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#1 Offline Hatty Hattington

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Posted Apr 24 2013 - 02:15 PM

Since this is my first post in Comics forum... I feel like I should do some explaining. TRIBES has been my big project since the start of the year. When I started on this series, I had three options for publishing the series. I could make a stop-motion animation, a written story, or a comic series. Being as indecisive as usual, I picked all three. The main TRIBES series is the comics, however, there are short little stories out there among my things... 1-1 is the first comic, in the first season. This comic was originally posted on FlickR and DA, which explains a shoutout on page five. This isn't a very serious comic, it's actually childish. So... Don't take it too seriously please. The other comics getting better in story, seriousness, MOCs, etc. On the background of the story, which isn't explained in the comic... TRIBES takes place on a fictional planet called "Gaia". To be specific, the northern region of the western hemisphere of Gaia. About 100 years ago, beings called Terrians (an offshoot of Glatorian and Toa hybrids) were able to form an empire, and took control of the majority of that region. The Terrians then decided that Toa and Glatorian were too much of a threat, and started getting rid of them. This whole explanation thing went on longer than expected... But hey! I guess that's what happens when you develop the backstory as you go along! >_> Each comic is separated into pages, with "1" being the first page, and all the numbers after that being the other pages. They should all be in order... 1-1:

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#2 Offline charge_beta

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Posted Apr 24 2013 - 02:58 PM

I like the plot so far... but it's been done before, only different names. Constructive Criticism: Look at other comics and do something unique, you already have the unique part of using actual bionicle figures instead of drawings or sprite comics.

Some advice: keep up the good work!


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#3 Offline Hatty Hattington

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Posted Apr 24 2013 - 03:01 PM

Haha, I don't think the plot's been done before... It isn't as linear as you assume... As for the "unique" part... I already have using MOC's instead of drawings... All I need is some special effects, and then I would think this comic would be 30% better. =P


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#4 Offline charge_beta

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Posted Apr 24 2013 - 03:18 PM

Use GIMP. It's the best once you learn how to use it. I garantee.

Oh and the plot? Yes. I've see projects (incomplete )= ) that have it where someone is going to die, liberated by another guy, and then they become friends and go on a quest.

Keep it up, though, it's still cool!


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#5 Offline Hatty Hattington

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Posted Apr 24 2013 - 04:44 PM

I already have gimp, but I'm not sure it's available on a MAC... I guess I'll just have to see...

 

Hahaha! That's not the entire plot of the season, although, that is the way that I decided to start the story. =P


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#6 Offline Captain Caboose

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Posted Apr 24 2013 - 09:57 PM

Hello fellow RPer. I must saw, your new comic series looks quite well, for having some comedy, and action involved. The plot looks good so far, and I beleive GIMP is available for MAC. If not try a different, yet, good software.


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Posted Apr 24 2013 - 10:18 PM

[color=#ff0000;]"As I was saying before you so rudely shot me..."[/color]

 

[color=#a9a9a9;]Rudely shot me.  XD.  I'll keep my eye on these.[/color]


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Posted Apr 24 2013 - 10:37 PM

Wow, this is turning out great so far. I like the humor, and I can't wait to see how the story progresses.


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Posted May 05 2013 - 03:25 PM

Alright, Comic 1-2 is up! Feel free to enjoy when you have the leisure time to do so =P


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Posted May 06 2013 - 05:16 PM

The Plot Thickens... I like it  ^_^ Your doing a great job, can't wait for more!

Splendid MOC's, too! I'm still trying to figure out the torso for Varren Rhen  :P


Edited by charge_beta, May 06 2013 - 05:17 PM.

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#11 Offline Hatty Hattington

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Posted May 06 2013 - 05:20 PM

It's actually kinda simple... If you want, I'll post a skeleton of the torso this weekend in the bionicle-based creations.


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#12 Offline Flex Likes Groot

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Posted Jun 10 2013 - 03:09 PM

Interesting man. This comic seems great so far. Though a little confused with the plot but still awesome.


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