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post Sep 27 2003, 02:21 PM
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Chapter 1, Zonarc, Toa of Lightning. user posted image


He Opened His Eyes..... Metal... All Around Him..... SCURSH!!
Water??? Had He Fell In Some? He Felt His Body Stop Suddenly. It Seemed To Get Darker For A Moment And Then Back To Normal. Atfer Awile He Felt Some Thing Scrape The Botom Of His His Transport.
And Then, BAM!!!! His Transport's Lid Shot Off Like A Rocket-Ship! And So Did He. The First Thing He Saw Was That He Had No Legs And Only One Arm. Beside Him Was What Looked Like An Arm Of Metal It Was Silver Like Him.
"Who's Is That?!?!?" He Shouted. Then He Saw It.. It Was His! He Snaped It On.
He Felt Stronger But He Felt He Needed More... What! If he Had An Arm On The Ground He ad To Have Legs Too!! He Looed Around And Saw Nothing. As He Tund Around He Saw His Transport, It Was A Hollowed Tube Of Metal! Inside It He Saw His Legs.
"Thank Goodness" He Mumbeled. Like His Arm They Were Sliverish But More Gray.He Put Them On And Like Before It Gave Him More Power. He Walked Out Of His Tube And Saw Some Thing He Didn't See Before. A Mask! It Was Like An Ovel And Had Two Eyeholes, A Mouth Of Two Circles And Some Other Things He Couldn't Make Out On It.
"Must be Mine" He Said To Himself.
He Put It On. WWHHOOSSSHHHH!!!!!!! Power, So Much! A Storm Of Lightning And Rain Came To His Area. He Looked At Himself, He Had Become Yellow!!! He Was So Frightned He Didn't See That The Storm Left As Quick As It Had Come.
"The Mask Must Of Done This!" He Said "And It Most Likely Made The Storm Come Too!"
Then He Relised That It Might Have More Power! Before He Tried Any Thing ...Zonarc...
"What?" He Said. ...Zonarc...
"Must Be My Name..."
Then He Taped Into The Mask Looking Into It For Power... SSHHOOOOPP!
He Began To Fly!! He Went Above The Clouds And Began To see It.
"This Is What I'm Ment To Do!! He Shouted!!
Then, On One Of The Clouds He Saw Someting Yellow. a Lightning Bolt?
No A Sword! A Lightning Bolt Sword! But How Would He Get It? If He Tried To Get On The Cloud He Would Fall Through!
"But If The Sword Can Stay On It I Can To!" Said Zonarc He Steped On The Clould And Picked It Up.
Then Behind It! Houses? On Clouds? He Flew Over To Investagate.

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post Sep 27 2003, 08:31 PM
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Chapter 2, Rubic, Toa of Power, and Sonaka, Toa of Gravity

Rubic Walked Into The Jungle, He Didn't Know Who He Was, Or Where. All He Knew Was His Name And That He Came In Some Tube. As He Walked He Saw Someting In The Underbrush. Whatever It Was It Seemed To be The Same Color He Was, Green, But Much Smaller. It Darted Away Faster Than he Could Ever Run, But He Still Went After It. Luckly He Was So Fast It Left A Trail For Him To Fallow. But The Next Thing He Knew He Was In Some Sort Of Trap. He Was In A Cage Made Of Wood, He Could Tell It Was Made By An Expert Woodsman. The Thing He Was Fallowing Was Right Next To Him. It Had A Suprised Face On Too.
"Toa Rubic!!!" It Shouted. "I Am So Sorry! I Didn't Know It Was You!"
It Spang The Trap He Was In And The Door Came Down. He Walked Out And Saw That It Was Smaller Than He Thought It Was.
"Who Are You?" He Asked.
" I Am Dera Of Ru-Koro, I Was Out Hunting The Rubohk That Was Som-"
"Wait What Is A Rubohk And Ru-Koro? And Where Am I?" Rubic Asked.
"Umm Turaga Crundye Will Explane It Better."
"Wait! How Did You Go So Fast?" Rubic Asked.
"Oh, That, Its My Mask, The Kakama The Mask Of Speed. It Triples My Speed. I Found It By The Romishk Creek, A Forbiden Creek At The Center Of The Jungle. But Turaga Crundye Can Tell You More, I'm Not Much Of A Story Teller.Now Please Follow Me!"



