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 Feb 27 2006, 08:04 PM
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 Defender of Mata Nui Defeated  Group: New Members Posts: 3186 Joined: 13-January 04 Member No.: 18927 
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This topic is dead. Please follow the movie over here.
"...was an obvious rip-off from LOTR..." -Dark709 "This is one of the most mature and complex sprite movies I've ever seen. The difference between this movie and Oomb(Origin of Malice Borg) Is that your movie relies on a mix between action and Plot, and Dark's sequel relies on plot but is still mature and complex..." -Ravnas "Okay there are so many twists in this movie i can't even count them all!" -:Yami: "I spent around three hours watching all of the episodes in a row, and I must say I like them. There is a reasonable balancing of humor and serious occurrences, and the animation is acceptable. Yes, the movie is quite entertaining. Keep up the good work." -The Prophet of Logic  This movie has actually been in production since December 2004. It was in my topic, Lavaside Rahi and Lady Ervai Comic Studios, because when I started I feared that I couldn't update it nearly enough to have it as a stand-alone topic. But lately, I've been getting much more into it, updating it more often, to the point that I finally threw away my fears and created the topic you view before you. The epic story of evil unbound, treachery, loyalty, and the fight for freedom... Be aware that many of the posts in this topic contain spoilers. Read them at your own risk! Animators: -lavaside rahi -Hatok: The Kitoran -JJ -.:Johnuva:. Part One: The Rise of a New Evil Episode 1 Episode 2 Episode 3 Episode 4 Episode 5 Episode 6 Episode 7 Episode 8 Part Two: The Rescue Mission Episode 9 Episode 10 Episode 11 Episode 12 Episode 13: So what have Larry and Tarry been doing this whole time? (Flash episode, contains Music) Episode 14 Part Three: Quest for the Castle Episode 15 Episode 16 Episode 17 Episode 18 Episode 19 Episode 20 Episode 21--Part One---Big Version with Music, by Taipu Hafu Kaita! Episode 21--Part Two---Big Version with Music Episode 22---Big Version with Music, by Taipu Hafu Kaita! Episode 23---Big Version with Music, by Taipu Hafu Kaita! Part Four: The Comic Land Episode 24 Episode 25 Episode 26 Episode 27---Big Version With Music, by PePena! Episode 28 Episode 29 Episode 30 Episode 31 Episode 32 Episode 33--Part One Episode 33--Part Two---Episode 33 With Music, by Old Man Kittens Episode 34 Episode 35 Episode 36 Episode 37 Part Five: Battle for Mata Nui Episode 38 Episode 39  Promotional Material: Now for something completely different... (This uses some scenes that are from the original versions of the first episodes, not the remakes.) Banners(delete the enter):  CODE [url=http://www.bzpower.com/forum/index.php?act=ST&f=14&t=204399] [img]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/lavaside-rahi/LRs-Comics/larrybanner.png[/img][/url] Made by JJ:  CODE [url="http://www.bzpower.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=204399"][img]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/JuJu/myartwork/lrcomicsmoviebanner.png[/img][/url] Guest Starring Information: All spots full. Any future GS requests will be rejected. Interested in making a sprite movie? Look no further. Credits: -Draconic Evrahk for her multiple story tips, insights, and the following scenes she wrote up: ---Lady Evil's birth--- ---The Birth of Evrahk Eternal--- ---Makookoo's Offer to Evrahk Eternal--- ---Hahli's Betrayal/Charlene's Transformation--- ---Jaller's Kids decide to help--- ---Lady Evil's predicament/Jaller's kids--- ---Takanuva's Second Home--- -Superkid for all his help! For posting, for guest starring, for his tips, his dedication, his ideas... -PePena for the improved poster! -Razor, Sephi-Hatu, and Tohvu for the Razor Sprites -Smeagol4 for the Bohrok Sprites -Rayg for the Rahi Sprites -Core Defender for the Bulid A Koro Kit -Soru for the Weapons Kit -Dark709 for his Chimoru Kit, which was used to create the Bahrok. Credits also go for some of the Comic Land backgrounds and the sprites of BZ-Metru guards. -Leppy for his Project Razor 360 MUSIC Credits: Movie Comic 13: -Dick Dale and the Deltones for their famous song, "Misirlou". Movie Comic 21-Part 2: -Howard Shore and his Lord of the Rings soundtrack for "A Journey in the Dark", "Hope Fails", and "The Bridge of Khazad". The drums were from the "Good, Bad and Ugly" theme, by Ennio Morricone. -lavaside rahi This post has been edited by lavaside rahi: Aug 19 2009, 01:16 AM -------------------- My Comics Are Over Now... but I did write a bit about comics on my blog... In no particular order, my favorite comic series: Nuparurocks` Comics: Season Beta - IIMT - Tapika's Comic Emporium Gavla's Comics 4.0 - Darcsyde's Comics Version 2.0 - Alternative Reality Inc. (3L)˛: Live, Learn and Lawsuits™ - Ben Toa Of Fire Comics - SK Inn |
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Feb 28 2006, 05:37 AM
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cool yah finnally made the topic good on yah *bookmarks for future whatching* sorry i cant whatch it now but ive got things to umm do 0-0 and stuff...
