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#1 Offline Dr. Giggles PhD

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Posted Jun 01 2013 - 06:34 AM

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Character Sheet

 

 

 

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Comics

 

 

1) Be there soon

2) I have no idea

3) Over heating!

4) The Security Camera!

5) You guys need to check this out!

6) We'll take the video to him

7) Calvinus Nequam

8) The Traitor

 

 

Comics will be posted on Saturdays.

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GS)

 

(1 Reserved

(2 [color=#000000;]Reserved[/color]

(3 [color=#ff0000;]Open[/color]

(4 [color=#ff0000;]Open[/color]

(5[color=#ff0000;] Open[/color]

 

GS's will have small parts in the plot and only for a few comics at the most.

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This doesn't use the same characters as Noobicorn Inc.

All new Characters.

 

Credit to 

Whoever made the RZ kit.


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Posted Jun 01 2013 - 09:42 AM

Extra Terrestrial investigators? O.O there coming for me!

I'd love to GS, but I'd have to do the coloring for it :/

I like it though, you did a really good job on the intro!


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Posted Jun 01 2013 - 10:10 AM

Looks good! It's nice to see (what I think will be) a serious dark-ish comic. 

Looking forward to the next one!


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Posted Jun 01 2013 - 10:29 AM

Hm. This was an simple start, but I like the idea of it. I'll be keeping an eye on this.

 

For GSing, do I have to send a kit? Because I have no idea how to make a kit.


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Posted Jun 01 2013 - 10:37 AM

well in a kit you pick the body design and gender and race you want to be take that all including the 360 find a mask you like put that in the head 360 and start recoloring the body poses.


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one day this will contain greatness only the best. But take this with the ocean of salt then you will know what to expect from this


#6 Offline A Forgotten Soul

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Posted Jun 01 2013 - 12:54 PM

Looks good so far. By the way is this RZMIK Revolution or Six-Shade RZMIK?


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Posted Jun 01 2013 - 08:19 PM

Hm, Alien research, overabundance of darkness, and main computers acting up....

 

Yep, this is definitely not going well for our protagonists. =P


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#8 Offline Dr. Giggles PhD

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Posted Jun 02 2013 - 07:35 AM

Extra Terrestrial investigators? O.O there coming for me!

I'd love to GS, but I'd have to do the coloring for it :/

I like it though, you did a really good job on the intro!

 

Thank you.

 

Looks good! It's nice to see (what I think will be) a serious dark-ish comic. 

Looking forward to the next one!

 

I'm going to post them on saturdays. Thank you.

 

 

 

Hm. This was an simple start, but I like the idea of it. I'll be keeping an eye on this.

 

For GSing, do I have to send a kit? Because I have no idea how to make a kit.

 

If you send me the description of the character, I can do the sprite for you.

 

 

Looks good so far. By the way is this RZMIK Revolution or Six-Shade RZMIK?

 

RZMIK Revolution.


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Posted Jun 02 2013 - 10:38 AM

Save me a spot, cause I'm about to jump in.


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#10 Offline Dr. Giggles PhD

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Posted Jun 05 2013 - 07:46 AM

Save me a spot, cause I'm about to jump in.

 

Sure.


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Posted Jun 06 2013 - 03:35 PM

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Just a few criticisms: first of all, in the context-defining first panel, you give us all of the necessary information to establish the setting except for the day and month. It just seems a little odd to establish a setting and have the only time-related information be the time of day and the current year. Not a big deal, just a minor detail.[/font]

 

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Secondly, the first comic falls into a common trap: it's trying to be an introductory comic but it hardly gives the reader any introductory material. It feels like it should be the opening scene of a much longer comic. I don't know who these characters are, I don't know whether or not to root for them, and I hardly know what's going on. The first comic is humorless, actionless and honestly pretty boring. Now, I'm almost positive that the series will get better as time goes on, but the first comic has done nothing to hook me. [/font]

 

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]With that said, you do get brownie points for putting your comics in .png form and for your use of speech bubbles and outlined text. Both of those things make the comic much more aesthetically pleasing. You also deserve props for your use of light and shadow to create atmosphere.[/font]

 

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]I'm interested to see where this thing goes, and good luck on the future of the series![/font]


