this is my first epic but my second fan fic (you don't want to know what happened to my first)

            BATTLE AGAINST THE SWARMS
Book one: The battle begins
                           Proluge
The toa were in makuta's chamber,so far they were losing the battle,they may have defeated the manas,but makuta? it may be impossible.

"Fools! I cannot be defeated! your efforts are in vain!" yelled makuta as he used one of his many tentacles/vines to throw gali at a wall.

"Our only hope is to work together!" yelled tahu as he dodged makuta."Fire!" yelled tahu,and out of his sword shot a huge blast of fire and it hit makuta,the flames lighting the darkness.

"Ice!" yelled kopaka as a wave of freazing cold ice hit makuta.

"Take this for infecting me!"screamed lewa as a blast of wind powerful enough to knock down tree hit makuta.

"Water!" shouted gali as  a gigantic blast of water fell on makuta.

"Earth!" shouted onua as he plunged energy into the earth that that made the ground rise up.

"Stone!" yelled pohatu as huge amounts of stone were hurled at makuta.

"You cannot destroy me......." moaned makuta as he collapsed.
                         *later*
"Awaken my servents" whispered two mysterious vioces,then thousands of pods burst open,freeing an evil that would change mata nui forever.

How'd I do for my first epic? stay tuned for chapter 1!

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This post has been edited by Cahdok nuva: Nov 24 2002, 03:58 PM

I like it when will you post more?  

I'll post more.....right now!

                         Chapter 1
                    The bohrok awake
The bohrok awoke,using their sharp teeth,they tore at the pods,and hurled themselves through,onto the ground."Do not fail us!" yelled cahdok and gahdok."You are invincable! no force on mata nui can withstand your might!defeat? impossible! it is not an option.DO YOUR DUTYS!"
The tahnok nodded,as they used their elemant,fire to create an exit,with that,all the bohrok tore out of kini nui."Do your duties! fullfill the mission! yelled cahdok and gahdok.
                           *ta-koro*
Jala walked with Vakama,to survey the village,but then he heard a loud noise."CHICT CHICT CHICT!" screached the bohrok.

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This post has been edited by Cahdok nuva: Nov 24 2002, 04:01 PM

dude! I love it! it rules! ITSSOAWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
eh-hum ,..... ~fixing hair~ ok I'm back now....
THAT'S SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! woh, .....ok ...that won't happen again.
that was a very cool story,.... but it seems kinda familiar.
are you using part of my stories that I pmed you?
THEIF!!!!
no, just kidding, it's a good story. did I say it's a good story?
it's a really good story, though.

Chapter 2
Tahu battles the Bohrok
"The bohrok!" shouted Vakama. "Come we must warn the village!
"Get out of here!" yelled a matoran, but then a Tahnok simply knocked the matorans mask off,within seconds,the poor matoran had a krana on his face. A tahnok va put a replacment krana in the tahnok."No force on mata nui withstands our might!" yelled the krana'd matoran as he swung a club at jala, hitting his face. For a moment jala thought it was all over -- until he saw tahu."strange mask design." said tahu as he knoked the krana off the matoran.
"SSsssssccccrrreeeeeeeeeech!" howled five tahnok as they charged tahu firing blasts of fire.
tahu used his magma sword to cut a tahnok's krana to shreds,the next tahnok had a more sucessful attack,it knoked tahu to the ground and  fired a blast of fire at his back,a kohrok frose tahu's hand to his side,a lehvak shot acid at tahu,and had a direct hit.
tahu used his good arm to cut the lahvak apart,but felt another tahnok slam him to the ground.
tahu cut the tahnok to ribbons,but then 12 more tahnok charged him,shooting blasts of fire.....

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what stories you PMed me!? you never did!

EDIT: can I double post? if I can't reply quick! I want to post more!

