review topic for http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=9469 < that epic.
UnSung Hero: Review topic
Posted Apr 17 2013 - 12:06 PM
Posted Apr 30 2013 - 06:54 AM
Well the story was nice but you have to be careful with your writing. The first letter in Vahki is supposed to be in caps.
The [color=#ff0000;]vahki[/color] came. [color=#ff0000;]because [/color]he ate their sandwiches.
See? Next time be careful with that.
The one who hunts your soul.
0 user(s) are browsing this forum
0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users