The Cantina

[Promised Land]

He was working on his ship, so I decided to say that he was in the hangar where the Sith characters are at.

Edited June 6, 2013 by Promised Land

[Flex Lord Splash]

Name: Talentia Serun

 

Species: Twi'lek

 

Age: 19

 

Faction: The Jedi Order

 

Sympathies: She is very loyal to the Republic and the Jedi Order.

 

Rank: Padawan

 

Occupation: Padawan she does as her Knight commands her.

 

Skills: Talentia is skilled in lightsaber one handed combat. She is a proficient pickpocket, hacker and she is well versed with droid repair. Very proficient with form I, adept at form II.

 

Force Abilities: Force push, disable droid. Usual force telekinesis/flipping etc.

 

Equipment or Weapons: Talentia wields a single purple bladed two-handed saber.

 

Appearance: Talentia looks like your average female Twi'lek. She is very beautiful by most humanoid and alien standards. She has long lekku on either side of her head. She is slender and petite but with nice curves at the same time. Her skin is a deep purple. Her face is almost angelic in nature high cheek-bones large lips two large emerald eyes. She usually wears black garments similar to this.

 

Personality: Talentia is a very determined Jedi. She is adept at controlling her force powers and always willing to learn more knowledge. She can be incredibly kind at times but she has another fiercer side. One that only comes out when she witnesses atrocities similar to ones she was subjected to as a slave. She hates slavers with all of her will and would see them dead if the Jedi allowed. Due to this Talentia treads a bit close to the dark side at times. This has only slightly worsened due to the death of her last master Ketren which she has had trouble letting go.

 

Home Planet: Nar Shadaa

 

History: Talentia was born as a slave on Nar Shadaa. She hated her life as a slave. She watched as her older sister was forced to dance in the cantia and for the fat Hutt which owned them often. She worked in the kitchens serving food and catering to the Hutts every need but as she grew older she began to be trained to become a dancer. When she turned fifteen the Hutt's compound was raided by Jedi since they'd caught onto the Hutt's illegal dealings and that he had been giving information to the Sith.

 

Talentia's sister was killed by the Hutt's guards during the crossfire but she herself survived. During the battle her force sensitivity awakened. As Hutt guards ran at her to harm her since everything had gone to chaos and they fancied her for themselves she lashed out force pushing them away. At that instant a Jedi jumped into the fray cutting the pigs apart and saving her.

 

When it was all over Talentia was taken back to Coruscant to be trained as a Jedi. They gave her freedom, a new home, purpose. Soon because of her skills Talentia was picked to become a Padawan of a prominent Jedi Knight named Ketren Regren. It was the same Miraluka Jedi who had saved her during the raid on the Hutt. Ketren was especially kind to Talentia and together they formed a deep bond. She went everywhere with him and he taught her to control her emotions and give into the will of the force. As she grew in her force powers so did their bond. But that was all cut short three months ago when Ketren was killed during a fierce battle with the Sith. Talentia was now left as a Padawan without a Knight. She has been greatly affected by this happening. She is slightly broken due to the lost of her master and wanders the Jedi Temple often still mourning his death.-No ship-

Edited June 6, 2013 by Flex Fiction

[Alex Humva]

So, what's happening on Coruscant right now? I hear there's a swoop gang robbing stuff, so my Senate security commander might actually be able to get in on that.

[Madara: Mangekyou Master]

A swoop gang robbed an upper Mid-levels casino owned by a very wealthy Senator from Rodia. Jedi are being sent down to investigate alongside the Coruscant Guard.Absolutely! There's a Kel Dor guard that was stunned by the gang. I'd imagine that a security commander would want to question such a witness.

Edited June 6, 2013 by Madara: Mangekyou Master

[HeavyMetalSunshineSister]

Flex, you forgot to mention which lightsaber form(s) the character uses. I am also rather iffy about the Appearance section, what with the heavy emphasis on vague.

[Madara: Mangekyou Master]

Flex, (to add to Ymper's comments) her set of Force skills is a bit broad for a Padawan. I'd like to see it narrowed a bit. A little more detail on the Force Skills wouldn't hurt.

