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Bionicle: Reloaded

 

A FanFiction by TechnoSam.

 

Story Thread

 

If you've read the story thread's first post, then you'll know that I am looking for feedback and input on whether or not I should write the story. So... you know what to do! Let me know!

 

If the story takes off, then I assume reviewing will continue as normal.

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You should have at least a prologue ready before posting, I think.

 

As for your project, it's immensely huge. If you really feel yourself that you are up to it, then why not? But to me it still seems like a too overgrown project idea. Also, the statement "more mature" creeps me out... I think it would be best to keep the innocence of Bionicle.

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You should have at least a prologue ready before posting, I think.

 

Meaning that I should have written that before posting this? Or for future reference?

I'll probably write a good bit before posting, a) to ensure continuity, and b) to keep a regular release schedule.

 

Also, the statement "more mature" creeps me out... I think it would be best to keep the innocence of Bionicle.

 

"More mature" simply means more complex story, and more violence. There were probably be more deaths.

 

"Mature" does not mean "adult." There won't be any of that, and there won't be any cursing or anything like that. I'll still be a kids story, but one that a ~15 year-old might be able to appreciate better than a ~7 year-old.

 

Thanks for the input! I'll have to consider my motivation and decide if it's worth it.

 

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I agree with Toatapio.... but it'll be interesting to see where this goes.Also, the Nuva had a lot more to do than what you mentioned, including going to Voya Nui to get the MOL (which actually failed), and later on a lot more tasks such as destroying the Heart of the Visorak, re-releasing the Bohrok, etc.

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Also, the Nuva had a lot more to do than what you mentioned,

 

Yes, I know, but I guess my wording was poor. The only adventures they had in "Bionicle Chronicles" (The first series) were those stated above.

 

Also, I remember something about re-releasing the bohrok, but my memory is a bit foggy. (Thus why these will take a while to write. I'll have to be doing research) Was that in the novels or was it in the Toa Nuva blog? Or elsewhere?

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