Chro Posted May 2, 2013 Share Posted May 2, 2013 ^ CLICK IMAGE TO VIEW MOCPAGES GALLERY ^ So, these are the MOCs I made for Brickfair NE 2013. Two Toa and two Glatorian. Rivoln and Neyon are somewhat simpler than my usual MOCs, but I'm still satisfied with them.I may make more MOCs, but this is probably the final set.Feedback is appreciated. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canis Lycaon Posted May 2, 2013 Share Posted May 2, 2013 I really liked the big arm/hand of Sithril, but I think that Ardast looks way too skinny, especially when compared to his huge arms. Rivoln and Neyon's color schemes are interesting, but overall I think their waists are a bit too skinny. Also, a plot error I noticed on Neyon: Agori can't become Glatorian. Quote I used to have a banner here. But that RPG is dead. What now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted May 3, 2013 Author Share Posted May 3, 2013 Thanks Canis. I really liked the big arm/hand of Sithril, but I think that Ardast looks way too skinny, especially when compared to his huge arms.That disproportionateness was intentional. I tried bulking up the midsection and didn't really like how it looked. Rivoln and Neyon's color schemes are interesting, but overall I think their waists are a bit too skinny. Also, a plot error I noticed on Neyon: Agori can't become Glatorian.Not sure about Rivoln, but yes, Neyon is a little skinny, I suppose. Also, I was never really sure about the Agori / Glatorian species relationship. In my headcanon, they can be "rebuilt" or at least physically augmented to be Glatorian. Or if that doesn't count, let's say that he's a tall Agori who is an honorary Glatorian. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hitoshura Posted May 3, 2013 Share Posted May 3, 2013 Really nice MOCs, Chro.For Sithril, he looks quite simple(for your creations, that is), but the legs are nicely done. I also like the huge arm, that is a creative idea and really cool as well.Ardast is really nice, with all the details and stuff. The lower parts of the limbs are really nice, with all the bulkiness and pieces in there. The torso is pretty neat as well. Though the thighs look a little too skinny compared to the rest of him.Rivoln has a nice look to him. The torso, it has a bunch of nice details to it. The legs are the best part in my opinion. The pieces sticking out make a nice addition on him. Also I never get tired of a blue and orange color scheme, so great job on that too.Last but not least, Neyon. Looks a little simple compared to the others, but I still like the leg design. The torso isn't too bad either, I like what you did around the hips. Again, I approve of the color scheme, it looks really nice.Great job on these, and are they your final final set? Or just for Brickfair? Quote profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted May 3, 2013 Author Share Posted May 3, 2013 Really nice MOCs, Chro.For Sithril, he looks quite simple(for your creations, that is), but the legs are nicely done. I also like the huge arm, that is a creative idea and really cool as well.Funny you should say that, since he's actually the most complex of the bunch... Thanks though. Ardast is really nice, with all the details and stuff. The lower parts of the limbs are really nice, with all the bulkiness and pieces in there. The torso is pretty neat as well. Though the thighs look a little too skinny compared to the rest of him.Yeah, originally the legs and torso were very skinny with huge arms. then I bulked up more parts of him a little bit... but I like the strange proportions. Rivoln has a nice look to him. The torso, it has a bunch of nice details to it. The legs are the best part in my opinion. The pieces sticking out make a nice addition on him. Also I never get tired of a blue and orange color scheme, so great job on that too.Thanks! I knew I wanted to use blue and orange, so why not put it on one MOC? Last but not least, Neyon. Looks a little simple compared to the others, but I still like the leg design. The torso isn't too bad either, I like what you did around the hips. Again, I approve of the color scheme, it looks really nice.The legs were my favorite part of Neyon's build, haha. Great job on these, and are they your final final set? Or just for Brickfair?What do you mean by final final? I don't keep MOCs assembled for very long, so this is a change for me, but yeah, these are just the final versions of the MOCs I'll be displaying at Brickfair. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hitoshura Posted May 3, 2013 Share Posted May 3, 2013 Final final? That was a typo, then. Quote profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tornado Posted May 3, 2013 Share Posted May 3, 2013 I looked at them and they look AWASOME Quote I'm back from the deadwill be posting new stuff soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted May 3, 2013 Author Share Posted May 3, 2013 Final final? That was a typo, then.Ah, okay, makes more sense now. I looked at them and they look AWASOMEThanks, glad you like them. FYI, though, you're usually supposed to post more in a comment than just "hey, that's awesome (or awasome)". Some constructive criticism, or even a more specific complement, would be appreciated. Otherwise, the staff may think your post is spam and get rid of it. I know you're new, though, so I'll just tell you this now. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unauthorized Autobiography Posted May 3, 2013 Share Posted May 3, 2013 (edited) Nice. Rivoln and Neyon are somewhat simpler than my usual MOCs, but I'm still satisfied with them. You're so modest. xD Edited May 3, 2013 by Jungle Predator Quote -G u u R a h K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted May 3, 2013 Author Share Posted May 3, 2013 Well, it's true. They're simpler than my usual MOCs (Rivoln's forearms and Neyon's upper arms) but I still like 'em. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klanadack Posted May 4, 2013 Share Posted May 4, 2013 These. are. epic. Sithril is my favorite though. The giant arm just never loses it's coolness! Quote Chuck Norik is no match for Bruce Lhikan! If you use correct grammar in your posts (or try hard to), place this in your signature. Join Myst's campaign for correct grammar usage on BZPower! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kopakas Kool Kompanion Posted May 5, 2013 Share Posted May 5, 2013 I kinda don't like Neyon's arms... They're way too short to be in proportion with the rest of him (And the others!). Quote My Brickshelf, my Tumblr (it's not as bad as it sounds) Current collection: 2001: Matoro, Onepu, Maku, Onua, Pohatu, Tahu, Lewa 2002: Tahnok, Gahlok, Lehvak, Tahnok-Va, Kohrak-Va, Gahlok-Va, Pahrak-Va, Kopaka Nuva, Gali Nuva, Lewa Nuva 2003: Panrahk, Guurahk, Turahk, Kurahk 2004: Bordakh (X2), Rorzakh, Vorzakh, Matau, Whenua 2005: Oohnorak, Rahaga Iruini, Rahagah Norik 2006: Dalu, Velika, Vezok, Reidak, Vezon and Fenrakk 2007: Dekar, Defilak, Morak, Takadox 2008: Gorast, Rockoh T3, Axalara T9 2009: Tarduk, Skrall, Tarix, Malum, Gresh, Mata Nui, Vastus, Stronius, Tuma, Fero and Skirmix, Baranus V7, Kaxium V3, Cendox V1, Thornatus V9 2010: Tahu 2015: Kopaka, Pohatu, Lewa, Vizuna, Skull Basher 2016: Tahu Throwbot/Slizer collection: 1999: Torch/Fire, Scuba/Sub, Ski/Ice, Turbo/City, Amazon/Jungle, Granite/Rock, Electro/Energy, Jet/Judge 2000: Blaster, Millennium/Millennia, Flare, Spark Star Wars Collectible Figures: Death Trooper, Sergeant Jyn Erso, K-2SO, Baze Malbus I also have the Onyx Roborider and Jimi Stinger from Breakout. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted May 5, 2013 Author Share Posted May 5, 2013 Way too short? They're... a little short. His hands go to his hips, which is a little short, but I don't know how his arms being short affects the appearance of the other MOCs...? Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zacian Posted May 6, 2013 Share Posted May 6, 2013 I don't think they look simple though. They all look the same to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted May 6, 2013 Author Share Posted May 6, 2013 (edited) Usually my MOCs have no prefabricated limb or torso pieces; I prefer to go all-custom. But Neyon (upper arms) and Rivoln (forearms and part of torso) do have prefab parts... so they're simpler than usual (and also simpler in comparison to Ardast and Sithril who are full-custom). Edit: updated versions of each MOC can be seen in the gallery here. Edited May 8, 2013 by Chro Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kopakas Kool Kompanion Posted May 10, 2013 Share Posted May 10, 2013 (edited) I saw the updated versions. Thank You!! Edited May 10, 2013 by kopaka's kool kompanion Quote My Brickshelf, my Tumblr (it's not as bad as it sounds) Current collection: 2001: Matoro, Onepu, Maku, Onua, Pohatu, Tahu, Lewa 2002: Tahnok, Gahlok, Lehvak, Tahnok-Va, Kohrak-Va, Gahlok-Va, Pahrak-Va, Kopaka Nuva, Gali Nuva, Lewa Nuva 2003: Panrahk, Guurahk, Turahk, Kurahk 2004: Bordakh (X2), Rorzakh, Vorzakh, Matau, Whenua 2005: Oohnorak, Rahaga Iruini, Rahagah Norik 2006: Dalu, Velika, Vezok, Reidak, Vezon and Fenrakk 2007: Dekar, Defilak, Morak, Takadox 2008: Gorast, Rockoh T3, Axalara T9 2009: Tarduk, Skrall, Tarix, Malum, Gresh, Mata Nui, Vastus, Stronius, Tuma, Fero and Skirmix, Baranus V7, Kaxium V3, Cendox V1, Thornatus V9 2010: Tahu 2015: Kopaka, Pohatu, Lewa, Vizuna, Skull Basher 2016: Tahu Throwbot/Slizer collection: 1999: Torch/Fire, Scuba/Sub, Ski/Ice, Turbo/City, Amazon/Jungle, Granite/Rock, Electro/Energy, Jet/Judge 2000: Blaster, Millennium/Millennia, Flare, Spark Star Wars Collectible Figures: Death Trooper, Sergeant Jyn Erso, K-2SO, Baze Malbus I also have the Onyx Roborider and Jimi Stinger from Breakout. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted May 10, 2013 Author Share Posted May 10, 2013 No problem! Glad you like. Also, through some MOCpages error (surprise surprise) which I am unable to figure out, the text of the post was deleted leaving only the main photo. You can still see the updated forms of the MOCs in my photostream, though. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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