Sonaka Walked Under The White Gate Of So-koro. A Mortaran Who Called Himself Srondu Led Him To The Odd Village Under Water. He Called It The Village Of Gravity And That He Was The Toa Of Gravity And That He Could Control Gravity. He Walk Into A Hut Taht Seemed To be Made Of An White Rock, Almost Like Pearl Of Some Sort. Inside Was A White Figure With A
Odd Mask With Shapes Like He Hade Never seen Before.
"Hello My Name Is Makren I Am The Turaga Of This Village Of Gravity.
Here We Seek Wisdom And Friendship. Your Mask Lets You Heal All That You Wish. You Can Even Heal That Witch Is Not Living. The Mask You Ware Will Not Be Enough, You Need To Get All The Other Masks Of Power, The First That We Know Over Is Kanohi Teabo, The Great Mask Of Flight. It Is Beyond The Great White Towers. Go There And Fight The Manas Nui A Great Dragon Beast. Go Now Before You Must Fight Her Twin Too.

Sonaka Walked When He Saw A Pair Of Two White Towers Just After The Hill he Was On. He Ran Until He Got There, Just Before He Went Past The Towers He Saw A Mask Just Awile After Them. Just Then A Red Dragon Like Thing Came Out From The Floor.
"I Will Not Let You Get That Mask!! He Fought The Dragon Warrior For What Seemed Like Days Both Of Them Never Got Hit, Then He Went For The Mask.
"Ha!!! I Have It!!!" Sonaka Shouted All The Sudden The Manas Nui Disappared As If It Had Never Been There.
"It Was Just An Ilusion." He Said To Himself In Disbeleaf. "But Is My Healing Power Still Here?"
Ha Called On His Power Of Healing And His Mask Of Healing Came Back.
Than He Called Forth The Power Of Flight And He Flew Up And Up. He Went Forward Into The Island Of Hamra-Nui.

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post Sep 28 2003, 02:11 PM
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Chapter 3 Vibra, Toa of Sound


The dessert was harsh but Vibra had to go thorugh it. He knew how many sand storms went through the Woar Dessert. But because he could control sound he was able to keep them away. Although he could just phase through the sand with his mask, he liked useing his elamental powers. He was on his way to what was known as the Hora-Kini, the great temple at the south-west part of the island. Turaga Doinro had said that the Kanohi Wygo, The Great Mask Of Knowledge was under the great temple. He would travel into the island itself and seek out the mask. Before he even found the Vi-Koro he had 'fallen from the sky' as Doron had discribed it from the legends. He fell into a lake in the south. Also known as The Lake Of Great Energy. It was said that any one that swam in the lake would have its energy restored.
"Dumb heat" he mumbled "why coulden't that 'Great Mask' be in the jungle, where its nice and cool?" He asked the sky who would not answer. All the sudden he saw some green, it started about one mile from where he was.
"Green, that means trees, and shade!!! Whaha!!" He yelled with glee.
he started runing as fast as he could, and after about ten minutes he was there.
"Ahhhh....., nice and, still kinda hot, but not as much. Time to get going"
As he walked he saw a pool of water not so far away.
"Time to cool down" He said with a hint of glee in his voice. He ran and jumped right in. The water was nice and cool, and it was so clear he could see the bottom, that looked like it was about fifteen feet down. He stayed in for about ten minutes of bliss when he felt something in the water move. Next thing he knew he was being pulled under water by some sort of large snake. It looked like a rubber poll that had rusted somehow. It was as brown as the bark on a pine tree. It was much larger than him but he still fought it. It had him so tight he couden't breath even if he was above water. Then he could tell where he was being taken. That snake was a mother, and he was the littile snake's lunch. Then he remembered, his mask! he could phase right through the mama snake. As he did it he relised something else! If he phased, his arm would go right trough the water, and he would sink! So he called on the power of sound to aid him, not only did the snake let go of him but he was pushed up and out of the water. He landed on the ground and got his breath back. Then acting like it never happend, he set out to finish his quest.

