Van Hohenheim Posted April 17, 2013 Share Posted April 17, 2013 review topic for http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=9469 < that epic. Quote Previously known as Aiwendil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clue: The Traitor Posted April 30, 2013 Share Posted April 30, 2013 Well the story was nice but you have to be careful with your writing. The first letter in Vahki is supposed to be in caps. Example: The vahki came. because he ate their sandwiches. See? Next time be careful with that. Quote The one who hunts your soul. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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