                             chapter 3
tahu was trapped.12 tahnok were charging him,then the other toa arrived.
"yes that's us,the cavalry,9-1-1,the recuers,the-" "shut up lewa!" yelled kopaka.tahu smiled,yes he would live.he then ripped apart a tahnok's faceplate with his magma sword.kopaka froze another one.onua dug a pit, and gali filled it with water.then all 6 toa pushed the bohrok in,then onua burried the pit.
"what are these creatures?" asked pohatu."I know" said a voice,the toa turned around and saw vakama.
"they are the bohrok.said vakama."there are thousands of them-six breeds.first,the weakest,but the cleverest,the gahlok,able to shoot waves of water,the pahrak,able to send avelaunches of stone,the kohrak-they wield the ice,the tahnok able to melt anything with fire,the nuhvok,able to command the earth-and the lehvak who use acid.
vakama cleared his throat,"you must each gather 8 breeds of krana from each bohrok swarm or the island is doomed."
"everyone split up-check your villages and come back here,and we will each travel in groups of three to gather the krana" said tahu. "farwell" replied kopaka.
as lewa flew off to le-koro he thought everything would be all right-little did he know how wrong he was.

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This post has been edited by Cahdok nuva: Dec 29 2002, 03:30 PM

how-d-doo, otua is back.
dude you got a cool story going here, keep it up don't quit!
sometimes dumb people don't post because they get in to big of a rush ,to copy your posts and take all the credit for it while you r epic rotts in the corner in a pile of cob-webs.
hey here are some pics I made:

hey,nice pics otua, how did you make them?
                          chapter 4
               the le-koron horor (I couldn't resist the title)
matau was in his hut,reading ancient prophesies writen by someone....(you'll find out who it was in another epic I'll write later on) he read them again and again,"I do not understand these prophesies" he muttered,it only says beware of evil heart green-red "I do not understand." "turaga!" shouted kongu "what is it kongu?"asked matau "evil hearted green-red villans" "who are they?" demanded the turaga "I do not know-
they green,red eyes,shoot acid,put red masks on poor matoran,and make them do evil things."
matau's heart stopped.now he knew who the evil heart green-red were.bohrok.
le-koro was under attack.

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if you read this epic,please post.
                      Chapter 5
                   le-koron doom-day
matau looked out from the window of his hut,lehvak were fighting matoran on the lower platforms of the tree-top village, while more were trashing the second,then some lehvak climbed up to the top platform.
the top platform.
all the lehvak needed to do was climb from the top platform to reach his hut,it was positioned in a branch fifty feet higher than the top platform,and if they got to his hut,he could become dead,or worse,there was only one thing worse than death.
being krana'd.
matau was shaken from his thoughts when a lehvak va started climbing the ladder that lead from the top platform to his hut.
matau smiled,he knew something the va didn't.he had weapons stored in his hut.I knew the weapons would come in handy thought matau,then he took out a bow and arrows.
matau aimed the arrow and fired,a direct hit! the arrow went through the va,and smashed it's krana to pulp.
but then lehvak started climbing.
these were not va.
these were lehvak,the most powerful bohrok in existance,matau droped his bow,took out a knife,and cut the ladder apart.But just to be safe,matau ran across the small platform (he has a platform and home above the top platform)
into his home,and bolted the door with solid protodermis.
then matau ran upstairs,bolted the upstairs door,and picked up his turaga staff,a spear,a knife and a bowl of acid.
I'm safe he thought.nothing can break through solid protodermis.
then he he heard wood crunching he'd been an idiot!
the protodermis covered part of the door,not all of it!
the lehvak were now in his house,smashing maps,charts,and prophesies.
then he heard the lehvak coming upstairs,he heard the smashing of the upstairs door,and in the doorway he saw eight lehvak.
and they saw him.