Edited June 6, 2013 by Madara: Mangekyou Master

[Flex Lord Splash]

In her Force Abilities section it states: Form I, II and III.

 

Updated her appearance and removed two force powers.

Edited June 6, 2013 by Flex Fiction

[Madara: Mangekyou Master]

Flex - Lightsaber forms go under the Skills section. A little more detail on her proficiency with the lightsaber would be beneficial. Also, I'm hesitant to approve a Padawan with three lightsaber forms (two would be fine).

[Flex Lord Splash]

Edited.

[Madara: Mangekyou Master]

Excellent. I have no other concerns. Talentia, Approved. +1

[Makuta of Time]

Ymper, you want me to just take out the force powers, or edit in what I told you on how they use their force-sensitivity?

[HeavyMetalSunshineSister]

If you could edit it so that it says something about the Force-user-tracking thing you told me about, and Madara and/or Basilisk is/are cool with it, it should be fine.

[Makuta of Time]

Okay, editing new info into post.

[Alex Humva]

 

Name: L'uo PeraeSpecies: HumanGender: FemaleAge: 26Faction: Sith OrderSympathies: The Galactic Republic

Rank: Sith LordOccupation: Sith ArchivistSkills: L'uo has trained primarily in the Sith version of Form IV, preferring it's reliance on speed and agility to the more brutal of Sith lightsaber forms. Despite this, her true skills rest not in combat, but in research and information. Her ability to process information quickly is somewhat surprising , only further enhanced by her connection to the force. While she does not have perfect memory, she has extremely good recall nonetheless.Force Abilities: She specializes in force deception and force drain, with an alright capability in force telekinesis.

Equipment or Weapons: She carries a curved, almost C shaped, red light-saber.

Appearance: Standing at 5'6", L'uo is not particularly noticeable for anything. She wears her hair tied and corded behind her, her skin is a tanned, almost dark sand color, from her time out in the Alderaan fields, as well as being almost entirely scarred. There is, however, one scar she received from an apprentice, where a lightsaber hit cut a gash along her lower right jaw.Personality: While surprisingly sweet most of the time, L'uo suffers from bipolar disorder. She'll be perfectly fine until someone does something that annoys her, at which point she may, depending on her current state, laugh it off, cry, or get kinda stabby-stabby. Of course her condition brings with it a rather large selection of intricacies and quirks, ones better left to the RP table than a general overview.Home Planet: AlderaanHistory: L'uo grew up on Alderaan, with your standard family you could expect from a planet known for its rich culture and prosperous society. Unfortuantly for L'uo, genetics and simple minor environmental cues would not let her live the standard life one could expect. She was diagnosed with bipolar disorder in her early teens, and was properly medicated for it. But as the years passed on and her disorder didn't go away, she began to wonder how it might effect her in other ways. So, some days, she'd experiment by not taking her suppressants. Her mental skills were already potent, and, as she would discover, when her disorder was allowed to run free, she could work with much more ease during her heightened states. It was during these heightened states that she realized her potential in the Force, Sometime around when she was seventeen that she decided where she would go with her life. She informed her parents that she had potential, but not one she could let them deal with if things went south. With that she left her homeworld, heading towards a group she knew would let her use her gifts.Her apprenticeship in the Sith did not go particularly well, though she would eventually graduate all the same to the position of Sith Lord. She lacked the ambition or ferocity many Sith possessed, and even in this new order, Apprentice rivalries were strong. Her skill in the Sith Archives, however, did not pass without notice. So, after eight years of dealing with petty apprentices, L'uo became a full fledged Sith Lord, immediately confining herself to the archives aboard the Renaissance. Currently, she is studying an ancient Sith holocron, attempting to find a way to break it's security mechanism and reveal its secrets.

Weeee sith

[Havelock Vetinari]

....I stress, once more, that the Sith Order isn't filled with people whose sole mission is to make the rest of the Sith Order miserable.

[Alex Humva]

Eh, consider it really poor luck on her part. Also keep in mind that what's miserable for her probably isn't for other people. Her skin isn't as thick as others on some days. It's less about her being surrounded by ****s and more her not being able to take a good natured jab on her down phases. On her up phases I'm pretty sure she thinks she's having a wonderful time.

