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Dents, Dings and Disasters: REBIRTH

CYOA comic D3 Rebirth D3:R Community Input

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#1 Offline Leraku

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Posted Mar 09 2013 - 12:58 PM

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Welcome. Welcome to a new story, a new beginning. A grand opening. A recreation of events long passed... yet different.[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Welcome to...[/font]

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[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Dents, Dings and Disasters: Rebirth is a CYOA comic, or when not abbreviated, a Choose Your Own Adventure comic.[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]What this means is that it is based on community input. In other words, all readers may send in what they would like to happen next via PM. These sent messages are known as Action Commands [or ACs]. There are some basic rules however:[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]1. Prefix your command with the abbreviation for a character. For instance:[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]LER: Do the thing.[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]or...[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]SOR: Do the other thing.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]2. You can only send commands for characters that are available to be commanded. There will be a list of command-able characters as the story goes on.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]3. Send it in a PM! So as to keep the topic from becoming unnecessarily clogged by simple command posts, and to allow the topic to be used by your actual thoughts on the comic, please use the PM system for commands.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]4. Be creative! Feel free to send in something a bit silly or unusual, to make the story more interesting. At the very least, a character's reaction will be something to look forward to.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]5. Be understanding. As I most likely will be getting multiple ACs at once, I can only pick one or two, depending on the situation. I might not pick yours.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Moving on. The CAMEO SYSTEM.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Cameos are the equivalents of Guest Stars, or Permanent Guest Stars.[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]There are two kinds of Cameos:[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Simple Cameos, and Lasting Cameos, respectively.[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Simple Cameos [SCs] are the equivalent of GSes, and Lasting Cameos [LCs] are the equivalent of PGSes. However: LCs are not always permanent. If you become too inactive with ACs or at the very least responses, I may have to remove your character to make room for others. Also, SCs might not be extremely important to the plot very often, but it is possible they will appear more than once! So keep an eye out.[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]And now, for the template you use to send in to apply for a Cameo:[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Name:[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Spritesheet Link [Xanis only]:[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Powers [if any]:[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Fighting style:[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Weapon[s]:[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Personality:[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Cameo Type [SC or LC]:[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]I will be including a list of LCs, SCs, and Main Characters eventually. I will not accept everyone as LCs, keep in mind![/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]------------------------------[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]...[/font]

 

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[color=#696969;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]???: Ugh.[/color][/font]

[color=#696969;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]???: I always get the night shift...[/color][/font]

[color=#696969;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]???: I'd rather be sleeping. It's so unfair...[/color][/font]

[color=#696969;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]???: I mean, who would be crazy enough to try and sneak in here?[/color][/font]

[color=#696969;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]???: It's such a big compound, and so heavily guarded! We'd have them gunned down in minutes, maybe even seconds![/color][/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=#696969;]???: Pfft...[/color][/font]

 

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[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=#696969;]???: HRK![/color][/font]

[color=#000080;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]???: Shhhh...[/color][/font]

[color=#000080;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]???: That's not very nice, is it?[/color][/font]

[color=#000080;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]???: After all, everyone needs a little crazy to get things done.[/color][/font]

[color=#000080;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]???: Just don't make any more noise, and keep quiet.[/color][/font]

[color=#000080;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]???: Then I won't have to destroy you right now.[/color][/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=#000080;]???: Oh, and don't worry. You'll wake up safely on shore... hopefully.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Posted Image[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Posted Image[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=#000080;]???: No hard feelings. It's just business...[/color][/font]

 

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[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]What's this, now?[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Ah... look at that. A choice.[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Now... who would you choose?[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=#000080;]?LIGHT?[/color] ||| [color=#daa520;]?SHADOW?[/color][/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]What will you do?[/font]


Edited by Leraku, Mar 09 2013 - 01:16 PM.

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#2 Offline Canis Lycaon

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Posted Mar 09 2013 - 06:01 PM

So, the first comic seemed pretty short, but good. Would have been nice to know a bit more about the characters, but otherwise good. I want to GS, but I don't know how to make sprites, so do I have to give one?


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#3 Offline Leraku

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Posted Mar 09 2013 - 06:46 PM

So, the first comic seemed pretty short, but good. Would have been nice to know a bit more about the characters, but otherwise good. I want to GS, but I don't know how to make sprites, so do I have to give one?