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Chapter 4, Dercu, Toa of Time

Dercu liked the fact that there where other toa on Harma-Nui. It made him feel better that there was more power than just his. sometime he wished he coud go back in time to see what his life was like before he came. he was going to, useing his power of time travel, but Turaga Wontara siad that going back may cause him to never return. So he lisend to the wise Turaga, knowing that they were the wisest poeple on the island. He had so far got two of his masks that he needed. The Great Mask Of Phaseing and the Great Mask Of Healing. Now he was after one the Great Golden masks. Turaga Wontara had said that on another island, Mata-nui, it was called six other toa had become toa nuvas, more powerful than normal toa, and lost there golden masks. He also said that there masks had been trasported to this island, and that they were for these six toa on Harma-Nui. As he was walking he saw a hut, it looked like it was made from clay. As he went over to it, he thought he heared someone crying inside it. He walked inside and saw someone crying next to a bed. Onthe bed was a body of a mortaran. The one that was crying looked like a younge girl with a yellow Pakari, a red body, and Green legs. The one on the bed didn't have a mask, but it did have a Green body and blue legs. Over on a desk was a purple Huna that Dercou guessed was the one's that didn't have a mask.
"Are you okay?" Asked Dercou.
" Toa Dercu! Toa of time!!!" Shouted the yellow masked one. "Oh I'm sorry, my name is Malic." The Girl seemed to have lost someone that she held dear to her. "Oh Him, he was my brother, he died saving me from the...." She Stoped, "I'm sorry I've not been feeling good since the accident." She began to start crying and sobing.
"I can help you, little one." She looked up at him. "I can heal him". He changed his mask to the mask of healing.
"Give me his mask" Comanded Dercu. She gave him the mask. Just then his mask glowed brightly, and so did the Huna.
"Put the mask back on him Malic" He said. She put it on him, The mask still glowing sent the light all over his body. A bright light flashed and then, he woke up.
"Wha.. wha... Malic!" He said seeming to still be dazed.
"Nomon!! You're alive!! Thank you Derc- Dercu???" He was gone.


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Chapter 5 Univer-Nigh, Toa of Space


Univer-Nigh felt stange, like new power was with him, more power than ever. He had just found his Gold Kanohi Mask, from Lewa Toa Of Air. He had set out to find this one first, since it was more powerfull than the others. He had just fought the Unevok, one of the six Bohrok that hunted the masks, searching for more power. Turaga Huniskin hade said that six other toa on an island lost theirs, for the price of becoming Toa Nuva. He had one mask since he got there, the Kanohi Rohamb, The Great Mask Of Knowledge. It let him know everthing about space, his element, so he could travel through space without getting lost. He looked at his lime green and purple body, feeling the power rush through him. When he first saw his mask he thought it looked more like a frog than a mask, but when he first put it on he took it back like a mom with a baby. He also had a krana from Unevok, the same one that had the golden mask. After the Bohroks loss, he grabed the mask from it and put it on. Now that he had the powers of shielding speed, strangth, under-water breathing, X-ray vision and levatation, he went back to uni-koro the village in space. It was made up of old hollowed out space junk that they turned into huts. They had many lightstones because it was so dark, being in space in all. He had justcome through the bubble that kept the air in when Turaga Huniskin came up to him.
" You are called to Harma-Nui Univer-Nigh! The other toa have called a meeting!" Said Turaga Huniskin.
" Yes Turaga! I wish to meet 'Zonarc'. He seems like a good match for me." Said Univer-Nigh with a laugh. Huniskin gave him the I-Don't-Get-It-Look. After the pause he said
"Go to the portal I Told the guard to open it for you."
Univer-Nigh walked over to the portal. As he walk throuh he felt the buzzing all over his skin that he got whenever he walk through. When he walk out he saw five other figures.

