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The Feline Chronicles

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#161 Offline Matoran Oneker

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Posted Apr 22 2012 - 08:39 AM

Sorry about that Wind.Here's the new comic again! Click here!But this time I put some different scenes in.
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Posted Apr 22 2012 - 11:24 AM

Sorry about that Wind.Here's the new comic again! Click here!But this time I put some different scenes in.

Geez. if she doesn't shut up, I'll eat her soul!

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Posted Apr 22 2012 - 11:32 AM

Ahem, if anyone is eating souls, it will be ME
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#164 Offline Matoran Oneker

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Posted Apr 22 2012 - 05:23 PM

Here the next comic! Click here!I made the comic quick again for some reason.
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Posted Apr 22 2012 - 07:27 PM

Here the next comic! Click here!I made the comic quick again for some reason.

That's a lot of hair...

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#166 Offline Matoran Oneker

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Posted Apr 23 2012 - 11:50 AM

Have I made the Hair too big?I think I'll make it shorter in the next comic.
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#167 Offline Toa Varova

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Posted Apr 23 2012 - 02:50 PM

Have I made the Hair too big?I think I'll make it shorter in the next comic.

It's fine. Just saying.

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Posted Apr 23 2012 - 03:10 PM

that is an abnormally large hair sample.
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#169 Offline Matoran Oneker

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Posted Apr 23 2012 - 04:46 PM

Ok here's the next comic! Click Here!I don't know if it makes sense.
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Posted Apr 23 2012 - 04:57 PM

Her voice annoys me....Wait...that doesn't make sense...The suspense builds
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#171 Offline Matoran Oneker

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Posted Apr 24 2012 - 08:23 AM

Ok next comic! Click here!I'm hoping to finish this Saga soon.

Edited by Feline Oneker, Apr 24 2012 - 08:24 AM.

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Posted Apr 24 2012 - 09:26 AM

Ok next comic! Click here!I'm hoping to finish this Saga soon.

Now put it on his finger! *evil, twisted grin*

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#173 Offline Matoran Oneker

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Posted May 04 2012 - 02:26 AM

OK here are the new comics!Click here!Click here!Glad that BZPower is finally back up!
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Posted May 04 2012 - 03:24 AM

Nice work on the comic. Leyya is still my favorite character. Nice way to move along the story arc. The graphics are great, the story so far is awesome, and the jokes are great as well. I think one of my favourite lines was 'Good thing I sometimes come prepared', that made me laugh.Nice job on the comics and keep up the good work,~Soran
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#175 Offline Toa Varova

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Posted May 04 2012 - 02:14 PM

OK here are the new comics!Click here!Click here!Glad that BZPower is finally back up!

Animal abuse. Darn Ahkmou.And yay! Fight scene! Ahk is good as cat food!

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#176 Offline Matoran Oneker

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Posted May 04 2012 - 03:03 PM

Ok heres the next comic! Click here!You should listen to music while I reading it.You don't have to if you don't want.

Edited by Feline Oneker, May 04 2012 - 03:04 PM.

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Posted May 04 2012 - 03:09 PM

Akmou just got served.Nice job on the comic. The fight scene was intense and the graphics were astounding aswell, nice job!Keep up the good work,~Soran
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Posted May 04 2012 - 03:11 PM

Ok heres the next comic! Click here!You should listen to music while I reading it.You don't have to if you don't want.

Epic fight scene! I bet 1 trillion widgets for Ahkmou's defeat!

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Posted May 04 2012 - 03:42 PM

*teleports above ahkmou, and falls without using density control to slow fall until hitting the sand, crushing him beneath three tons of protosteel* Hey Ahkmou! Can I buy a kolhii ball? How about a Lucky Ghekula?
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Posted May 04 2012 - 05:48 PM

Next comic! Click here!
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Posted May 04 2012 - 11:34 PM

Begin "stop hitting yourself stop hitting yourself!"
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Posted May 05 2012 - 09:54 AM

Next comic! Click here!

Shoe it down his throat and beat him into oblivion!

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#183 Offline Matoran Oneker

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Posted May 05 2012 - 11:58 AM

I think I'll choose Ptole's idea.Next Comic! Click here!
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Posted May 05 2012 - 02:40 PM

I think I'll choose Ptole's idea.Next Comic! Click here!

WOW!Sorry I haven't posted recently.The last few comics are SO epic.Oneker is so kick butt in those comics.It was funny when he kept on saying "Why are you hitting yourself".

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Posted May 05 2012 - 03:04 PM

I thought the comic was entertaining. I also liked the 'Stop hitting yourself' part. I think my favorite thing in the comic was how sybre's sword couldn't fit the panel. I thought that was hilarious. Once again, another great comic.Keep up the good work,~Soran
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#186 Offline Matoran Oneker

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Posted May 05 2012 - 04:37 PM

I think I'll choose Ptole's idea.Next Comic! Click here!

WOW!Sorry I haven't posted recently.The last few comics are SO epic.Oneker is so kick butt in those comics.It was funny when he kept on saying "Why are you hitting yourself".

