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#1 Offline Hatty Hattington

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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 02:33 PM

My current Self-MOC. One of the supporting protagonists for TRIBES. Gumshoe in Best Laid Plans. Shapeshifting Tribal dude in the future.

 

When I'm doing galleries like this in the future, it will almost always be outside, since Natural light is better than my studio lights...

 

Without further adieu...

 

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Nameless Sword

Voidwalker

Abyssal Chain

Abyssal Chain Fired

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Wings Front

Wings Full

Wings Back

Wings Back Back

Final Shot

 

Hope you've enjoyed, Comments and Constructive Criticism welcome! =D


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#2 Offline AdaptingChaos

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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 02:51 PM

I really like the arm design! As well as the chain! The wings however I think could use some armor maybe (if possible)? But still great moc tho :)


Edited by AdaptingChaos, Apr 09 2013 - 02:52 PM.

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#3 Offline Hatty Hattington

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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 02:53 PM

Haha, The wings are supposed to be more feathery over leathery, but It does looks like they need more "feathers".

 

Maybe the next update I give him, I'll have had worked around that problem. =D


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#4 Offline Watcher on the Walls

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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 03:09 PM

Interesting chest design. The wings are pretty nice, but look a bit thin. Maybe you could make the sword more "unique", like adding a bit more things to it, but looks great so far.
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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 03:34 PM

Another Darksider's fan, I presume? :P 

That's an awesome MOC you got there...kinda reminds me of DEATH from the sequel given his very lean yet menacing appearance. 

Two things to point out though:

1) The wings could use a bit of fierceness-I guess curved blades (such as the ones used on the sword) might do the trick...or black Brutaka blades..y'know..to get the Shadow Flight wings appearance if that's what you're going for...or maybe the blades first used on Furno 3.0's bird wings or Raw-Jaw's tusks? you could do very interesting things with them.

2) The shoulders could use some dimensions...I know how weird this sounds but the torso build is too flat this way.

But anyways, keep up the good work!! And stay a fan of Darksiders if you are...there's (sadly) not much of us out there :/ :/

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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 03:40 PM

Another Darksider's fan, I presume? :P

That's an awesome MOC you got there...kinda reminds me of DEATH from the sequel given his very lean yet menacing appearance. 

Two things to point out though:

1) The wings could use a bit of fierceness-I guess curved blades (such as the ones used on the sword) might do the trick...or black Brutaka blades..y'know..to get the Shadow Flight wings appearance if that's what you're going for...or maybe the blades first used on Furno 3.0's bird wings or Raw-Jaw's tusks? you could do very interesting things with them.

2) The shoulders could use some dimensions...I know how weird this sounds but the torso build is too flat this way.

But anyways, keep up the good work!! And stay a fan of Darksiders if you are...there's (sadly) not much of us out there :/ :/

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Haha, Varren wasn't based off of Death, he actually was my attempt at creating my body shape... Tall and Thin. =P

 

I'm not trying to go for Shadow Flight, it's supposed to appear as natural, feathery wings. Like, the kind you see on birds. The suggestions you gave me for the wings were awesome, but I don't have them in the right color (Furno's wings), and I don't have anything from Raw-Jaw.

 

The shoulders are going to be lengthened in terms of width, it's far too skinny in the middle of the upper arm. As for the shoulders and Torso... I don't think I understand what you're talking about, The torso build isn't very flat, neither is the shoulders. D=


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#7 Offline Mohamed Marei

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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 05:38 PM

Well, 

 

Another Darksider's fan, I presume? :P

That's an awesome MOC you got there...kinda reminds me of DEATH from the sequel given his very lean yet menacing appearance. 

Two things to point out though:

1) The wings could use a bit of fierceness-I guess curved blades (such as the ones used on the sword) might do the trick...or black Brutaka blades..y'know..to get the Shadow Flight wings appearance if that's what you're going for...or maybe the blades first used on Furno 3.0's bird wings or Raw-Jaw's tusks? you could do very interesting things with them.

2) The shoulders could use some dimensions...I know how weird this sounds but the torso build is too flat this way.

But anyways, keep up the good work!! And stay a fan of Darksiders if you are...there's (sadly) not much of us out there :/ :/

:tohu:

Haha, Varren wasn't based off of Death, he actually was my attempt at creating my body shape... Tall and Thin. =P

 

I'm not trying to go for Shadow Flight, it's supposed to appear as natural, feathery wings. Like, the kind you see on birds. The suggestions you gave me for the wings were awesome, but I don't have them in the right color (Furno's wings), and I don't have anything from Raw-Jaw.

 

The shoulders are going to be lengthened in terms of width, it's far too skinny in the middle of the upper arm. As for the shoulders and Torso... I don't think I understand what you're talking about, The torso build isn't very flat, neither is the shoulders. D=

 What I meant by the "flatness" was the kind of bare upper back near the shoulder area. 

I'll show you what I mean:

http://www.brickshel...hn_self_moc.jpg

I know it might cause some problems when you add the wings on, so you might want to look for an alternative.

Hope this helps!

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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 05:45 PM

I see what you mean, but I'm hesitant to do so. Mostly because it won't look well, as the armor isn't supposed to look that way...

 

I'll look into it, and see If I can find something to represent shoulder blades.


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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 09:36 PM

[font="Palatino;"]I like the articulation here, and larger MOCs generally afford better opportunities for including more. Some parts still look bare-bones, though, especially the middle chest and elbows. You may have to sacrifice some torso articulation just to fill it all out, and the elbows could use a little more armoring. (Those half-stud buffers on the side of the shoulder might be the perfect spots to use some more parts and really flesh that out.)[/font]
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#10 Offline Hatty Hattington

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Posted Apr 10 2013 - 08:51 AM

The elbows are always the tricky part. The gaps in the wings and the elbows are the being things me an' Marko are trying to work out...

 

If you have a good way to fix the elbows, can you show me a picture please? I'm not good with worded descriptions. D=


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#11 Offline Tecnokua The Fedora Mudki

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Posted Apr 12 2013 - 05:59 PM

I really like that hand design i really want to know how you did it


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#12 Offline Hatty Hattington

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Posted Apr 12 2013 - 06:19 PM

Haha, It's a really simply design =P

 

If you want, I can make instructions, and give them to you =3


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#13 Offline Tecnokua The Fedora Mudki

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Posted Apr 12 2013 - 09:32 PM

Thxs that would be really handy all my hands i make are bulky.


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