 "matoro's Mission", S&T Contest 2 Entry |
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 Sep 9 2008, 08:28 PM
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Good story. There were a few grammar errors, but the story was still good. The descriptions were good as well. Good job.
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"A book becomes a classic when people who haven't read it begin to say that they have." “And I suppose you fly, right?” Kopaka asked [the frog] sarcastically.~Nameless, chapter 12 |
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