Edited June 7, 2013 by Judge Alex Humva

[Havelock Vetinari]

It looks fine to me. Approved.

[Madara: Mangekyou Master]

Hmmm... yup, she doesn't look like a psychopath. Approved.

[Flex Lord Splash]

Is there a +2 for Talentia perhaps? I know Nick wants to IC with her soon.

[Havelock Vetinari]

Consider this my rubber stamp.

 

+2.

[Geardirector]

Alright, I think I have a profile now:

Name: Kam-Ul Tarkan, often referred to as Kam

Species: Human

Gender: Male

Age: 22

 

Faction: Galactic Republic

Sympathies: Kam-Ul remains begrudgingly empathetic to the CIS, and sympathizes with their plight

 

Rank: Just made the rank of Knight

 

Occupation: Jedi Knight

 

Skills: Kam focuses on Shien, the Classic Form V known as the "perseverance form". Per Jedi traditions, he's also received extensive training in Form I. Kam's personal talents include impressive mechanic skills, which he picked up from a Clone Engineer he often crossed paths with, and commendable historic and anthropologic knowledge gained by many a visit to the library on Coruscant. He also has very admirable stamina, and can exert himself at peak capacity somewhat longer than usual

 

Force Abilities: Extensive experience and expertise with the very basic telekinesis and awareness abilities. His telekinesis tends to lend itself towards brute force, which is to say lifting and throwing large objects and projecting blast of telekinetic force at a target. He has significantly lesser abilities when it comes to finer manipulation or prolonged usage of the power. Kam-Ul has also expressed interest in the rarely seen Electric Judgement power, which he has observed used, albeit very sparingly, by Master Plo Koon.

Equipment or Weapons: A green lightsaber. The hilt is plated with wood of unknown origin, dark brown with a smooth, polished surface. This is purely a cosmetic trait.

 

Appearance: Beneath the standard Jedi robe, Kam wears a tan colored tunic, with a shorter V-neck than usual, and a pair of black boots, a tan bush hat with protective goggles resting on the brim complete the getup. He also has a sash lined with pouches that run across his torso. In these pouches are several small tools to be used on his missions. He also wears a brown pair of fingerless gloves.
As a result of his training with Form V, Kam is fairly muscular, and well-toned. He has a short, though "full", beard, black like the rest of his hair, and has green eyes that are capable of giving a number of piercing looks, ranging from the basic "I'm watching you" to the far more cryptic "I know".

 

Kam's most expressive feature are his arms, which he uses on the regular to emphasize what he says or thinks.

 

Kam carries himself with an almost ironic aura of contentment with the rest of the world wherever he goes, and never appears to be out of place, despite how much he might feel like it.

Personality: Kam is very introverted and sensible, and is dedicated to the Jedi Code before anything else. He finds himself troubled by the changes the order has undergone in recent decades, and wishes himself back to a simpler time. Through all this, the Jedi Code remains his moral compass to align by. He fears little, and has a very practical viewpoint in many things; what works is what counts.

Home Planet: Coruscant

History: Kam was picked up by the Jedi Order much like your standard youngling, and received the same training. What made him stand out was a remarkable endurance and stamina that allowed him to outlast many of his adversaries and keep at intense exercises longer than others. After just recently becoming a Jedi Knight, Kam-Ul is preparing himself for the frontlines.

Ship Name: Red Rogue

 

Model: Eta-2 Actis-Class Light Interceptor

 

Function: Starfighter

 

Weapons: Laser Cannons, Secondary Light Ion Cannons

 

Modifications: No actual "mods" per se, but the ship uses a Hyperspace Boost Ring

 

Background: Kam has just recently received the ship, factory-new. It has a red paintjob, which inspired the name.

Edited January 10, 2014 by Dr. O

[Madara: Mangekyou Master]

Right off the bat, I'm gonna say no Electric Judgment. It's a very advanced skill, quite beyond a newly knighted Jedi.

[HeavyMetalSunshineSister]

I am amused that you've made a character who basically talks with his hands, and I know this is an issue that my colleagues aren't half so picky on, but I'm going to push on it anyway - can we have just a tiny bit more detail on the appearance? I mean, I don't think anyone thus far whose character has a nose has mentioned it. Or maybe I missed the noses.