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This post has been edited by Cahdok nuva: Nov 23 2002, 04:53 PM

Wow! that was a great ending for Chapter 5!
"and they saw him".......

hard
Go on!!!!!

sure I'll continue in my next post I didn't think people would like it this much,(if galigee sees it this will be huge)

chapter 6
               poor matau!
the lehvak saw him,and just to prove it,they started firing acid.
matau doged,and threw the the bowl of acid.
sadly,it hit a va and not a bohrok.
a lehvak came and dielverd a blow so hard,it knoked him to the other side of the room.
but he had his help-flute,and if he played it would summon his bodygaurd.but he couldn't do it yet,a lehvak was charging him,he piched up a coho berrie and threw it at the lehvak,there
was more to coho berries than the eye saw,nobody ever ate them,they contained juices that would make it explode if thrown.
apearently the lehvak knew this too.
the lehvak picked up a lehvak va and wasn't destroyed by the berrie.
but the va was.
the eight lehvak destroyed his remaining weapons and smashed the help-flute.
one lehvak knoked off his mask and hurled it's krana.
matau could not run because another lehvak was holding him in place.
the krana came closer,closer and closer....

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This post has been edited by Cahdok nuva: Nov 29 2002, 02:45 PM

Good story-techniques, Cn. I have an idea this will fill up a gap in the story-line somewhere, like GaliGee's epic. A very entertaining read so far.  

                    Chapter 6
           minus one turaga
matau couldn't do a thing.the lehvak were holding him down and the krana was coming closer.

matau felt something on his face.within minutes,he no longer could control his own body.(I'll post a better descreption of someone getting krana'd later.)

Matau couldn't even control his voice! and to make matters worse,the krana was using it.

"Bring up some matoran and a few krana, we need more bodies. If the matoran escape and jump,they'll be killed." said matau/krana vu.

Matau heard a voice in his head:~Think you'll be free? that's impossible! no body has ever resisted a krana!~

Matau was a slave trapped  in his own body.

And he would never be free.

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Chapter 7                  
           Lewa's big mistake
Lewa flew to le-koro,the wind rushing against his face,he knew something was wrong,he was hearing small pitiful cries in his head,that said don't go to le-koro.
lewa ignored them,he had to get there.


Then,a a lehvak vu,flew up to him and started squirting acid.lewa dodged the attak,and hit the lehvak with his ax. The lehvak's arm fell to the ground.


The lehvak screached and fell.the thing had lost it's focus when it noticed it was missing an arm.

The lehvak plumeted and crashed to the ground,nothing would stop lewa from getting to le-koro.

               *le-koro*

The battle raged.

Kongu swung an ax and destroyed a lehvak va.his used his arms and hurled another off the platform,the lehvak va plumeted down to the swamps and crashed.

Another va threw one of it's small blades at kongu,who dodged it with ease.
He picked up a flute that was half as tall as himself and clubbed the va.

The next foe was better at combat,it grabbed a piece of wood and threw it at Kongu and had a direct hit,kongu didn't pass out until a lehvak clubbed him.

Kongu awoke in matau's hut,on a wall.kongu tried to move but couldn't,he was strapped onto the wall.
Matau came through the door with several lehvak and va.

Matau didn't smile like he usually did,because he was krana'd.

"This one's for you" said matau/krana and pulled a krana out of a bag.
kongu gasped.

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if anybody thinks the story needs or dosn't need anything,or wants to express their opinions of the story feel free to PM me or add a reply,I know over 70 people have viewed this and not posted.

I know 91 people have viewed this story,and I hope they post.
                    Chapter 8
            kongu's freedom

Tamaru was in le-koro battling lehvak va,and running away from lehvak,"take this!" shouted tamaru and threw a coho berrie at a va.
The va exploded.

~Must get to safer grounds thought tamaru.

"Go uptree!" she shouted (or is it he?) tamaru and her troops put a ladder against matau's hut and climbed up.they saw the hut in ruins,they went inside and climbed to the second floor.

There they saw kongu,strapped to the wall with a krana on his face,he was still straped to the bed because the krana hadn't taken complete control of his body.
tamaru knoked the krana off and unbuckled kongu.