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#12 Offline Dr. Giggles PhD

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Posted Jun 07 2013 - 03:03 PM

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Just a few criticisms: first of all, in the context-defining first panel, you give us all of the necessary information to establish the setting except for the day and month. It just seems a little odd to establish a setting and have the only time-related information be the time of day and the current year. Not a big deal, just a minor detail.[/font]

 

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]Secondly, the first comic falls into a common trap: it's trying to be an introductory comic but it hardly gives the reader any introductory material. It feels like it should be the opening scene of a much longer comic. I don't know who these characters are, I don't know whether or not to root for them, and I hardly know what's going on. The first comic is humorless, actionless and honestly pretty boring. Now, I'm almost positive that the series will get better as time goes on, but the first comic has done nothing to hook me. [/font]

 

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]With that said, you do get brownie points for putting your comics in .png form and for your use of speech bubbles and outlined text. Both of those things make the comic much more aesthetically pleasing. You also deserve props for your use of light and shadow to create atmosphere.[/font]

 

[font="'trebuchet ms', helvetica, sans-serif;"]I'm interested to see where this thing goes, and good luck on the future of the series![/font]

 

Well it's not supposed to be a comedy.

And I made it in an hour.

Just saying.

Thanks for the feedback.

And the second comic has more detail.

And I'll have a character sheet soon.

Character Sheet posted

Now you know who everybody is!I"ll update it when I introduce new characters!


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#13 Offline Dr. Giggles PhD

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Posted Jun 08 2013 - 07:07 AM

New comic!

 

I have no idea

 

And I have updated the character sheet!


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Posted Jun 08 2013 - 07:13 AM

Hmm... Suspenseful, but I'm kind of waiting for something big to happen. It's been somewhat slow.

 

Should I PM you about GSing?


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Posted Jun 08 2013 - 07:25 AM

Hmm... Suspenseful, but I'm kind of waiting for something big to happen. It's been somewhat slow.

 

Should I PM you about GSing?

 

Do you have sprites for the character you would like to use?

If not, you can send me the description and name of the character.

And something big WILL happen soon.


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Posted Jun 08 2013 - 12:29 PM

Ooh! It's getting better and better!

 

Just a suggestion, but the text on the bottoms of the frames 10 and 13 were kinda hard to read. You might want to do it in a color other than black.

 

 

Hmm... Suspenseful, but I'm kind of waiting for something big to happen. It's been somewhat slow.

 

I actually like the fact that it is starting out slow. That is, after all, how Bionicle started out.


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Posted Jun 09 2013 - 05:08 AM

Ooh! It's getting better and better!

 

Just a suggestion, but the text on the bottoms of the frames 10 and 13 were kinda hard to read. You might want to do it in a color other than black. 

 

I actually wanted those to be hard to read.

That was sort of the point. lol

He is actually supposed to be mumbling and nobody understand what he says sometimes.


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Posted Jun 09 2013 - 03:11 PM

This looks promising, just as long as it stays more serious than your other series. I'll be coming back for more.And I agree with kopaka, slow start is good right now.
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Posted Jun 17 2013 - 07:44 AM

New comic!Over heating!

Sorry I didn't post this on Saturday. I was really busy.


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Posted Jun 17 2013 - 01:01 PM

Could it be sabotage? Or did it just overheat? Strange.


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Posted Jun 20 2013 - 10:15 PM

Could it be sabotage? Or did it just overheat? Strange.

It looks like sabotage. But if you look at it in a different angle it might have overheated. Though I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Posted Jun 23 2013 - 09:32 AM

New comic!

The Security Camera!

I didn't post on yesterday so I posted today.

Character sheet updated.


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Posted Jun 23 2013 - 09:34 AM

Hm. Looks interesting. I wonder what is on the camera.


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Posted Jun 23 2013 - 05:02 PM

If the camera still works, they may figure out that it was a saboteur. Radars don't overheat out of nowhere, right? 


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Posted Jul 06 2013 - 07:15 AM

New comic! 

You guys need to check this out!

 

That is the name of the comic just so you know. 


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Posted Jul 06 2013 - 08:07 AM

So, the aliens purposefully tried to destroy the radar? Interesting...