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]The first comic is meant to be extremely basic for a beginning - Since it is based on community input, it is up to people who send in ACs to decide who is introduced, and when. So at the moment, there is to be mystery.[/color][/font]

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]As for SCing, yes. You're most likely going to have to try and make sprites, send me the description and hope that I can create a sheet for them eventually, or ask someone else to make one for you.[/color][/font]


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Let's focus on Snail! Snail is the bombdiggity.

 


#4 Offline Captain Caboose

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Posted Mar 09 2013 - 07:19 PM

I'm really loving this comic already. It feels a lot like Crysis. Only send commands via PM correct. Can I send a six-shade for a LC?


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#5 Offline Leraku

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Posted Mar 09 2013 - 07:54 PM

I'm really loving this comic already. It feels a lot like Crysis. Only send commands via PM correct. Can I send a six-shade for a LC?

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]LCs are going to be very limited, and more likely if I actually know the person or if I think up a way I can seriously involve them. You're going to have a much better chance if you choose to be an SC - at least then there's a chance you'll be recurring, although not hugely plot-important.[/color][/font]

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Also: This comic is made in Xanis, so unless you have found a six-shade Xanis sheet, I'm assuming you're referring to six-shade Chimoru. You're going to have to make a kit in Xanis.[/color][/font]


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Let's focus on Snail! Snail is the bombdiggity.

 


#6 Offline Bearcat

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Posted Mar 10 2013 - 12:17 AM

Nice, I very much look forward to this.
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Posted Mar 10 2013 - 03:15 AM

First comic was great. Your graphics are stunning, the scene was dramatic, and the last part was hilarious.

 

Though I sort of read Leraku's lines in the Joker's voice from The Dark Knight. Just the stuff he was saying made me think that.


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#8 Offline Leraku

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Posted Mar 15 2013 - 06:06 PM

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Well, hey guys! Guess who just lost two hours of comic work due to a computer crash causing a corrupted image file?[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]That's right.[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]You probably guessed it.[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Me.[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]So...[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]No comic, yet. Sorry.[/color][/font]


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Let's focus on Snail! Snail is the bombdiggity.

 


#9 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Mar 15 2013 - 08:47 PM

I know how you feel, I spent four hours on a forty seven pannel comic. then my PC crashed right after I finished.


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Posted Mar 17 2013 - 07:14 PM

Yes I do know your feeling well with the computer crashing during a comic that was about finished. I hate PC's, but I will be getting a new computer very very soon, so I shall be happy.

 

I really like the intro logo as I have said before. It gives a slightly futuristic feel and shows you know how to use graphics.  I will be sending my spritesheet to you very soon if I can get my act together. Feel free to virtually punch me in the face. 

 

The introduction was done quite well. I enjoyed it, it was simple and introduced the new Ler very well. It shows off his character with he small amount of dialogue and it's just enough to make readers want to watch this series.

 

For the choice part, I would have put actual sprites of the masks instead of the outlines because, in my opinion. I think it looks a little sloppy and makes a divergence from your overall theme. It isn't really a problem, I just would have changed it to look a little less weird. Just my own preference, that's all.

 

I really enjoyed the intro and I will be sticking with the series (of course).


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Posted Mar 17 2013 - 08:17 PM

Well, this is certainly awesome. I didn't follow the original D3 too closely, but this new series looks like it's going to be a whole lot of cool. B-)


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Posted Mar 28 2013 - 08:06 AM

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"][color=rgb(169,169,169);]LIGHT[/color][/font]

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[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]A wandering repentant makes his way through a grassy plain, his goal in mind.[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]A far more noble goal.[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]A goal embodied by his title.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Whoever you are...[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]-----[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]What will you do?[/font]

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[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]NOTICE: Due to the fact that the PM system seems to be bugged, you may post your ACs in a regular post - but please make sure you have a legitimate post alongside it![/font] EDIT: PMs are working again.


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#13 Offline Leraku

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Posted Apr 04 2013 - 07:11 PM

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[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]WR: Look for secret base.[/font]

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[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]You're pretty sure there is no secret base in this area.[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]You're quite certain there never has been a secret base in this area, and never will be.[/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Nope! No secret base around here![/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]...Well... at least not officially.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]What will you do?[/font]

 

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[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]Sorry about the speckles, Microsoft GIF Animator decided to mess up the quality only on the frames that are around longer.[/font]


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Let's focus on Snail! Snail is the bombdiggity.

 


#14 Offline Captain Caboose

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Posted Apr 04 2013 - 07:13 PM

It doesn't look that bad. Though I do see the speckles.


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Posted Apr 04 2013 - 07:46 PM

what pumpkin?