"Thanks" said kongu,"but let's rejoyce later,we have company!"
10 lehvak va ran in the room,blades flashing,destroying anything they saw.
kongu took a club and hit one of the va,the creature passed out,kongu used this opportunity and smashed the krana to pulp.

Tamaru destroyed another va and watched the krana fall out the window.
things were going well until 20 lehvak burst in.

These were not va.

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105 people have viewed this story and they havn't posted! won't they please post? I want to hear thier comments!
here's chapter 9.....
                        Chapter 9
            the escape and horror
Kongu stared in horror at the lehvak coming through the door,he had to think fast."Tamaru you a vinesman,I want a bridge or swing-high vine to escape now!" tamaru nodded and started working.

"Brave-heart le-korons suround the evil-doing lehvak!"

kongu tried to destroy one,but was knoked him to a wall.

"All of you attack one lehvak!when it's destroyed move to the next!"shouted kongu.
"Done!" yelled tamaru kongu looked out the window and saw a vine plunging downward,and attached to a hut,by the window ledge attached by rope,there was a large stick.

"Grab on the stick and jump out the far seeing window,do not let go,you will be heavy enough to down-fall on the vine,when you get close to hut,let go of stick,and you will fall on platform but you will be close-bound to the platform and your bones will not smash crunch."

Kongu nodded and grabbed the stick,using his weight,he slid down.
But what he saw on the platform was a horror.

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Chapter 10
kongu gasped.over half the le-koro matoran were krana'd.
as he jumped and hit the platform a squad of lehvak surronded him,ready to shoot acid at any time."I will never surrender!" yelled kongu,then he whistled,at his command a dozen le-korons on kahus flew over.then the fight began.

The kahu-riders dropped Coho berrys from the air, destroying va, sometimes even a lehvak.

Kongu grabbed a bag of Coho berries from tamaru, and started throwing them.

BAM! BAM! BAM!

Three va were destroyed, but it was not enough.

Kongu noticed that there were huge barrels wich le-korons were being dunked into by lehvak.

~Why would lehvak do this?" thought Kongu as he walked closer.

Then he saw what was in the barrels: krana. Le-korons would go into the barrels maskless, and come out with a krana. Of coarse, lehvak had other methods for krana-ing le-korons.

Kongu felt himself getting siezed by a lehvak, and realized he was about to be krana'd.

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chapter 11
                takua's adventure begins
                            *ta-koro*
takua was happy.after he helped save the villages (see mnolg for datails) ta-koro had welcomed him back.Now he had his own hut,he was an adviser to vakama,and an important member of the gaurd.
yet,despite all the good things that happened to him,he felt empty.he missed traveling mata nui,seeing the sights,the sounds,and the adventure.he felt guilty,staying in his hut while mata nui was in trouble.
I don't know why I'm doing this.thought takua as he picked up his pack,and put his le-koro flute,lightstone,po-koro chisel,ta-koro ensign,and episode book into his pack.
yes,takua had decided to leave ta-koro and have adventures on the island and was heading towards Onu-koro,takua left and started his journey,then he noticed the tahnok.

chapter 12

lewa flew to le-koro,he was getting far,but it would take another hour of flight,something told him he shouldn't go to le-koro,and he had ran into twelve lehvak so far,it was strange that they were so close to the city.
one hour later,lewa arrived at le-koro,exept something was differant.the matoran were still and silent,not moving an inch.
lehvak and lehvak va were everywhere,exept the lehvak wern't hurting the matoran.that was strange,the lehvak were the most destructive bohrok in existance.
then lewa saw what was on the matorans faces:krana,the krana'd matoran looked at lewa and picked up axes and clubs,and started toward him.
one swung a blow at lewa and missed,and to the krana/matoran's surprise,lewa did not swing his axe. curses, thought lewa I can destroy them or they can destroy me.appearently the krana/matoran knew this too.then matau came out escorted by dozens of lehvak.
"get him." said matau/krana

look people,you don't post,I don't post.I won't post another chapter until you post.

cool story, i love it how the va keep getting wasted. and i like "they were not va" as well. please post another chapter.

