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UnSung Hero: Review topic

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#1 Offline Van Hohenheim

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Posted Apr 17 2013 - 12:06 PM

review topic for http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=9469 < that epic. 

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#2 Offline Clue: The Traitor

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Posted Apr 30 2013 - 06:54 AM

Well the story was nice but you have to be careful with your writing. The first letter in Vahki is supposed to be in caps.




The [color=#ff0000;]vahki[/color] came.  [color=#ff0000;]because [/color]he ate their sandwiches.


See? Next time be careful with that.

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