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Chapter 6: The meeting.

Zonarc was the first to see the newcomer.
"Hello". He said. "I am Zonarc toa of lightning, who are you? Friend or foe?"
"Like he's going to say he's a foe". Muttered Rubic.
"I am Univer-Nigh, toa of space I seek the other toa of this island" Said Univer-Nigh.
The other toa greeted Univer-Nigh, saying their name and element.They then talked to each other to see who got what mask when Univer-Nigh noticed something. On the tower behind them in odd syboles said: The tree is still red.
"What is that???" asked Univer-Nigh amazed.
All the others looked behind them at the syboles. They studyed the markings intill Vibra spoke up.
"I know what it is" All the others looked at him. "Its a riddle". He said plainly.
"What does it mean?"Asked Sonaka.
"Does he look like a Turaga to you?" Said Dercou.
"Well I just hap-" He was cut off by a rumbling comeing from the tower.
RRRUUUMMMBBBBRRRRUUUMMMMBBBBRRRRUUUMMMMMBBBBBBB!!!!!
Dark clouds swept over all of them, bringing a thunderstorm with it.
"Zonarc! What are you doing?!?!" Shouted Dercou over the thunder.
"Nothing!!" Shouted Zonarc. "I can't stop it ethier!!"
All the sudden the tower exploded rained debrise everware. Right after the debrise stop falling, millions of small lizerd like creatures came out.
"RUN!!!" Shouted Sonaka. But Zonarc woulden't run. He stayed behind and fought the lizerds intill he was pulled away from battle by Sonaka.


"Why did you pull me away Sonaka?!?!" Asked Zonarc angerly. They had just got on a cliff next to the now broken tower, where the lizerds could not get to them. After Zonarc had been taken there apart from his will, they got him to stay, insted of chaseing after them."What where those things?" Asked Vibra.
" I know what they are, but I wish I did not." Said a voice from behind them.
" Turaga Gonoua, Turaga of lightning." Said Univer-Nigh with respect. "What are they?" He asked.
"Fiddarz, The controlers" He Said.

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Chapter 7 Gonoua's Story


"I will tell you all I know of the Fiddarz, for I was the first Matoran to meet them." Said Turaga Gonoua

Gonoua walked under the shade of the Hora-Kini. He was a normal Matoran, but he was good at Giron. He had just won the Giron Match aginst Si-koro. Giron is a virtual reality game were two teams ride motor bikes with sticks that could hit the puck and get into the other teams goal. The bikes have laser guns and if you hit the other teams bike they are frozen in the game for five seconds. They won the game 8-10.
He was going to the Yami Lake, Or the Lake of Greet Energy. As he walked to it he saw a purple and white lizard going to it too. It jumped in and Gonoua jumped in after it. It led him to a large under water tunnel. It seemed to call to him, even though he was scared. A bright erie blue light seemed to glow from the tunnel. As he swam to it it seemed to pull him into the strange ball of light. At the top of the cave was a hole. Air! thank god! He swam to the hole at the top and gasped for air. When he got up, he saw what looked like a milloin lizards crawling back in forth. on the wall it said: f.gif i.gif d.gif d.gif a.gif r.gif z.gif .
"What does that mean?" He mumbled. On the other side of the room was six gems, they were purple, yellow, tan, white, green, and light blue. His eyes became wide, wanting them more for the powers they might have. He made his way toward them avoiding the Fiddarz as he went. He went first for the yellow one. as he grabed it, it seemed to go into his skin. He felt himself grow, power of lightning going through his veins. A staff formed in his hands. His mask changed too. He felt power in his mask, the power of sonar inside it. When the change was done, the Fiddarz made a sound that he could tell ment that they did not like what happend. He grabed the other gems and ran. But he took a wrong turn and ended up at a round room full of writeing. Then he saw a lever, he pulled it and a wall came over the way he came in. The Fiddarz stopped, but he had no way out. He began to read the walls. He found out a lot of things, like that he had become a turaga, and that the other gems he had was for five chosen others. Also he discovered that the fiddarz could craw inside the mask and control the victim. Since others could not tell that they were controled by the Fiddarz they could go to Deronga, their masters lair. Reading made him tired so he decided to take a nap, but before he could he saw what he was looking for, the master, his name was Trample.


