Chro Posted April 8, 2013 Share Posted April 8, 2013 (edited) Ah, time. Ironic, isn't it?One of the few things that we cannot control, yet surrounds us always.Endymeron was, or will be, the opposite.You don't see him. You might and you might've. He's never there. He was, though, and he will be.Endymeron is never the present. In fact, he never was nor will be the present.He's the future and the past. Johmak, Order of Mata Nui - Guide to Anomalous Entitieshttp://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/358197http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8107/8631937065_3bca8eecf4.jpg Yes, it's a Toa of Time.Not really any backstory, just the semi-cryptic blurb up there, which is complete gibberish written when bored.However, I did decide that if I were to give him more information, he'd wear a Mask of Possibilities, which in my opinion would be quite fitting of a Toa of Time; very, very useful for manipulating events. :lol:Slightly inspired by Embo from SWTCW. Feedback is appreciated. I've posted a lot of other MOCs recently, but I don't want to advertise-spam, so you can just find them in the BBC section. More MOCs coming soon! Edit: Image linked - please keep posted images in BBC to 100 kB.-Wind- Edited April 9, 2013 by -Windrider- save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hitoshura Posted April 9, 2013 Share Posted April 9, 2013 I like how you made the legs. The torso is pretty interesting, like how you added all those pieces. The staff, maybe you could add a bit more things to it, but yeah. profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted April 9, 2013 Author Share Posted April 9, 2013 Thanks TK7. I felt that the staff had enough as it was, between the trans lime bars, the gold blade, and the, uh, squiggly dark orange section. XD save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zacian Posted April 9, 2013 Share Posted April 9, 2013 Man that was so awesome. I like the arms and the torso. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted April 9, 2013 Author Share Posted April 9, 2013 Thanks TOUAB. I've been told that the torso wasn't that great, so it's nice to hear some positive feedback. save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted April 9, 2013 Share Posted April 9, 2013 Wow. Just, wow. The design reminds me of an idea I tried to make work some months ago, but I scrapped it because I had no idea what I was doing. But this. Like everything else you've made, this is great! The color scheme gives it that feel of menace and mystery. Definitely doesn't look like the kind of guy I'd want to meet in a back alley.The overall build is excellent, but what I really like is how you did the head. Clever idea for the eyes. The staff is also pretty cool!I look forward to your next creation. ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted April 9, 2013 Author Share Posted April 9, 2013 Thank you! Wasn't going for a menacing feel- just powerful and mysterious- but I see what you mean. The eyes and face have a similar technique to another MOC from a few months ago (Project Blackstomper)... I'd really like how it looked, and I needed to use a custom head for the MOC, so it lined up well. save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanakalackin Posted April 9, 2013 Share Posted April 9, 2013 I like the flexibility of the MoC. The only thing I don't like is the "face" I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rooster Nui Posted April 17, 2013 Share Posted April 17, 2013 Design is a well done, color scheme is unique and represents both Vahi states (before and after falling into protodermis). Pretty awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted April 17, 2013 Author Share Posted April 17, 2013 The only thing I don't like is the "face"What about it? His mask is shaped more like a helmet, perhaps. (I was getting extra points for the contest by using a custom head, if it means anything. ) Design is a well done, color scheme is unique and represents both Vahi states (before and after falling into protodermis). Pretty awesome. Thanks Rooster. That's actually dark orange, not regular orange, but I see what you mean about the colors. save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumiki Posted April 18, 2013 Share Posted April 18, 2013 The lower legs are the only thing I can critique - they seem to jut out a bit too much, and the trans-lime pieces at the ankles contribute to that. Aside from that (which isn't evident but in close-ups), I really quite like the MOC - the bulk is spread out, and though it has quite a few colors, they're spread out evenly enough to work. avatar by Lady Kopaka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted April 18, 2013 Author Share Posted April 18, 2013 Thanks for the feedback, Sumiki. You're right, the leg armor did protrude a bit much. Glad the colors work, I wasn't sure if the light grey was a bit much. save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ambassador Rahkuta Posted May 8, 2013 Share Posted May 8, 2013 (edited) Sweet build, as usual. Again, as usual, the head is freaking magnificent.I feel the orange is throwing it off a bit (though that might just be the lighting- and I'm generally biased against orange, so you should probably just ignore the color critique). The lower legs stick out to the sides a bit. The groin armor cover is a little high.8.5/10 at least (which I would rate higher normally, but I've been biased by your other builds like, Shellshock and Likus, into a rather high regard for your work).(Still drooling.) Edited May 8, 2013 by Ambassador Rahkuta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted May 9, 2013 Author Share Posted May 9, 2013 Haha, thanks Rahkuta. 8.5 isn't bad, at least compared to Likus, etc. save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumiki Posted May 9, 2013 Share Posted May 9, 2013 Sweet build, as usual. Again, as usual, the head is freaking magnificent.I feel the orange is throwing it off a bit (though that might just be the lighting- and I'm generally biased against orange, so you should probably just ignore the color critique). The lower legs stick out to the sides a bit. The groin armor cover is a little high.8.5/10 at least (which I would rate higher normally, but I've been biased by your other builds like, Shellshock and Likus, into a rather high regard for your work).(Still drooling.) Please do not post in topics that have been inactive for 20 days or more. I have to wrestle the topic with my bare hands until it is subdued, then ... dispose of it. (There's a reason they only pick mad people to be staff, y'know.) I had my nice new shirt on too; dry cleaners can never fully get topic juice out. I guess that's the price we pay for this job. Topic sent to sleep with the fishes and dream about farm animals. avatar by Lady Kopaka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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