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#16 Offline BULiK

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Posted Apr 12 2013 - 05:19 PM

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[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]Sorry about the speckles, Microsoft GIF Animator decided to mess up the quality only on the frames that are around longer.[/font]

If you want to make animations without the buggy quality of Microsoft Gif animator, Google some tutorials about making GIfs in GIMP.  It's quite easy and simple, once you know how it works and get the hang of it.


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#17 Offline Leraku

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Posted Apr 12 2013 - 06:28 PM

 

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[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]Sorry about the speckles, Microsoft GIF Animator decided to mess up the quality only on the frames that are around longer.[/font]

If you want to make animations without the buggy quality of Microsoft Gif animator, Google some tutorials about making GIfs in GIMP.  It's quite easy and simple, once you know how it works and get the hang of it.

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]I tried to make the comic a second time before I released it, using gimp. I ended up with a single frame with the blur between the eye movements.[/color][/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]I might try again another time, but I was more worried about actually releasing something.[/color][/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Speaking of releasing, I've only gotten one AC, and I'm waiting to see if anyone else has anything before I actually make the next comic. It is community driven, after all.[/color][/font]


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Let's focus on Snail! Snail is the bombdiggity.

 


#18 Offline Leraku

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Posted Apr 25 2013 - 12:09 PM

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][WR]: Crouch down and scope the area/ [WR]: Do a silly dance[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Posted Image[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Posted Image[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]...Why would you need to crouch in order to look around? You can see things pretty clearly from here. Besides - doing something like that might look suspicious. Which, to be frank, you're not - you're clearly unarmed, after all. You're essentially just someone walking around in a grassy field. And... dancing..? Well... You're not sure how good of an idea that is.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Because clearly walking around in a field and then dancing wildly isn't conspicuous at all.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Honestly. Once you don't go to this secret base (because it obviously doesn't exist) , you will most certainly not have any weapons because how would you get weapons from something that doesn't exist?[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"](In other words, you're going to the secret base to get some weapons.)[/font]

 

[font="'times new roman', times, serif;"]What will you do?[/font]

 

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[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Sorry about the long delay. I've been busy and that business has been sapping my drive to make comics. Thus the copy-pasted background, hopefully to kickstart my creative process again. Seriously though - I would really appreciate ACs. They give me inspiration and ideas for what to do next, and if you can't immediately think of an AC, don't let that stop you from sending one. Just a random idea for what to happen next - send it in a message and describe that it's an 'AC Idea' instead of an AC, and I can try and interpret it into something for the next comic.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]I'd really appreciate it![/color][/font]


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Let's focus on Snail! Snail is the bombdiggity.

 


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Posted May 07 2013 - 03:34 PM

Yay it's back!

 

Anyways, looks like a good start so far. I'll be reading this to see where it ends up.


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#20 Offline Leraku

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Posted May 09 2013 - 02:49 PM

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Just leaving this here as a notice. I'm not working on the comic in huge productive bursts at the moment.[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]I'm going through another 'phase', if you remember some of the early days of the original D3.[/color][/font]

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]I've had an absolute sea of ideas, so that isn't lacking at least.[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]However, I'm still thinking on how to implement them.[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Aside from that, I'm also still trying to find resources to use for specific parts of the comics, mostly landscape like trees, rocks and the like.[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Specifically about this 'phase' is that I really want to make these comics for you all, but as soon as I open up Gimp I suddenly lose my drive and progress slows to a crawl. I hate dissapointing everyone with the fact that I've been having trouble actually making these, despite the fact that I have them planned out.[/color][/font]

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]All of this being said, D3:R will be on a sort of half-hiatus. Meaning that comics will be delayed - they've been like this for awhile, but I decided to make an official announcement about it. It's relatively indefinite, though not forever, but the point is instead of huge bursts of comics, they'll be slowly developed over time. Which might seem pathetic due to the mere 320x240 panel sizing, and short amounts of content, but due to aforementioned reasons, both online and IRL, it can turn out to be harder than it might seem. Not to mention writing things together to make a coherent story that makes sense when looked at altogether.[/color][/font]

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]So... yeah. You'll be seeing plenty more of me, but it'll just be slow.[/color][/font]


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Let's focus on Snail! Snail is the bombdiggity.