Wow, this is a great story!!! Do more!

                         chapter 13
twenty lehvak va ran after lewa,he almost burst out laughing,as the va aproached he grabbed his axe.

SLICE! SLICE! SLICE!

five va were dead,another va had lost one or two arms each. The remaining va staggered back to some lehvak and collapsed.

SLICE! SLICE! SLICE! SLICE!

now all the were dead.

then a lehvak hit lewa with acid,making him fall down,then 8 krana'd matoran

aproached,carrying clubs and knives.

lewa ran off,but then 20 lehvak surronded him.....

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Chapter 14
the lehvak surronded lewa,and started herding him into a cave,now lewa was cornered,he couldn't take on 20 lehvak! "Oh well",thought lewa "at least things won't get any worse" then a lehvak's necked snapped forward,and knoked off lewa's kanohi,and hurled it's krana,a za.
lewa felt the krana latch on,he raised his hands to pull the krana off,but it was stuck.
then the krana began to expand,covering his head,and then emmited a jelly like substance,wich hardened and kepted the krana on.to make things worse,the krana shot out little spickes,that stuck to his skin.
lewa tried to shout "Help!" exept his mouth no longer belonged to him.
lewa felt his limbs move,but he was not moving them.he felt like a puppet,someone else was controlling his movements.lewa tried to scream in horror,but he couldn't.~ha ha ha!~ lewa heard the voice in his head ~do not struggle! your body is mine! I control everything you do!~ ~no! no!~ sobbed lewa in utter despier.~I'll do anything,just get off my head!~said lewa in thought to the za.~I think not,you are now the only krana'd toa,the envy of all bohrok,soon you'll get used to me,already matau is forgetting how to control his body,after time your mind will become smaller and smaller,and accept me as your new master!~

Chapter 15
takua stared in horror at the tahnok,as it moved closer.he quickley opened his pack and took out a disk,the tahnok moved closer.takua took aim and threw with all his might.the disk sent the tahnok flying back thirty feet.
~how?~ thought takua ~a disk couldn't do that much dammage to a tahnok~ then the tahnok flickered it disapeared and reapered,then dissapeared.
then takua saw what it realy was.it was a tahnok va holding a mask of illisiun.~how'd it get the mask?~ thought takua.
then he ran up and grabbed a large stick.the tahnok va aimed it's firestaff and released a blast of flames.
takua dodged and clubbed the va.he then removed it's krana a tahnok va yo.
~I'll give this to tahu.~ thought takua,then he continued his journey to Onu-koro.little did he know what dangers he would face.

cool, more va smashing

That cool CN i like the va bashing and the krana pulping hehhee die va die come to your doom muhhahhahaha      well anyway i think i like GaliGee story on Onua and his Golden Kanohi better but I like yours too.

Chapter 16
                         Onu-koro
takua arrived in onu-wahi,took his favorite ussal,puku down to the caves.he jumped and watched puku scurry back,then he noticed the va.
29 nuhvok va were in the corner,with 8 nuhvok.~Oh no~ thought takua.
"Drop her boys!" yelled onepu.takua looked up and saw onepu with 18 onu-korons.
the onu-korons were holding ropes,and on onepu's command the let go.now that no one was holding the ropes,there was nothing to support the large stone,it fell and smashed all the va.
but not the nuhvok,they were holding the rock up.then 29 nuhvok burst from the ground.....