Thanks!I think you mean "Stop hitting yourself"

I thought the comic was entertaining. I also liked the 'Stop hitting yourself' part. I think my favorite thing in the comic was how sybre's sword couldn't fit the panel. I thought that was hilarious. Once again, another great comic.Keep up the good work,~Soran

Thanks again!oh and here's the next comic! Click here!Shall I end this Saga now or do a add a few more comics to it?

Edited by Feline Oneker, May 05 2012 - 04:45 PM.

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Posted May 06 2012 - 09:51 AM

I think I'll choose Ptole's idea.Next Comic! Click here!

Now Ahkmou knows what cages feel like! And one cool thing you could have done was have Ahkmou bang on the top of the panel.

I think I'll choose Ptole's idea.Next Comic! Click here!

WOW!Sorry I haven't posted recently.The last few comics are SO epic.Oneker is so kick butt in those comics.It was funny when he kept on saying "Why are you hitting yourself".

Thanks!I think you mean "Stop hitting yourself"

I thought the comic was entertaining. I also liked the 'Stop hitting yourself' part. I think my favorite thing in the comic was how sybre's sword couldn't fit the panel. I thought that was hilarious. Once again, another great comic.Keep up the good work,~Soran

Thanks again!oh and here's the next comic! Click here!Shall I end this Saga now or do a add a few more comics to it?

We're going to split the reward, right? Right?I suggest you start a new saga for the alien part.

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Posted May 06 2012 - 04:03 PM

What a nice ending to a story arc, great job. I also like the cliff hanger at the end. This just isn't Oneker's day... First captured to be a entertainment animal, and now about to be captured for whatever reasons.Nice job on the comics and keep up the good work,~Soran
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Posted May 06 2012 - 04:28 PM

you could do this as another story arc in between, where one is your life returning to normal, and then they catch you
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Posted May 08 2012 - 10:42 AM

New Comic! Click here!Had to get every character/PGS to know about my Cat form in the story.Should I introduce some dog characters later on the comics or not? :???:

Edited by Feline Oneker, May 08 2012 - 10:47 AM.

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Posted May 08 2012 - 01:00 PM

New Comic! Click here!Had to get every character/PGS to know about my Cat form in the story.Should I introduce some dog characters later on the comics or not? :???:

Nice move, Oneker! You could have gotten yourself killed! And I curse thy name, Calvirick!And yes, do dog characters!

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Nothing could prepare Sybre for the final battle.

 

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Posted May 08 2012 - 03:05 PM

New Comic! Click here!Had to get every character/PGS to know about my Cat form in the story.Should I introduce some dog characters later on the comics or not? :???:

Nice move, Oneker! You could have gotten yourself killed! And I curse thy name, Calvirick!And yes, do dog characters!

Forgot to mention that the ear design on my cat sprite has been changed.

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Posted May 08 2012 - 03:19 PM

GASP! Wait...I knew this already....*loads USP .45*I have nothing against cats. nothing at all....nope, not a thing...
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Posted May 08 2012 - 03:25 PM

well then. now i suppose that, since your secret is out, youll have to do a MIB arc. oh this will be fun. shall i bring my hacked M82? i've increased the bore diameter and the calibur to .950 JDJ.
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Posted May 08 2012 - 03:58 PM

New Comic! Click here!Had to get every character/PGS to know about my Cat form in the story.Should I introduce some dog characters later on the comics or not? :???:

Nice move, Oneker! You could have gotten yourself killed! And I curse thy name, Calvirick!And yes, do dog characters!

Forgot to mention that the ear design on my cat sprite has been changed.

I liked your old ear design better. The old ears looked more like cat ears.

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Posted May 11 2012 - 05:55 PM

Right, time to start the next Saga.New Comic! Click here!I followed a speech bubble tutorial on Sorans Majhost acount.
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Posted May 11 2012 - 06:03 PM

Right, time to start the next Saga.New Comic! Click here!I followed a speech bubble tutorial on Sorans Majhost acount.

NO! Not Cousin Milly! Anything but her!And I saw Ahkmou's arm in there, you scamp! :DI have an annoying cousin. Just like a male rainbow Leyya!

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Posted May 11 2012 - 06:04 PM

I liked the comic. Its one of those cliff hanger kind and it just makes you wonder whats wrong with her cousin. I think funniest part of the comics was the fact that you kept Akmou's arm and you're using it as a back scratcher. Its just hilarious.Nice job on the speech bubbles as well, they look really good. Couple suggestions though, make sure the text is centered so its not all on one side. Also, for the panels you have a lot of text in bubbles and you have spare space, make the head of the character go over the bubble.~Soran(I'm glad that I didn't make that tutorial for nothing.)

Edited by Soran, May 11 2012 - 06:05 PM.

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Posted May 12 2012 - 12:31 PM

I liked the comic. Its one of those cliff hanger kind and it just makes you wonder whats wrong with her cousin. I think funniest part of the comics was the fact that you kept Akmou's arm and you're using it as a back scratcher. Its just hilarious.

Would it be great for getting the fleas out with it? :Panyways here's the next comic! Click here!

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Posted May 12 2012 - 12:56 PM

Nice job on the comic, it really helped with explaining who she is. I also like the things with the speech bubbles. Although I noticed that the rounded rectangle ones are very pixelated. It looks like your at Antialiasing is turned off. Other then that the comic looks great and its quite well done! Nice job!~Soran
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