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Vohan, Master of Time

Vohan Master Time MoC Toa Alpha

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#1 Offline The Malicious Phantom

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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 07:32 PM

"If you destroy my mask, you will destroy the future..."

 

-Vohan to Sandstorm at the very VERY end of my epic.

 

Meet Vohan, the Toa of Time and honorary member of the Toa Alpha. I never got a Vahi, so, I just used Pohatu's '08 mask. I mean, it looks the part.

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Edited by Phantom Terror, Apr 10 2013 - 07:47 PM.

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#2 Offline ChroXumo

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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 08:30 PM

Pretty simple build. I like the idea of the forearms, though I suggest trying to fix the gap there. He looks a little chubby with those Nuva shoulders there. :3


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#3 Offline Watcher on the Walls

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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 08:39 PM

Like Chro said, he looks simple, like his torso is too similar to Vezon's, and the Nuva armor kind of looks unnecessary. The armor on the shins and arms are quite interesting. I know you were going for a Vahi, but the Pohatu mask looks too big and wide on him.
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#4 Offline Sumiki

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Posted Apr 09 2013 - 09:28 PM

[font="Palatino;"]I'm curious as to why you put that gold Nuva shoulder armor on the hilt of the staff. Since it's not anywhere else (and would most likely clash with the orange) your best bet would be to replace it with a silver one or remove it altogether.I like the integration of the HF parts but the armor used there seems kind of skimpy. I'd replace those with slightly larger ones if possible.The torso would probably look better off without the Nuva shoulder armor on the hips. That would look good if integrated onto a larger MOC, but they just sort of jut out here.[/font]
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#5 Online Jam Pot

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Posted Apr 10 2013 - 03:22 AM

Nice arm design, although the hips are a bit wide and unseemly. I especially like the way you've used the Phantoka Kakama for a Vahi - I know it's been done before, but it seems to fit nicely, as if saying Vakama's one was the older, more austere version with history to it, and then this is a next-gen, futuristic one.

 

You know, I too made a Toa of Time called Vohan, several years ago...


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#6 Offline Tornado

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Posted Apr 11 2013 - 06:15 PM

It looks great! I can't see anything wrong with it.

 

 

 

[color=#b22222;]Edit: Even if you can't find anything wrong with it, please try to be more specific in your praise![/color]

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Edited by -Windrider-, Apr 11 2013 - 06:21 PM.

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#7 Offline Canis Lycaon

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Posted Apr 11 2013 - 07:18 PM

Hmm. Looks good overall, but the waist seems much too big.


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