Dr. Giggles PhD Posted June 1, 2013 Share Posted June 1, 2013 (edited) Character Sheet *******************************************Comics 1) Be there soon2) I have no idea3) Over heating!4) The Security Camera!5) You guys need to check this out!6) We'll take the video to him7) Calvinus Nequam8) The Traitor Comics will be posted on Saturdays.************************************************** GS) (1 Reserved(2 Reserved(3 Open(4 Open(5 Open GS's will have small parts in the plot and only for a few comics at the most.*************************************************This doesn't use the same characters as Noobicorn Inc.All new Characters. Credit to Whoever made the RZ kit. Edited July 27, 2013 by Sir Giggles of Gigglington Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignatius Posted June 1, 2013 Share Posted June 1, 2013 Extra Terrestrial investigators? O.O there coming for me!I'd love to GS, but I'd have to do the coloring for it :/I like it though, you did a really good job on the intro! Quote Best Regards Iggy Failure to not recognize this user's awesomeness is punishable by Pikachu "Because some...men just like to watch the world burn" Spontaneous Combustions is back, but not in the way you expected.https://chargeinfinity.wordpress.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kopekemaster Posted June 1, 2013 Share Posted June 1, 2013 Looks good! It's nice to see (what I think will be) a serious dark-ish comic. Looking forward to the next one! Quote My Writing Blog (more writing coming soon!) My Bionicle/LEGO Blog (defunct) Hyfudiar on Spotify (noise/drone/experimental music) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canis Lycaon Posted June 1, 2013 Share Posted June 1, 2013 Hm. This was an simple start, but I like the idea of it. I'll be keeping an eye on this. For GSing, do I have to send a kit? Because I have no idea how to make a kit. Quote I used to have a banner here. But that RPG is dead. What now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logan Tec Posted June 1, 2013 Share Posted June 1, 2013 well in a kit you pick the body design and gender and race you want to be take that all including the 360 find a mask you like put that in the head 360 and start recoloring the body poses. Quote one day this will contain greatness only the best. But take this with the ocean of salt then you will know what to expect from this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted June 1, 2013 Share Posted June 1, 2013 Looks good so far. By the way is this RZMIK Revolution or Six-Shade RZMIK? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JiMing Posted June 2, 2013 Share Posted June 2, 2013 Hm, Alien research, overabundance of darkness, and main computers acting up.... Yep, this is definitely not going well for our protagonists. =P Quote Haven't seen one of these in a long time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted June 2, 2013 Author Share Posted June 2, 2013 Extra Terrestrial investigators? O.O there coming for me!I'd love to GS, but I'd have to do the coloring for it :/I like it though, you did a really good job on the intro! Thank you. Looks good! It's nice to see (what I think will be) a serious dark-ish comic. Looking forward to the next one! I'm going to post them on saturdays. Thank you. Hm. This was an simple start, but I like the idea of it. I'll be keeping an eye on this. For GSing, do I have to send a kit? Because I have no idea how to make a kit. If you send me the description of the character, I can do the sprite for you. Looks good so far. By the way is this RZMIK Revolution or Six-Shade RZMIK? RZMIK Revolution. Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted June 2, 2013 Share Posted June 2, 2013 Save me a spot, cause I'm about to jump in. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted June 5, 2013 Author Share Posted June 5, 2013 Save me a spot, cause I'm about to jump in. Sure. Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fighty Posted June 6, 2013 Share Posted June 6, 2013 (edited) Just a few criticisms: first of all, in the context-defining first panel, you give us all of the necessary information to establish the setting except for the day and month. It just seems a little odd to establish a setting and have the only time-related information be the time of day and the current year. Not a big deal, just a minor detail. Secondly, the first comic falls into a common trap: it's trying to be an introductory comic but it hardly gives the reader any introductory material. It feels like it should be the opening scene of a much longer comic. I don't know who these characters are, I don't know whether or not to root for them, and I hardly know what's going on. The first comic is humorless, actionless and honestly pretty boring. Now, I'm almost positive that the series will get better as time goes on, but the first comic has done nothing to hook me. With that said, you do get brownie points for putting your comics in .png form and for your use of speech bubbles and outlined text. Both of those things make the comic much more aesthetically pleasing. You also deserve props for your use of light and shadow to create atmosphere. I'm interested to see where this thing goes, and good luck on the future of the series! Edited June 6, 2013 by Shawn Spencer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted June 7, 2013 Author Share Posted June 7, 2013 Just a few criticisms: first of all, in the context-defining first panel, you give us all of the necessary