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Oct 9 2003, 03:32 PM
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![]() Encountering Protodermis ![]() Group: New Members Posts: 886 Joined: 1-April 03 Member No.: 7168
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If you've ever looked at my sig, (and you should, because I think you'll like my epic) then you know that I am Purple Pohatu, Pohatu Nuva's long-lost twin brother (only purple) and Bio-Musketeer of Unity. However, we were both born human. How is this true, you ask? Well, when Pohatu and I were little, Mata Nui chose Pohatu to become one of his heroes that would defend the island of Mata Nui if anything happened to him. He was taken from our family, and for many years, we didn't see him again.
What do you think? It's my second-ever "fanfic" (although it's not a fic), so it might not be that great. Tell me your opinions!
-------------------- Fandom Review The Story of Purple Pohatu Lovesick Spirit Double Agent Christmas Miracle How They Left Me Lurker CTY Canon Songfics: The Day The Music Died (American Pie) Proud Bio-Musketeer of Unity! 99.9% of teenagers hate sig fads. If you're among the .1% who don't, you probably have something like this in your sig already. |
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Oct 9 2003, 03:38 PM
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Seeker ![]() Group: New Members Posts: 224 Joined: 27-July 03 Member No.: 12551
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I always wondered why you were purple. Interesting story. I like it.
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Oct 9 2003, 04:58 PM
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Makuta Conquered! ![]() Group: New Members Posts: 592 Joined: 27-March 03 Member No.: 6935
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It was good, but, as I have said before, Purple Pohatu, Why isn't your name Purple Pohatu Nuva?
-------------------- I am Onepu, Bio-musketeer of Duty (see if you can find the other two).
Do you think my avatar is weird? Please read my epic, Negative, here, and find out why.Avatar by Phoenix Nuva. |
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Oct 9 2003, 05:07 PM
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![]() Encountering Protodermis ![]() Group: New Members Posts: 886 Joined: 1-April 03 Member No.: 7168
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Because the alliteration is just too cool to get rid of, and besides, I already have this cool emorphicon (Big thank-you to my mask, Purple Kakama, for that) and my sig to show what I look like.
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-------------------- Fandom Review The Story of Purple Pohatu Lovesick Spirit Double Agent Christmas Miracle How They Left Me Lurker CTY Canon Songfics: The Day The Music Died (American Pie) Proud Bio-Musketeer of Unity! 99.9% of teenagers hate sig fads. If you're among the .1% who don't, you probably have something like this in your sig already. |
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Oct 10 2003, 04:08 PM
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![]() ![]() Nuhvok-Kal Collapsed Group: Premier Outstanding BZP Citizens Posts: 4367 Joined: 5-June 02 Member No.: 720
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Well, Purple Pohatu, thanks, that clears up the mystery! Good thing you like purple (and I like blue). My kid, pohatu jr, saw your name the other day and just about flipped, her favorite color is purple and her favorite Toa is--you guessed it--Pohatu.
That's a really cool story, the way your twin was taken and changed, and you got to, too. That holographic 'watch' sounds useful. That way the little kids at the grocery store don't point and stare... -------------------- GaliGee's Stories Redux
![]() I'm back after being banned because my account was hacked. My old stories topic is gone and some of my stories were damaged, but I'm restoring them with a little help from Shadow Vahki. Thanks for bearing with me while I get it back together! |
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Oct 10 2003, 06:15 PM
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![]() Emerging Flying Force ![]() Group: New Members Posts: 2218 Joined: 17-April 03 Member No.: 7903
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Ha yeah about lets see 5 years ago i was doing the same(note im 12 1/2 i just act older) and the holograhic watch is cool well PP good job
Rate: 9.5/10 -------------------- ![]() ///////////////Mr. Not-so-up-to-date-on-the-new-Bionicles// ///Osnap I'm being Active//Proud Co-founder of the OACP// ////////////////////Ohai. I'm Kanta//Credit to Swert for Siggy// |
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Oct 17 2003, 04:18 PM
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![]() Encountering Protodermis ![]() Group: New Members Posts: 886 Joined: 1-April 03 Member No.: 7168
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Thanks, GG! Yeah, I would definitely have to be homeschooled or something if it weren't for that watch. I'd try and get one for you, but I don't think they made any more, because the one I have was their prototype and they probably would have contacted me again if they started to make the real thing. Sorry. And thanks for everyone else's comments, too! Just because you aren't one of the best writers on BZP doesn't mean I don't appreciate your feedback. Also, if you liked this, go check out my epic, Fandom (and review, please). The link is in my sig if you want to see it.
-------------------- Fandom Review The Story of Purple Pohatu Lovesick Spirit Double Agent Christmas Miracle How They Left Me Lurker CTY Canon Songfics: The Day The Music Died (American Pie) Proud Bio-Musketeer of Unity! 99.9% of teenagers hate sig fads. If you're among the .1% who don't, you probably have something like this in your sig already. |
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Oct 17 2003, 04:44 PM
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Emerging Mata Nuian Protector ![]() Group: New Members Posts: 1665 Joined: 15-January 03 Member No.: 4186
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Nice story! I thought GG was the only other Toa thing... I say thing, since I'm a hybrid, and she's a prototype... I like Purple, too. It got replaced by red and green a couple years ago, though. I like the watch... I need one of those... Hey, GG, I'll fight you for it!