Chapter 17
                  Po-koro is attacked
                        *Po-koro*
the scouts from the city of po-koro had reported that a swarm of pahrak were aproaching the city with only one thing in mind:destroy.
the toa recently had a meating and had left to gather the krana,there were two groups:Tahu and Kopaka had left to gather the krana of the tahnok,kohrak and if lewa didn't return they would gather the lehvak.Onua,Pohatu,and gali had left to gather the other three breeds.
right now the po-korons were preparing for a attack from the pahrak,they were sharpening knives,cleaning disks,lighting torches,and inproving anything that could become a weapon.huki was polishing his disk,and praticing how to hit pahrak with his koli ball.
but Huki was happy,maku was in po-koro and he would defend her from anything.
already,po-koro had assembled an army and was preparing for attack,and huki had been chosen to lead the army.
"The bohrok are here!" shouted a gaurd from the wall.
"grab anything heavy! grab your disks!" yelled huki."follow me!"he instructed.
Huki climbed up to a ledge on the wall that faced the outside of the city,the ledge was about 200 feat above the gates.
"Desroy the bohrok!" yelled huki and dropped a rock from the ledge,it was about to destroy a pahrak until it held up a pahrak va and the rock destroyed the va,not the bohrok.
already the "army" was doing the same thing,but so were the pahrak.they countinuesly lifted va and the va died,not the bohrok.
~it can't countinue this way~ thought huki,they had destroyed a quarter of the va but only 5 pahrak.~what cowards.they hold up va to shield themselves.~ thought huki.if things went this way with all villages,the va would become endangered.
"forget this! open the gates and attack!"yelled huki.already the matoran were jumping off the ledges and running out the gates to destroy pahrak.
huki jumped off the ledge and went out of the gates.now he was smashing va.huki threw a disk,that desroyed a pahrk's eye.
now huki joined twelve matoran that were destroying a pahrak.then huki felt a searing pain his chest.then huki passed out.

hey people,you don't post opinions,I don't post chapters.

Does my story need anything? does it need less of anything?I'm running out of ideas!

This post has been edited by Cahdok nuva: Jan 1 2003, 05:30 PM

cool, i can tell this fight gonna be good. we like the va bashing and all, but you might be going ott a little bit. its still really good though. keep going

Chapter 18
Pahrak va                        
Huki woke up.he was in his hut and there was a bandage on his chest,"anyone here?" asked huki,"am I invisible or something?" replied maku.

"Maku..." "Huki..." the two matoran embraced,and brought their masks together
"Sir?" asked a gaurd. huki quickly pushed Maku away, and laid down on his bed. "Can we talk later?" asked huki.

"okay,what happened during the battle?" asked huki.

"Well, a pahrak clubbed you and you passed out,you would've died,but onua,pohatu,and gali came and saved us,the pahrak are gone,but they will come back with more bohrok"said maku.

"how may Bohrok were lost?" asked huki,"the pahrak lost half the va they brought with them,and 10 pahrak were destroyed." said maku.

"how many did we lose?" asked huki with curiosity."20 matoran retreated with the pahrak wearing krana,and 30 were injured,and a dozen pahrak and pahrak va disapeared." replied maku.

"that's strange,I wonder were those missing bohrok and va went." huki said with curiosity.

then 7 of the largest pahrak va that huki and maku ever saw stormed into the room.

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chapter 19
            tahu and kopaka's trap,and the nuhvok's plan.
"are you sure this will work?" said tahu."yes it will tahu,I froze the ground with a very light coating of ice,and when the tahnok rush on,their weight will collapse the ice,trapping them in the pit,so we can gather the krana." replied kopaka.then the tahnok rushed in.
                    *onu-koro*
the nuhvok were hard at at work,they were planning to bury onu-koro and it took a lot of time to do things like that,they were creating cave-ins,earthquakes,sonic waves,anything that could work,finaly after all those hours of non-stop working,a whole third of onu-koro caved in.