information to establish the setting except for the day and month. It just seems a little odd to establish a setting and have the only time-related information be the time of day and the current year. Not a big deal, just a minor detail. Secondly, the first comic falls into a common trap: it's trying to be an introductory comic but it hardly gives the reader any introductory material. It feels like it should be the opening scene of a much longer comic. I don't know who these characters are, I don't know whether or not to root for them, and I hardly know what's going on. The first comic is humorless, actionless and honestly pretty boring. Now, I'm almost positive that the series will get better as time goes on, but the first comic has done nothing to hook me. With that said, you do get brownie points for putting your comics in .png form and for your use of speech bubbles and outlined text. Both of those things make the comic much more aesthetically pleasing. You also deserve props for your use of light and shadow to create atmosphere. I'm interested to see where this thing goes, and good luck on the future of the series! Well it's not supposed to be a comedy.And I made it in an hour.Just saying.Thanks for the feedback.And the second comic has more detail.And I'll have a character sheet soon.Character Sheet postedNow you know who everybody is!I"ll update it when I introduce new characters! Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted June 8, 2013 Author Share Posted June 8, 2013 New comic! I have no idea And I have updated the character sheet! Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canis Lycaon Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 Hmm... Suspenseful, but I'm kind of waiting for something big to happen. It's been somewhat slow. Should I PM you about GSing? Quote I used to have a banner here. But that RPG is dead. What now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted June 8, 2013 Author Share Posted June 8, 2013 Hmm... Suspenseful, but I'm kind of waiting for something big to happen. It's been somewhat slow. Should I PM you about GSing? Do you have sprites for the character you would like to use?If not, you can send me the description and name of the character.And something big WILL happen soon. Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kopekemaster Posted June 8, 2013 Share Posted June 8, 2013 Ooh! It's getting better and better! Just a suggestion, but the text on the bottoms of the frames 10 and 13 were kinda hard to read. You might want to do it in a color other than black. Hmm... Suspenseful, but I'm kind of waiting for something big to happen. It's been somewhat slow. I actually like the fact that it is starting out slow. That is, after all, how Bionicle started out. Quote My Writing Blog (more writing coming soon!) My Bionicle/LEGO Blog (defunct) Hyfudiar on Spotify (noise/drone/experimental music) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted June 9, 2013 Author Share Posted June 9, 2013 (edited) Ooh! It's getting better and better! Just a suggestion, but the text on the bottoms of the frames 10 and 13 were kinda hard to read. You might want to do it in a color other than black. I actually wanted those to be hard to read.That was sort of the point. lolHe is actually supposed to be mumbling and nobody understand what he says sometimes. Edited June 9, 2013 by Dr. Giggles Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir Ptolemic Of Zyglak Posted June 9, 2013 Share Posted June 9, 2013 This looks promising, just as long as it stays more serious than your other series. I'll be coming back for more.And I agree with kopaka, slow start is good right now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted June 17, 2013 Author Share Posted June 17, 2013 New comic!Over heating!Sorry I didn't post this on Saturday. I was really busy. Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted June 17, 2013 Share Posted June 17, 2013 Could it be sabotage? Or did it just overheat? Strange. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zacian Posted June 21, 2013 Share Posted June 21, 2013 Could it be sabotage? Or did it just overheat? Strange. It looks like sabotage. But if you look at it in a different angle it might have overheated. Though I can't wait to see what happens next! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted June 23, 2013 Author Share Posted June 23, 2013 (edited) New comic!The Security Camera!I didn't post on yesterday so I posted today.Character sheet updated. Edited June 23, 2013 by Dr. Giggles Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canis Lycaon Posted June 23, 2013 Share Posted June 23, 2013 Hm. Looks interesting. I wonder what is on the camera. Quote I used to have a banner here. But that RPG is dead. What now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted June 23, 2013 Share Posted June 23, 2013 If the camera still works, they may figure out that it was a saboteur. Radars don't overheat out of nowhere, right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted July 6, 2013 Author Share Posted July 6, 2013 New comic! You guys need to check this out! That is the name of the comic just so you know. Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canis Lycaon Posted July 6, 2013 Share Posted July 6, 2013 So, the aliens purposefully tried to destroy the radar? Interesting... Quote I used to have a banner here. But that RPG is dead. What now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta of Time Posted July 6, 2013 Share Posted July 6, 2013 I knew it. But for reason I'm remembering battleship. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted July 13, 2013 Author Share Posted July 13, 2013 New comic! We'll take the video to him Yay! New comic! But now I have to make another one. Because that one was my last. Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vataki Posted July 14, 2013 Share Posted July 14, 2013 yoyoyoyo dAWGthis is a good thing so far. but i'd like to point out the only big problem i noticed. some backgrounds, particularly the one of the outside of the building with the satellite, look as if they were created on a white background, then later changed to transparent in order to be used on different backgrounds. (in this case, so that they could be used in day and night). that's the one mistake i would correct. you should always make your panels on a transparent background. good start! the plot is a little slow, but at least you aren't rushing things. and i'd work on giving the characters some more depth, though.yoyopeace outhomie Quote naw man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted July 14, 2013 Author Share Posted July 14, 2013 yoyoyoyo dAWGthis is a good thing so far. but i'd like to point out the only big problem i noticed. some backgrounds, particularly the one of the outside of the building with the satellite, look as if they were created on a white background, then later changed to transparent in order to be used on different backgrounds. (in this case, so that they could be used in day and night). that's the one mistake i would correct. you should always make your panels on a transparent background. good start! the plot is a little slow, but at least you aren't rushing things. and i'd work on giving the characters some more depth, though.yoyopeace outhomie Thank you brother.I'll do what your wise mind advises. Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canis Lycaon Posted July 15, 2013 Share Posted July 15, 2013 So, who are they showing the video to? Quote I used to have a banner here. But that RPG is dead. What now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted July 15, 2013 Author Share Posted July 15, 2013 So, who are they showing the video to? Somebody Kapara knows. Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted July 20, 2013 Author Share Posted July 20, 2013 New comic!Calvinus Nequam They take the video to Calvinus Nequam. And please like this comic. I spent two hours just with the first few panels. Gimp also crashed like three times. And I forgot to save a file. So please enjoy it. And post. Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canis Lycaon Posted July 20, 2013 Share Posted July 20, 2013 Let's see. Dr. Giggles from Noobicorn Inc. is in the background, and Calvinus Nequam looks like Micky Mouse. Nothing that odd. Quote I used to have a banner here. But that RPG is dead. What now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kopekemaster Posted July 20, 2013 Share Posted July 20, 2013 Oh. My. Goodness. I got to read two new comics in a row (because I didn't read it last Saturday)!So much awesome. And Calvinus is epic. Quote My Writing Blog (more writing coming soon!) My Bionicle/LEGO Blog (defunct) Hyfudiar on Spotify (noise/drone/experimental music) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted July 21, 2013 Author Share Posted July 21, 2013 Let's see. Dr. Giggles from Noobicorn Inc. is in the background, and Calvinus Nequam looks like Micky Mouse. Nothing that odd. Did you even notice who Calvinus is? Oh. My. Goodness. I got to read two new comics in a row (because I didn't read it last Saturday)!So much awesome. And Calvinus is epic. DID YOU NOTICE?! Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kopekemaster Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 Let's see. Dr. Giggles from Noobicorn Inc. is in the background, and Calvinus Nequam looks like Micky Mouse. Nothing that odd. Did you even notice who Calvinus is? Oh. My. Goodness. I got to read two new comics in a row (because I didn't read it last Saturday)!So much awesome. And Calvinus is epic. DID YOU NOTICE?! Deadmau5? Quote My Writing Blog (more writing coming soon!) My Bionicle/LEGO Blog (defunct) Hyfudiar on Spotify (noise/drone/experimental music) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tahukan Posted July 22, 2013 Share Posted July 22, 2013 Dude that's really good The characters in the background is you and the cat guy from Your first season of noobicorn incRight? By the way nice ipad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zacian Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 (edited) Dang, I missed four comics in a row. I guess this is what I get for temporarily leaving bzp xd Edited July 25, 2013 by Kranan: Rider of Rohan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted July 25, 2013 Author Share Posted July 25, 2013 Dude that's really good The charactersin the background is you and the cat guy fromYour first season of noobicorn incRight? By the way nice ipad Yes. Let's see. Dr. Giggles from Noobicorn Inc. is in the background, and Calvinus Nequam looks like Micky Mouse. Nothing that odd. Did you even notice who Calvinus is? Oh. My. Goodness. I got to read two new comics in a row (because I didn't read it last Saturday)!So much awesome. And Calvinus is epic. DID YOU NOTICE?! Deadmau5? No. Not him. Quote ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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