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Chapter 8. The Escape

Gonoua waited till nightfall to leave the cave. The Fiddarz were waiting for him to leave so they could catch him for their master. Gonoua wasn't happy that he had become a 'Turaga'. He was going to be a leader of the Matoran, that was Deron's job! He was the head Matoan of Za-Koro! He read and read the walls trying to find the way to beat the Fiddarz, but when he found it: none could defeat the Fiddarz. But how will we survive this attack? He thought. Then after he read some more he found out that six heros would come to the island and fight the master of the Fiddarz: Traple, Master of the Fiddarz. He left that night ready to fight the Fiddarz when he came out. But when he got out, there were none left. As he walk around the a corner in the tunnels. Just as he turned, he heard the Fiddarz comeing from behind him. He turned and saw him coming.
"What do you guys want with me!!!!!!!!" He shouted as he ran. Then lightning came from his staff and zapped the first few Fiddarz. But that just made them even madder than before. They ran even faster, wanting to kill him for killing their brothers. Their was a fork in the path, he didn't know what to do. Witch road? If I take the wrong one, I might end up at a dead end, or worse, a room full of more Fiddarz! Ummm... Left!!! He ran left and ended up where he thoght he would. Dead end!! Then, on the floor! A Shaft! But where did it go to? One way to find out! He ran and lept over the hole a free fell into nothing. He heard the Fiddarz jump after him. They won't give up will they? He fell in a pool a water at the end of the hole. Good, not a hard floor. He ran and ran hopeing to find a way out. And then, a light at the end of the tunnel! And a lever! He ran under the door, and pulled the lever. The door came down and killed one Fiddarz, leaveing the others behind the door, alone.
" Thank goodness!" He shouted in relief. He looked out to see where he was, and all he saw was snow lots of it.
"Mount Renoj, great." He said. He walked down the mountain hopeing to find Si-Koro and his friend Makren at the bottom.


Makren Walked out of his hut. It was a peaceful day, and nothing had gone wrong. Or so he thought. As he walked out he saw an odd weak figure walk under the gate.
"Hey! who are you?" He asked as he ran to the lemping figure. Just as he got there, the odd stranger fainted and fell to the ground, its bag's contients falling out. He ran to the fallen Turaga. When he got there, he tried to help him. But one of the gems that fell out caught his attention, he grabed it. It's light became briter than ever, it sank into his skin, it power filling him, he started to grow, and blacked out.

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Chapter 9, Rahkshi Suits (Sorry about the wait, my mind went blank.)