cool,  loads of battles are about to start, please continue

Chapter 20
            kopaka and tahu's trap
the tahnok charged kopaka and tahu,one of them used it's vu krana,and flew up,the thing hit kopaka and sent him sprawling to the ground."get off mata nui,bohrok!" yelled tahu as he cut the tahnok's arm off.
"SSSSSCCCCCRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEECH!!!!!!!!!!" since the tahnok lost it's arm,it was having trouble flying.The tahnok fell down on some other tahnok and crushed them.
tahu,taking advantage of the tahnok's teamwork,grabed a va and held it up.
"CHICT CHICT CHICT CHICT!!!!!!" the tahnok rushed at tahu,and would have krana'd him but they ran over the ice.the tahnok's weight collapsed the ice and fell into the pit,and were knocked out.
"are you all right kopaka?" asked tahu as he lifted up kopaka."yes,I'm fine let's gather the krana."
the toa used their mirus,and carried he fallen tahnok to the surface to examine the krana.
"the krana is destroyed in this one." said tahu as he cut the tahnok in half and threw it in the pit.
"I have this krana." SLICE! went the magma sword as it destroyed the tahnok.
"ruined."SLICE! "have"SLICE! after tahu destroyed all the tahnok,he had 4 krana.
"let's get more krana" said kopaka.

Chapter 21
                                an illusion?
29 nuhvok burst out of the ground,scaring takua and onepu with his gaurds half to death.
~help me mata nui~  thought takua.then the most surprising thing happened.
there was a giant flash of light,and takua became a yellow toa,with a strange blade dasling with light and was wearing a kanohi simaler to the vahi.
takua smiled.he shot out a blast of light and incinerated 5 nuhvok,but more were coming.
FLASH! FLASH! FLASH!
more nuhvok were gone.then 18 more burst out the ground."Leave the island!" shouted takua and let loose a blast of light,not from the sword,but from his very soul.
FLASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (does anyone know how to get larger print?)
the blast of light incinerated all the nuhvok,threw the matoran back 15 feat,and made the cavern 10 times larger.to takua's disapointment,he turned back into a matoran,dazed.
~what was that?~ thought takua

this is good its really cool

thanks,I'm glad you like it megabohrokhunter582.
                                 Chapter 22
a whole third of onu-koro collapsed.the attack was sudden,swift,and unexpected,homes were burried,fences collapsed,lighstones dimmed and collapsed.It was choas!
"stay in your huts! cover the doors,the windows,cover everything! if you run out you'll be killed!" yelled onepu.if the cave in wasn't enough,a small swarm of nuhvok and nuhvok va rushed in.
                      *Ga-koro*
Gali,onua,and pohatu had returned to Gali's homeland,to rest and to discuss things about the bohrok and how to defend the villages.another important thing was happening,the council of turaga was currently in the village,disscussing ways to defend the villages,defeat the bohrok,and create armies.
because of this,there was tight security,ta-korons with minature firestaffs,spears,and disks.onu-korons with small veichles that were prototype boxers,lightstones that could blind people,and disks.po-korons with clubs,knives,and disks.ko-korons with sharpened ice picks,heatstones that could make people pass out,and disks.the ga-korons who were hosting the meating had giant nets,pumps that fired water and disks.as for the le-korons.....they weren't attending.they had disapeared.but one le-koron called ruka (fallen turtles let me use the name from his fan fic paradise lost)
ruka had been repeatedly babbling about le-koro being enslaved."I'm telling you it's true! all of le-koro is enslaved but me!" the turaga and other matoran had thought he'd suffered a bump on the head wich confused his memory.
since all the turaga had gathered,it was a perfect target for the bohrok.if they enslaved the turaga,the villages would be leaderless.
and everyone was correct,not only the gahlok showed up,but a small swarm of bohrok and va of each breed had showed up.
"SSSSSSSSSCCCRREEEEEEEEEEEEECH!"

sorry if the chapter was lame,but I want to make a battle scene in ga-koro.

This post has been edited by Cahdok nuva: Nov 30 2002, 08:19 PM