this is my first comedy, so tell me if you like it.

Ch. 1 First Encounter

*Midnight at Ga-Koro Main Gate*

Guard1: What's that thing?
G2: I don't know, let's get Nokama.
*Later*

N: It's a white block.
G1: Then how did it get here?
N: I don't know?
G2: I wish the BCS was near.
G1: Yeah, I need a cuppa joe.
*At the BCS*

J: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Runs outside, gets hit by a brown blur and blows up.*
*Head falls through the roof and into coffeemaker.*

T:
*Back in Ga-Koro*

G1: Did you hear something?
G2: You mean the screaming and big boom? No.
N: I didn't either.
*That day*

Macku: What's that thing?
Hahli: I don't know.
M: It's a Rahkshi egg
H: No it's not!
*Hahli kicks white block into water*
*White foam appears where block was thrown into water*

M: It's reproducing
H: Noooooooooooooooooo ittttttttttttt isssssssssssss notttttttttttttt.!!
*Nokama comes running over*

N: What's going on here?
M: The white block is reproducing
H: No it's not. It's just a bunch of bubbles!!!
M: Then, what's the white block?
H: I don't know.
*Ta-Koro*

Vakama: I never saw anything like it.
Jaller: I don't know what it is.
T: I got fired, no, really. Tahu got mad at me.
J: That's not hard to believe, I mean-
T: Hey!!
J: As I was saying....I mean, he probably took one look at ya and got mad.
T: Okay, that's it !!:burnmad:
*Takua and Jaller starts to fight*
*Takua wins*

T: That'll teach ya!
J: Owwwwwwwww.....my back!
V: That was uncalled for, but very amusing.
J: Hellooooooooo. I'm in pain here!
T: Why thanks, Vakama.
J: Helloooo. I'm in....oh, forget it.
J: Hey, where's the white block?
V: I don't know.
T: I don't know.
J&V: Takuaaaaa, what did you do?!
T: I threw it into that conveniently placed tub of water.
*Onu-Koro*

Tiapu: What is that?
Onepu: I don't know.
Whenua: Search me.
T: Okay.
*Starts to search Whenua*

W: What are you doing?!
T: I'm searching you.
W: Well, stop it!!
T: Okay, okay, I'll stop. Shesh....
O: Tiapu, you're weird.
T: What did you say?!
O: When Whenua said "Search me", he didn't really mean search me.
T: Oh.
W: The white block is slick and icky.
T: So?
O: It's the reason I have to be near you.
T: Hey
O: What? I've been with you for one minute. I can't stand to be with you for one second.
T: What about after you defeated all the Rahi on mnolg?
O: That was an act!!

to be continued

coming soon: Ch.2 The Visitor

This post has been edited by krata zi: Jul 16 2003, 05:11 PM

pm me if you want to guess star

This post has been edited by krata zi: Jul 16 2003, 09:48 AM

Thats really funy, but what is the white block?

That was preeeeetty wierd ! I didn't really understand it.

jeez man jjust get on with the story!!oh and ill be some machanic expert named leraku

You'll find out what the white block is sooner or later, you could try and guess and I'll tell ya in a pm if your right, but that's up to you. I knew some people would think it's weird. Give me some time to make the next chapter , after a few more replys I'll post it.

It was funny.Post more!Post more!
I`m a sheep!Errr...sorry about that,I was expressing my happiness!

It might take a while for the next chapter, I've got work to do around the house so don't expect the next chapter anytime soon.

Awww...hey,its been a long time since you last posted your story.You should tell whoever is making you do the housework that you need a break.

I know it's been a long time , but I've got to do this and I work on the story on paper in my spare time

It has been a long time, but I finally got something, It's an interveiw with a toa coming to the story, so, without further ado, the interveiw:

Z: So........., you.......like.........CHEESE.
ToC: Ya, how did you know?
Z: Lucky guess Toa of Cheez, lucky guess
ToC: Wow, you're lucky!
Z: Not luck, just oblivious guesses.
ToC: Huh?
Z: Ya, I thought you'd say something like that.
ToC: WOW, you must have ESP or somthing!
Z: Shut up, we ran out of time.
ToC: I think I ate too much cheese.
*ToC barfs on floor*
Z: EEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWW, oh ya, and another thing, WOULD YOU SHUT UP
ToC: You look like that flamehead guy!
Z: SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ToC: fine, shesh
Z: Hey, look, I can turn into a smilie!

This post has been edited by Zipher-Toa of Lazers: Nov 4 2003, 07:55 PM

That's pretty good! I thought you were interviewing me! I'm Toa of Comix! (ToC)