 


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Posted Jun 14 2013 - 03:43 PM

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]This is boring. Do something else.[/font]

 

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Oh.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]...Huh. [/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Okay then..?[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Let me just see if I can find someth-[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Posted Image[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,51,102);]-ing for you to...[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,51,153);]OH WHOOPS[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Posted Image[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,204);]HANG ON A SECOND[/color][/font]

 

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[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]NOTHING TO SEE HERE, UH...[/color][/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Just something for... um...[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Look, you're just not supposed to see this yet, okay?[/color][/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Hahaha... let's... heh. Let's go see something else![/color][/font]

 

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[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]What will you do- Wait, what?[/font]


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Let's focus on Snail! Snail is the bombdiggity.

 


#22 Offline The Lonesome Wanderer

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Posted Jun 14 2013 - 09:23 PM

Wait wat.

 

 

 

This topic comes back from the dead with an extra-confusing update.

seems legit.


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Posted Jun 19 2013 - 06:45 PM

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Um...[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Posted Image[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Ahaha... so... okay then. Hey![/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Heh... welcome to my little neck of the Void.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]...I guess you could call it that. A Void. Because... there's not really much outside of our little Observer dimensions.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Posted Image[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]So! What can I get you? Would you like some refreshments?[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Coffee? Tea? Soda? Or dare I say, water?[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]You know, if you wanted to drink. Or could. Because maybe you can't.[/color][/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]How rude of me not to consider.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Did I say welcome? Because you are. You're quite welcome here, my fellow observer.[/color][/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Or observers. That's possible too.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]But... yeah. Generally, I'm not finished with a lot of things here.[/color][/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]And you kind of popped in unexpectedly! I've been busy. Running your own dimension isn't easy, and keeping a comPLETELY new timeline running smoothly isn't the smoothest of rides either! I mean it's not like my previous attempt got completely corrupted and had to be WIPED OUT or anything.[/color][/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]NOPE! HAHAHAHAHA.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]AHA.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]...Haaahhh...[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Sorry.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Posted Image[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Really though. Since I'm so busy trying to get things back on track, it might be a bit until I can open the dimension for your viewing again. Or maybe it won't be. Who knows! A lot of things can happen.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]But... in the meantime, if you have any questions, I could try to answer them. Because I sure as heck know about how complicated this stuff is! And... how some folk don't understand. Since it can be pretty complicated sometimes. Hey, I just said that, didn't I?[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Haaah... yes. I ramble a lot, don't I? Especially when I'm anxious, or trying to change the subject, or being bewildered...[/color][/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]What? 'What was that last part'? Being bewildered. 'The thing before that'? Do you mean being anxious? Because I said that too. What do you mean changing subjects? I'm pretty sure we're on a pretty good subject right now. What are you going on about?[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]...Right, right. Like I was saying. While I go out and fix thi- that is, continue working on the timeline for your viewing, you can ask me some questions. [/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]If you have any! Not saying you do. Or don't. But, if you do. You can feel free to ask.[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]What will you do? I have no idea what's going on, but, okay?[/font]


Edited by Leraku, Jun 19 2013 - 06:55 PM.

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#24 Offline The Lonesome Wanderer

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Posted Jun 19 2013 - 08:51 PM

Does the observer like pie?


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Posted Jun 19 2013 - 08:55 PM

 

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]So! What can I get you? Would you like some refreshments?[/color][/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=rgb(0,102,255);]Coffee? Tea? Soda? Or dare I say, water?[/color][/font]

 

 

I could go for some coffee right now.


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#26 Offline Terra Nuva

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Posted Jun 20 2013 - 07:23 PM

"What does reworking an entire universe feel like?"


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Posted Jun 23 2013 - 07:06 AM

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Computer issues rear their ugly heads once more![/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Don't worry, though, I have the next comic planned out already. As soon as I can get my computer stable again (or at least copy over the files to this one, aka my spare) I'll try and make the comic.[/color][/font]

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Also, if you haven't noticed - I've finally figured out how to make animations with GIMP. Hooray! Now we have achieved better quality in the animations.[/color][/font]


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#28 Offline Axilus Prime

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Posted Jun 23 2013 - 07:13 AM

That was funny, and that GIF was amazing.

 

Your comic quality has improved even more.


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Posted Jul 03 2013 - 07:49 AM

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]The Lonesome Wanderer: Does the Observer like pie?[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Posted Image[/font]

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Mmmmebeh.[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]That is, maybe I would if I was capable of actually eating it.[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Since my face is essentially a screen, despite that it's not electronic.[/color][/font]

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Or maybe I wouldn't. I frankly don't know.[/color][/font]

 

 

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Windrider: I could go for some coffee right now.[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Posted Image[/font]

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Certainly.[/color][/font]

 

 

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Terra Nuva: What does reworking an entire universe feel like?[/font]

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]Posted Image[/font]

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]...[/color][/font]

 

[color=#0066ff;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]SORRY. ONE MOMENT.[/color][/font]

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=#0066ff;]I'll just get another mug...[/color] to replace[/font] this...

