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Unfinished 3D Model of Pre-Karda Nui Gorast

Torso Blender 3D Unfinished Makuta Gorast

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#1 Offline ToaOfAwesome

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Posted Apr 07 2013 - 07:36 PM

Okay, so I've been working on a 3D model of Makuta Gorast before she was transformed in the swamps of Karda Nui. It isn't done yet, all I have is the torso, but that, aside from the head, is the first thing on a character that you notice, so I would like some critique on it. I've been trying to get a realistic and movie-style look, so I've been using reference images of a female muscular system and building off of them. Hope you like these pics!

 

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Well, that's it. Critique is not only welcomed, but highly encouraged.


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#2 Offline Watcher on the Walls

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Posted Apr 07 2013 - 08:38 PM

I'm not too sure if this is allowed, but I'll still review it. Looks ok so far, but are you aiming for a more humanlike style? IMO it looks too humanlike for a Makuta. Anyway, I'd like to see the finished version when it's done, so I can get a better look at it.
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Posted Apr 07 2013 - 09:21 PM

i wish i knew how do use blender (All i know is photoshop, after affects, cinema 4d and sony vegas)! :(

Anyways it looks really cool, i like the design of the torso and idk takua, i like the humanized form of makuta. It remind me of the human Kiina, but anyways great work so far and i would love to see the finished product! Also are you gong to but some of her key set features into the model? Like the color scheme, maybe some sort of claw weapon or winged armor?


Edited by bonesiii, Apr 07 2013 - 11:10 PM.
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#4 Offline ToaOfAwesome

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Posted Apr 07 2013 - 09:48 PM

Yes, I am. However there will be more charcoal black than green. Also, I always felt her wings looked like katanas, so I'm giving her those instead of claws. Granted, she will still have pointy fingertips like Roodaka in WoS. Also, I think I MIGHT give her wings, but either way she will have some way to achieve flight. Also, I have no idea how to use the things you listed, so I guess we're even.  ;) Also, I've been drawing in a notebook trying to come up with a concept for an pre-mutated Kanohi Felnas, and I think I got a pretty good one, so maybe in my next post I'll put up a 3D model of that. Lastly, (I've said a lot) I meant to include that not only is she pre-mutation, but she is also before the "evolution", so she will have organic muscle tissue, which is an absolute charm to make (that was a strange mix between utter sarcasm and absolute truth).


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Posted Apr 08 2013 - 03:05 PM

It looks awesome! I would recommend making the back arch a little.


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#6 Offline ToaOfAwesome

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Posted Apr 08 2013 - 03:07 PM

Um, well I'm making it in Blender. I'm not sure what Picasa is.


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Posted Apr 08 2013 - 03:16 PM

Sorry, I edited my post after I read the previous ones.


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#8 Offline ToaOfAwesome

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Posted Apr 08 2013 - 04:59 PM

Oh, okay. Anyway, yeah, I was trying to get a good arch in there, but it didn't really turn out the way I meant it to. I'll keep trying, though.


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Posted Apr 08 2013 - 07:46 PM

From the General Art Rules & Guidelines:

No teaser topics. By teaser here I mean posting such barebones early-sketchy version of unfinished art that you're not really showing the art at all, or showing highly vague edits of your art and demanding posts before you reveal the clear version, etc.


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