Another Darksider's fan, I presume?
That's an awesome MOC you got there...kinda reminds me of DEATH from the sequel given his very lean yet menacing appearance.
Two things to point out though:
1) The wings could use a bit of fierceness-I guess curved blades (such as the ones used on the sword) might do the trick...or black Brutaka blades..y'know..to get the Shadow Flight wings appearance if that's what you're going for...or maybe the blades first used on Furno 3.0's bird wings or Raw-Jaw's tusks? you could do very interesting things with them.
2) The shoulders could use some dimensions...I know how weird this sounds but the torso build is too flat this way.
But anyways, keep up the good work!! And stay a fan of Darksiders if you are...there's (sadly) not much of us out there :/ :/
Haha, Varren wasn't based off of Death, he actually was my attempt at creating my body shape... Tall and Thin. =P
I'm not trying to go for Shadow Flight, it's supposed to appear as natural, feathery wings. Like, the kind you see on birds. The suggestions you gave me for the wings were awesome, but I don't have them in the right color (Furno's wings), and I don't have anything from Raw-Jaw.
The shoulders are going to be lengthened in terms of width, it's far too skinny in the middle of the upper arm. As for the shoulders and Torso... I don't think I understand what you're talking about, The torso build isn't very flat, neither is the shoulders. D=