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 Oct 16 2003, 11:08 AM
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 Descending into Protodermis  Group: New Members Posts: 994 Joined: 13-August 03 Member No.: 13276 
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Okay This is it.
 Thanks to Dpd, who inspired me to write a Bionicle poem.Dark master Makuta. He's more dangerous than a bazooka. More frightening than Der-stooka! He's Mata-nui's brother, They don't have a mother. He robs the Matoran of thier virtue, now he really wants to hurt you. The kraata are a part of him, they're in his lair thats really dim. Now here comes the Toa of Light, Here they are, ready to fight, Takanuva has just won, and now Makuta is toast and done. Let me know what you think! This post has been edited by Zonarc: Oct 17 2003, 02:24 PM -------------------- My Bookstore....
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Oct 16 2003, 03:09 PM
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  Trusted Trader  Group: Premier Forum Leaders Posts: 11281 Joined: 29-April 03 Member No.: 8266
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That's good! I think your a good poet. You should try some more. The end is especially good. One question though: What is a Der-stooka?
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 Oct 16 2003, 04:51 PM
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Der-Stooka is a water ride in FL that I'm scared to death to ride.  
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Nov 17 2003, 10:01 PM
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 Flying Force!  Group: Premier Members Posts: 2360 Joined: 29-May 03 Member No.: 9654
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Hahaha! This is a good one, Z. Really hilarious. Oh yeah, sometimes water rides make me shriek like crazy, I wouldn't be surprised if Mata Nui heard it from Earth.
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Nov 29 2003, 08:35 PM
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 Tohunga Group: New Members Posts: 30 Joined: 11-November 03 Member No.: 16633
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It's awesome! I read ur two other ones and they're good.
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