-Tnf This post has been edited by Toanuvafreak123: Oct 18 2003, 03:43 PM -------------------- |
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Oct 17 2003, 08:44 PM
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Conqueror of the Swarm! ![]() Group: New Members Posts: 724 Joined: 15-June 03 Member No.: 10616
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Well that explains so much. Although i would rather like to be some color like orange or something if i had the choice. But i'm kinda stuck with this black nuva armour and it's not like i can have surgery on it because the doctors freak out if they see me.
Well, I cant change my color but Courage is a cool power to have so I guess i can't argue. Great Auto biography. Purple Pohatu. -------------------- WHOAA
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Oct 22 2003, 03:04 PM
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![]() Encountering Protodermis ![]() Group: New Members Posts: 886 Joined: 1-April 03 Member No.: 7168
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What about Tapaka the TH? And GG doesn't have one of the watches, because they didn't make any more. And Purple Kakama is a member, who apparently looks just like my mask. And, uh, yeah, I hate to agree with you, but nobody actually goes to Short Stories by clicking on "Short Stories" at the Library Forums list. I've only ever come here through links in people's sigs. Thanks for your comments, people. And remember, if you like this, read my epic in progress, Fandom, and review, please! -------------------- Fandom Review The Story of Purple Pohatu Lovesick Spirit Double Agent Christmas Miracle How They Left Me Lurker CTY Canon Songfics: The Day The Music Died (American Pie) Proud Bio-Musketeer of Unity! 99.9% of teenagers hate sig fads. If you're among the .1% who don't, you probably have something like this in your sig already. |
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Oct 23 2003, 05:21 PM
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![]() Toa Nuva Defeated ![]() Group: Outstanding BZPower Citizens Posts: 3840 Joined: 28-April 03 Member No.: 8208
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I don't need one of those watches. If people start looking at me wierd, I shrink-wrap them.
Nice origin story. I like stories that blur the line between fantasy and reality. (Which is one reason I enjoy GaliGee's comedies so much.) Now I'm off to read your epic. - ToP -------------------- ![]() ![]() ![]() [ToP's Story Center][My Bricklink Shop] Thanks to -Vahki Commander- for the avatar. Toa of Plastic: 100% Plastic, 0% Protodermis |
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Oct 25 2003, 08:57 PM
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![]() Encountering Protodermis ![]() Group: New Members Posts: 886 Joined: 1-April 03 Member No.: 7168
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And what line am I blurring here? This is 100% true... if you're willing to believe me. See, you can deal with this two ways. Click the blue link, and you can stay at home and just talk online about Bionicle, and keep thinking it's fiction, like you do now. Click the red link and read that page, and you can find out how much of the truth you never believed, just because you didn't know for sure. It's time to choose. Red Link.... or Blue Link? Believe what you want. And thanks for reading Fandom, ToP, and anyone else who did! Remember to review it! Okay, the "Red Link"/ "Blue Link" stuff was a cheap Matrix knockoff. The red link takes you to Fandom, and the blue link takes you back here. Deal with it, and if you go red, review, please!
This post has been edited by Purple Pohatu: May 18 2004, 03:08 PM -------------------- Fandom Review The Story of Purple Pohatu Lovesick Spirit Double Agent Christmas Miracle How They Left Me Lurker CTY Canon Songfics: The Day The Music Died (American Pie) Proud Bio-Musketeer of Unity! 99.9% of teenagers hate sig fads. If you're among the .1% who don't, you probably have something like this in your sig already. |
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Oct 28 2003, 05:54 PM
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![]() ![]() Ice Warrior Group: Premier Members Posts: 1994 Joined: 15-March 03 Member No.: 6384
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i like your epic and this, musketeer of unity. even though ive heard it before
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Oct 28 2003, 07:53 PM
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Scavenger ![]() Group: New Members Posts: 607 Joined: 24-October 03 Member No.: 16004
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That's kind of funny to me because I live on Mata-Nui Just my dad Makuta won't let me go out and play. -------------------- It is I, Flamen, Back from the dead!
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Oct 30 2003, 05:07 PM
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![]() Encountering Protodermis ![]() Group: New Members Posts: 886 Joined: 1-April 03 Member No.: 7168
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Hey, that makes this an historic event! This is the first topic to be posted in by all three Bio-Musketeers! And thanks for both the compliments, Musketeer of Destiny! (Must we really call each other that?) Oh, and Mirahk, thanks, but this is for discussion of the story, and why the Censorahk from the Minor Stories of Iti-Ao: Watch your language, you purple freak! Hey, get out of my post, you little.. Censorahk: I said watch your language! Watch your own language, you pitifully powered product of protodermis! As I was saying, why in the world did you have to quote that post? You have made the text that is not to be known public knowledge! Please change it. Keep posting! And if you feel inspired to read Fandom, please do so and review that as well! (Toa of Plastic is not a good example of this
This post has been edited by Purple Pohatu: Nov 1 2003, 02:53 PM -------------------- Fandom Review The Story of Purple Pohatu Lovesick Spirit Double Agent Christmas Miracle How They Left Me Lurker CTY Canon Songfics: The Day The Music Died (American Pie) Proud Bio-Musketeer of Unity! 99.9% of teenagers hate sig fads. If you're among the .1% who don't, you probably have something like this in your sig already. |
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