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Posted Jul 06 2013 - 12:12 PM

I knew it. But for reason I'm remembering battleship.


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Posted Jul 13 2013 - 07:34 AM

New comic!

 

We'll take the video to him

 

Yay! New comic! But now I have to make another one. Because that one was my last.


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Posted Jul 14 2013 - 11:42 AM

yoyoyoyo dAWGthis is a good thing so far. but i'd like to point out the only big problem i noticed.

 

some backgrounds, particularly the one of the outside of the building with the satellite, look as if they were created on a white background, then later changed to transparent in order to be used on different backgrounds. (in this case, so that they could be used in day and night). that's the one mistake i would correct. you should always make your panels on a transparent background.

 

good start! the plot is a little slow, but at least you aren't rushing things. and i'd work on giving the characters some more depth, though.

yoyo

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Posted Jul 14 2013 - 12:39 PM

yoyoyoyo dAWGthis is a good thing so far. but i'd like to point out the only big problem i noticed.

 

some backgrounds, particularly the one of the outside of the building with the satellite, look as if they were created on a white background, then later changed to transparent in order to be used on different backgrounds. (in this case, so that they could be used in day and night). that's the one mistake i would correct. you should always make your panels on a transparent background.

 

good start! the plot is a little slow, but at least you aren't rushing things. and i'd work on giving the characters some more depth, though.

yoyo

peace out

homie

 

Thank you brother.

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Posted Jul 15 2013 - 10:30 AM

So, who are they showing the video to?


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Posted Jul 15 2013 - 05:39 PM

So, who are they showing the video to?

 

Somebody Kapara knows.


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Posted Jul 20 2013 - 06:45 AM

New comic!

Calvinus Nequam

 

They take the video to Calvinus Nequam. 

And please like this comic. I spent two hours just with the first few panels. Gimp also crashed like three times. And I forgot to save a file. So please enjoy it. And post.


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Posted Jul 20 2013 - 08:35 AM

Let's see. Dr. Giggles from Noobicorn Inc. is in the background, and Calvinus Nequam looks like Micky Mouse. Nothing that odd.


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Posted Jul 20 2013 - 09:39 AM

Oh. My. Goodness. I got to read two new comics in a row (because I didn't read it last Saturday)!

So much awesome.

 

And Calvinus is epic.


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Posted Jul 21 2013 - 12:16 PM

Let's see. Dr. Giggles from Noobicorn Inc. is in the background, and Calvinus Nequam looks like Micky Mouse. Nothing that odd.

 

Did you even notice who Calvinus is?

 

Oh. My. Goodness. I got to read two new comics in a row (because I didn't read it last Saturday)!

So much awesome.

 

And Calvinus is epic.

 

DID YOU NOTICE?!


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Posted Jul 21 2013 - 01:30 PM

 

Let's see. Dr. Giggles from Noobicorn Inc. is in the background, and Calvinus Nequam looks like Micky Mouse. Nothing that odd.

 

Did you even notice who Calvinus is?

 

Oh. My. Goodness. I got to read two new comics in a row (because I didn't read it last Saturday)!

So much awesome.

 

And Calvinus is epic.

 

DID YOU NOTICE?!

 

 

Deadmau5?


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Posted Jul 22 2013 - 06:53 PM

Dude that's really good The characters in the background is you and the cat guy from Your first season of noobicorn incRight? By the way nice ipad
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Posted Jul 24 2013 - 07:50 AM

Dang, I missed four comics in a row. I guess this is what I get for temporarily leaving bzp xd

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Posted Jul 25 2013 - 12:10 PM

Dude that's really good The charactersin the background is you and the cat guy fromYour first season of noobicorn incRight? By the way nice ipad

 

Yes. 

 

 

 

Let's see. Dr. Giggles from Noobicorn Inc. is in the background, and Calvinus Nequam looks like Micky Mouse. Nothing that odd.

 

Did you even notice who Calvinus is?

 

Oh. My. Goodness. I got to read two new comics in a row (because I didn't read it last Saturday)!

So much awesome.

 

And Calvinus is epic.

 

DID YOU NOTICE?!

 

 

Deadmau5?

 

No. Not him.


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