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 Jul 16 2008, 03:51 PM
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Welcome to BZP.
You're writing is okay, but there's a problem. Your first chapter is unfortunately too short to be allowed. I suggest you lengthen it quickly. And please go through the Forum Rules. -------------------- |
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Jul 16 2008, 04:08 PM
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like the fighting but 80 words to go till you are done
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