"Lets go." Said Zonarc "We must move, those Fiddarz are going to be kill if we can't get them all!"
"Zonarc! Get down!" Shouted Univer-Nigh. Just then, a large lizard like beasts climbed out of the hole and started after the toa.
"what is that thing?" Asked Sonaka.
"Rahkshi, the Fiddarz must have found them! Said Gonoua.
First, the Lightning Rahkshi, or Zurahk came after them. It hit the groud with its staff, hopeing to send some after them, but Zonarc absorbed it and added it to his own power. Dercou had his own problems. Time Rahkshi, or Deurahk was attacking him with his power. They played a game of time ends and staff hits but no one seemed to be winnig. The Plant Rahkshi or Gonrahk was attacking Sonaka, sending vine after vine after him. But Sonaka was better. He sent gravity wave against the vines and caused them to hit the ground hard. But what he didn't see was Energy Rahkshi, or Honrahk, was comeing from behind. He traped him in an energy flied so powerful if he touched it he would be hurled backwards into the other side, when he would be hurled back and so forth. Sonaka didn't know that.
"Agh!!!" Shouted Sonaka as he was thown back. "Heelllpppp....."
"No, Sonaka!" Shouted Vibra. He ran to the cage but was thrown back, hitting Honrahk!
"SSSSSHHHHHHRRRRRAAAAAAKKKKKK!!!!!!!" Sreched Honrahk. Its Fiddarz came out of its holding place.
"Got it! Shouted Rubic.
"Sorry, thats mine foolish Toa." Rubic turned around and saw something he never thought he would see.



"Help me Malic!" Shouted Noman. "The lizards are coming this way!" Noman jumped out of the way of the Fiddarz and landed on another, killing it.
"That was cool." He said. Malic ran out, hoping to help her brother.
" I got one!" She shouted over the rakit of the Fiddarz. "Here, catch!" She said as she through a poker stick to him.
"Kill as many as you can! Capture some for the Turaga! Shouted Noman. Malic noded her head with a hint of duh-its-not-like-you-haven't-told-me. She went for one, but before she could she felt a bite in her mask, and then she blacked out.

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Chapter 10: Missing!

The Dorom, Turaga of sound, sat in his hut, reading the newfound legends of Hamra-Nui, that the Vi-Koroens had found digging today. They had been digging for hours, trying to find Protodermis. But they found a large opening insted, that had many scrolls of writeing. They had taken them to Dorom once they found them. He was very glad, seeing that they held legends that the Matoran should not hear.
"Turaga Dorom! Come quick! I think you'll want to see this!"
"This better be important Yonga, I'm reading these new legends" He said to the small Matoran with a tan Teabo.
"Its from the Rogues! They left writeing on the tunnels!" Yonga said quickly. "They were attacked by the Fiddarz! And the other Koros have reported sights like this! We think the're all gone!" Dorom looked up.
"Oh my!" He said as he grabed his staff and left the hut. This day had been a bad one. The toa had faced the Fiddarz Nuva. Great beasts that formed when a hundred Fiddarz joined together. They had badly injuird Rubic when he grabed a Fiddarz from a Rahkshi that the Fiddarz had found. Vibra had ripped the Fiddarz Nuva apart useing his sound waves. Yonga brought him to the writing.
"Give me a lightstone, I can't read it" He looked closer and he read it aloud:

We have taken to the tunnels of Vi-Wahi, hoping to find escape from the Fiddarz. They have taken ten so far, we hope to find Vi-Wahi in time to find refuge there. The Fiddarz have taken the northeren tribe. We do not know why they have tageted us, the Rogues. Some think its because we have no Toa to protect us, but I think its some other reason. The Fiddarz have returned to the south, so we must flee from here. We do not know were to go. The north is to dangerous to go, knowing that the northern tribe has been taken. Some say to take to the east, the tribe there is best in defence. Others say to take to the west. They say the tribe there are great disk fighters. I have no idea were to go. Our tribe is in a civil war. We are fighting for our lives, so I understand. But I also beleive that we need to work with each other, then we will win againts the Fiddarz. Now we must

"What happend? It stopped!" Said Dorom.
"We think they were attacked by the Fiddarz." Said Fonor, the mining captain. "If they were, they have been taken. I don't know any other reason he would have stopped. We do know that the leader of the Mahni tribe, or Qutan, wrote that.
"I see." Said Doron "Take Hoken birds and tell the other Turaga. We must find the other Rogues"

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Hello readers, I'm the co-writer, <dd>. Zonarc was given computer leave so he let me add the new chapter. Enjoy.