 

Everything else looks pretty cool - and it would be just awesome if you showed the process most spacers go through, of getting to know their ship and developing some emotional attachment to it - apart from the points Madara raised. And, again - hand gestures. Wonderful way to communicate.

[Makuta of Time]

I forgot, but did you give a +1 on the two Trandos that I made?

[HeavyMetalSunshineSister]

Sorry, forgot about them.

 

Rogue Jedi, not rouge ones, and how exactly did his split with the Hutts go? I need to know if it was nasty enough for them to want to put a bounty on his head. As for the other character... Killed a high-ranking member of their military, stole his ship, yeah, bounty on head.

 

+1 on Dor'sha, waiting for information re: Horssk

[Makuta of Time]

Yeah they put a bounty on his head. He stole some cash from them.

[HeavyMetalSunshineSister]

Okay, so he stole from them. How about property damage? He sounds like he might be the sort to blow things up on his way out.

[Makuta of Time]

Hm, oh, he blew up a a bank in Corusant. His M.O is unknown.

Edited June 9, 2013 by Flaredrick: Forgotten One

[HeavyMetalSunshineSister]

Coruscant? Hmm. Owned by a Hutt-affiliate, then?

 

Still...a bank. That would get more people than the Hutts gunning for him. It's a good thing they want to start up their own organization, because I doubt the Guild would let them in.

[Makuta of Time]

Yeah it was Hutt-affiliated. But I'm leaning on non-Hutt-affiliated.

[HeavyMetalSunshineSister]

Well, if that's your final decision on the matter, I'll give my +1 on that character, who will be a bounty hunter magnet...

 

Hey! Madara! Can we set up something in one of the first posts with a list of characters with active bounties on them, who posted the bounty, and how much the bounty is for? With the crazy things we get up to, the results should be hilarious.

 

[And if anyone wants to be Malcolm Reynolds and has what it takes to pull it off, well... we just need to see which crime lord finds that business isn't so much running as crawling away.]

[Madara: Mangekyou Master]

Black Sun would have a hand in most of the more "legitimate" businesses on Coruscant. Banks, pharmaceuticals, stock market, etc. They're allied with the Hutts, but Black Sun runs the official Bounty Hunters' Guild. Big bounties and lots of hunters follow those that would attack Black Sun without care.Ymper, I love that idea! I'll put it into the Cantina's profile post.

Edited June 9, 2013 by Madara: Mangekyou Master

[Makuta of Time]

Funny since they are bounty hunters who will be chased by other bounty hunters.

[HeavyMetalSunshineSister]

Great! Any estimates on the price of the bounties on Tuorri? He wasn't really in a position to rob the three big crime syndicates, but he still caused some pretty major irritation at the point-of-contact for his jobs. The sort of irritation a pugnacious (he doesn't know that word) Kobok with a hair trigger and no sense would cause.

[Madara: Mangekyou Master]

I'll say... 5,000 credits. That being said, he might find his bounty going up based on how things are playing out.

[Makuta of Time]

Madara: Snipe is a Commando. Also Veshok needs to be added. He is a Coommando. As well as Sarge; he is a Clone Trooper.

[Toa Levacius Zehvor]

[And if anyone wants to be Malcolm Reynolds and has what it takes to pull it off, well... we just need to see which crime lord finds that business isn't so much running as crawling away.]

 

One does not simply be Malcom Reynolds.... no one here has the sheer power to pull that off! You need to have the Hammer!

 

-Toa Levacius Zehvor

[Madara: Mangekyou Master]

Madara: Snipe is a Commando. Also Veshok needs to be added. He is a Coommando. As well as Sarge; he is a Clone Trooper.

Sorry, quod? I fail to see how this relates to my current conversation/gleeful state. Edited June 9, 2013 by Madara: Mangekyou Master

[HeavyMetalSunshineSister]

Ah, yes. Captain Reynolds' lucky blood-stained sledgehammer... wait. That is not the Hammer.

 

Also, is that 5,000 credits from each of the crime syndicates individually, or the sum of his bounties?

[Makuta of Time]

Yeah, it was just to let you know since you mentioned the front page profile links.