Kryst Cyclone Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 (edited) Hello, everyone. KrystCyclone here with my very first epic story, or will it? Story page:The story page is up:http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=9845 Premise: It's been 100,000 years since Spherus Magna was reformed. However, there was a great war where all the BIONICLE engaged against each other. The war had been held for centuries. This forced the Toa to abandon their codes and ethics and kill their enemies against their will. At the end, the war ended at the cost of the Toa's existence as the name was considered as a myth. However, in the city of Matoro under the tyrannical rule of Turaga Krasto, a young Matoran by the name of Pilleus will soon found his life to be changed forever as he rekindle the name of the Toa... How do you think of the story? Chapter 1 is on the way. "Toa Kryst at your service. Let's just say I'm not from around here." Edited May 21, 2013 by Kryst Cyclone Quote Toa Nikitos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 Sounds like a good concept, if a bit cliché (as far as post-reformation fanfics go). I like that you named the city after Matoro, though. Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryst Cyclone Posted May 21, 2013 Author Share Posted May 21, 2013 Thanks, I sorta got the idea after watching Tron:Uprising. Why wouldn't I named the city after Matoro? After all, he saved the universe. Then, a crazy Turaga have to use his name for his lust of power. Trying to create the main villain as hatable as I could. Quote Toa Nikitos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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