Chapter 11: Fiddarz Trouble

“Wake up Rubic! Time to make a move!”
“Just give me a few more minutes, Zonarc!”
“You know you are well enough to leave, lazy twit.”
“Am not!” Rubic retorted back as he sat up immediately.

“Good, I see you finally got him up. We have to make a move now to find the Rogues.” Sonaka peered into the hut. Vibra followed suit, so did Dercou and Univer-Nigh. The two Toa nodded and followed Vibra out to the clearing in the village.

Not only were the Toa concerned about the event, all the Turaga have gathered there. No doubt, now the different villages are very uneasy with each other but they had no choice.

“Fellow Toa and Turaga,” Vibra started the discussion, “You all know that the Rogues were attacked by the Fiddarz and have disappeared.”
“We already know that!” Rubic muttered and rolled his eyes at Vibra. He took no notice of him and continued, “We must find them and see what the Fiddarz have done to them in order to ensure the safety of the other Matoran.”

Everyone nodded in agreement to this. Even with all the conflict between themselves, they had to agree, safety is most important now.

“Toa, go back to the cave writing and check for clues. The Turaga will assist if you need information.” Doron instructed.

The Toa bowed in respect and followed the chief miner to the cave. Soon, the writing was in view and Univer-Nigh spoke up quickly, “Immediate abduction.”
“What makes you think so?”
“It has abruptly stopped and you can see a bit of smear on the soil near the last word.”
“Good deduction” Zonarc commented as he pointed at some footprints on the floor.

The intelligent Univer-Nigh examined it closely while the others stood behind him for the result.
“Hmm, quite fresh. A day old perhaps and also by a Rogue and leading in that direction,” he pointed behind him, “And also…”

He looked back at the other Toa, worry in his eyes, “that Matoran was infected.”

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“Turaga, we have bad news!” Fonor tripped and fell onto the floor of the hut.
Huniskin asked, “What is it?”

“The Toa suspect that the Rogues are infected. So are the northern tribe and soon, the other tribes will go with them.”
“Anything more?”
“We suspect that disharmony amongst the Rogues has cost them their lives and freedom. So Zonarc has suggested that we unite and defend ourselves from the Fiddarz.”

The room became silent after he finished his last phrase. No one thought that a virtue could deter harm away from him or her, and such a measure is hard to achieve, but if they have to do it, they have to do it.

“Go back to your villages, friends. We have to publicize the new measures.” The other Turaga nodded in agreement with Wontara. Grabbing their staffs, they made their way slowly out of the hut to their Hoken birds to return home.

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Chapter 12: Who are the Rouges?

Rubic walked under a hujon tree. He was after the northern Rouge tribe. When he first heard about the Rouges he had no idea whi they were, so he went to Turaga Crundye to ask what who they were. He told them that they were hear when they got there. He also told him this story:
Crundye was on a boat. He had no idea were they were or who they were. Up ahead was an island, covered in forests, mountains and deserts. They landed and tryed to find out what they were doing here. He was like all the others, small, green, and had a mask. When they found out that they were alone, they choose to work together. They Matoran walked into the jungle. One Matoran, called Yoje, spotted a movement in the underbrush. When they followed it they found an old city. It was worn down and broken, and many Matoran seemed to live there. They were odd colors, each of them different. Not likr them, the Matoran he was with were all green. The other Matoran were all stareing at them, with a look of discomfort. They accepted them to their city, thinking that they might be able to help them, and all over their island, this was happening to five other Matoran groups.


Rubic was walking, walking, walking. He felt like he had been walking for hours. The Rouge had to have gone someware. He walked tword the Hron Dessert. He saw a group of Matoran walking over a dune, he thought that it might be they Rouges so he ran after them. When he reached them, they had a bad look in their eyes. Their eyes were all a dark blue color. Fiddarz! He thought.

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