 

[font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"][color=#0066ff;]NEXT QUESTIONS.[/color][/font]

 

[color=#000000;][font="'courier new', courier, monospace;"]----------[/color][/font]

 

Sorry! No fancy shiny shading today. I wanted to make sure I got this out there before my computer started acting up again, but it's slowly progressing towards functioning stably once more.


Edited by Leraku, Jul 03 2013 - 07:50 AM.

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Posted Jul 03 2013 - 11:36 AM

Last one was funny following Windrider.

 

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Posted Nov 12 2013 - 05:35 PM

-Accidental Edit-based Old Comic Snip, look below.- [font="'courier new';"]So... hey.[/font][font="'courier new';"]Wow.[/font][font="'courier new';"]Been a long time, hasn't it?[/font][font="'courier new';"]Multiple hiatus(es?), several board downtimes, a few computer crashes.[/font] [font="'courier new';"]This comic's been pretty short-lived, huh? No ACs on this end after that last update, which was lost alongside some other things, I think.[/font] [font="'courier new';"]Anyhow...[/font] [font="'courier new';"]I think this is gonna be the end of D3. And D3:R.[/font][font="'courier new';"]I've lost my inspiration for the story, I can't think of anything new for it. It's a community-driven comic, so that's part of the problem.[/font][font="'courier new';"]Furthermore, I just seemed to lose track of how the story was going to go - it was mostly wavering ideas, nothing solid, in the first place, to allow for some flexibility. Plus things were just getting too... serious.[/font] [font="'courier new';"]Go back and look at the original D3 sometime, notice how it was more lighthearted originally.[/font][font="'courier new';"]I think that was better for it.[/font] [font="'courier new';"]So... It may seem a bit unusual, but here we are (again, it's always such a pleasure).[/font][font="'courier new';"]The end of D3.[/font] [font="'courier new';"]I've been pretty busy lately, but I am planning something much more... bionicle-based. Rather than my crazy whatever-the-heck it has been.[/font] [font="'courier new';"]I'm not sure when it'll come out, or what it'll be called. I'll need to set things up. But don't expect to see me or my characters (Excluding Vee, if I need to take an 'author presence' in, say, an announcement comic) in it. It's still going to be a CYOA, but it'll be very different. Anyways, I'd like to remnicise a bit.[/font] [font="'courier new';"]D3 was my biggest success in comic-making. Good chunk of pages, good memories... the best being when it miraculously reached the frontpage, being the second comic to ever do so.[/font] [font="'courier new';"]Man, that was great.[/font] [font="'courier new';"]But even good things must come to an end, so... I won't be leaving, keep that in mind. It's just this comic.[/font] [font="'courier new';"]I've been around, I just haven't been able to think up anything good and constructive to add to any topics, so I've stuck out of it.[/font] [font="'courier new';"]Anyways, look forward to that. A brand-spanking-new comic from me, sometime in the future. Hopefully. So get your imagination-boxes (or whatever that thing in your head is, because calling them brains is boring) ready to go, I'll be needing ACs for that once it starts. Oh, and by the way. You can be as silly as you want. Yes. It's gonna be one of those CYOAs.[/font] [font="'courier new';"]So, TTFN (Ta-Ta-For-Now, if you've apparently never heard of the wonderful thing that are Tiggers, since he's the only one.)[/font] [font="'courier new';"]-Leraku[/font]

 

 

 

[color=#b22222;]Edit: Double post merged, but to the latest post date.[/color]

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Posted Nov 15 2013 - 08:22 PM

End of an era. I was proud to see the original D3 get a spot on the front page way back when.

I am glad that you have something else in the works; I have no doubt that it will be equally engaging as your other work. But Comics isn't what it used to be - I say that, but I don't want to discourage you. It's simply, well, a warning.

 

Keep doing your best, though, and I will keep doing mine. I will get Comics back on its feet one day, and I hope to see your work then.


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Posted Dec 27 2013 - 10:10 AM

It's dead, Jim.

This topic is finito!

It was fun having you all here, but it's time to move on... to a new experiment.

 

(Please close the topic. Thanks!)


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Posted Dec 27 2013 - 12:00 PM

I am definitely going to miss this, but I'm looking forward to see what new experiment you're working on.


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Posted Dec 27 2013 - 02:57 PM

Oops, didn't see the new posts.

 

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