GO PEANUTS the dreamer signeing out~ -------------------- note jokes lr's comics (and movie) rakas comics of vampires cees comics b-shelf the talk show: its good i promise!
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 Jun 12 2008, 09:48 PM
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hi lr.i am a big fan of your comics!I WATCHED every single episode!but i must ask when are more episodes coming out? i just wanna say something for the finel episode ITS THE FINAL COUNT DOWN!
            p.s.i am sad that your comics will end so soon! 
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Jun 18 2008, 05:44 PM
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hey your right.......lr is not responding to our posts.maybe he is on vacation or something?
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Jun 26 2008, 11:19 PM
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Defender of Mata Nui Defeated Group: New Members Posts: 3186 Joined: 13-January 04 Member No.: 18927
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I'm back! And I have a new episode! And I know it's not enough to make up for the incredibly long wait I've put you all through, but it's something to move the plot along.
Episode 37 This post has been edited by lavaside rahi: Jun 26 2008, 11:19 PM -------------------- My Comics Are Over Now... but I did write a bit about comics on my blog... In no particular order, my favorite comic series: Nuparurocks` Comics: Season Beta - IIMT - Tapika's Comic Emporium Gavla's Comics 4.0 - Darcsyde's Comics Version 2.0 - Alternative Reality Inc. (3L)˛: Live, Learn and Lawsuits™ - Ben Toa Of Fire Comics - SK Inn |
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Jun 26 2008, 11:28 PM
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This movie is very good. The plot is fantastic, the action, the drama, the fights, are all amazing. The parts with music make it even more awsome. one of the best movies i have seen on BZP next to Darks. My fav part would have to be Dark709 fighting you, yet he is Bromatu insted of Dark.
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Jun 27 2008, 12:03 AM
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 Defender of Mata Nui Group: New Members Posts: 2130 Joined: 28-March 04 Member No.: 21471
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I'm amazed you can still do this with your busy life, must be quite a challenge. Even if this episode was short, it still had a lot of plot value.
Looking forward to the journey to Ko-koro! By the way... did you know that Dark just recently cleared his GS list in one comic like you did?
--------------------  Sukid's Stream of Consciousness Does choking on bionicles make you think of Bionicle? I am not accepting any flashification or animation jobs at the moment. Don't call me, I'll call you. |
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Jun 27 2008, 12:07 AM
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Yay! Plot stuffs! I really want to see that inevitable battle!
And how the Ko-Koro thing wirks out.  Looking forwards to mores |
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Jun 29 2008, 04:44 PM
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 Descending into Protodermis Group: New Members Posts: 965 Joined: 21-March 04 Member No.: 21239
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You're really quitting, LR? Ugh. This isn't my fault, is it? Oh, I have been gone for so long!
--------------------  QUOTE(Kyeti @ Oct 24 2008, 02:03 PM) Run away!! She's EVIL!!! |
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 Jun 29 2008, 04:48 PM
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FINALLY
  !!! It was short but worth it. But what happend to LE?
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Jun 29 2008, 07:34 PM
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Impatience is a virtue, one that will one day cause your face to catch fire *See above post*
My guess is LE was missing from the episode so that LR doesn't have to animate her enitre scene of re-meeting everyone |
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Jun 29 2008, 10:42 PM
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 Fluidic Master Nuva Group: New Members Posts: 1301 Joined: 7-May 03 Member No.: 8499
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Oohh hurray! A new episode! Nicely done too, a bit lacking in action but still, it's moving us right along and that is a good thing.
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Jun 30 2008, 12:29 AM
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 Toa Group: New Members Posts: 137 Joined: 24-November 06 Member No.: 48174 
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I am now wondering how could LR live in a hut so small. Because as far as I know, Matorans don't have dimensionally transcendental technology.
No one seems to notice how dark the other half of the mask is. Strange -------------------- Signature Guidelines: Image size may not exceed 250x100 combined or 468x60 combined.
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Jul 14 2008, 02:50 PM
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PLEEEEASE stay alive! This cannot die!'
LR, you should get a co-author. Maybe. --------------------  |
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Jul 14 2008, 05:32 PM
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Juju (JJ) sorta is... and Superkid is a possibility, or me, or... someone who still animates and isn't nonexistant on BZP...
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 Jul 28 2008, 07:12 PM
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 Tohunga Group: New Members Posts: 44 Joined: 26-November 05 Member No.: 36914 
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This is an amazingly "Lord of The Rings"-esque movie. I'm not saying that as a bad thing, but as a compliment. Keep up the good work LR.
-Blademan Out -P.S. Nice plot twist with Dark709. --------------------  Apparently I'ma EMERGING ICE WARRIOR...SCOTT PILGRIM STILL RULES, SEE THE MOVIE IF YOU HAVEN'T ALREADY!! |
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Jul 29 2008, 12:11 AM
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So this is similar to LoTRs huh.
Villains made of grapes, heh
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Jul 29 2008, 12:18 AM
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Defender of Mata Nui Defeated Group: New Members Posts: 3186 Joined: 13-January 04 Member No.: 18927
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-------------------- My Comics Are Over Now... but I did write a bit about comics on my blog... In no particular order, my favorite comic series: Nuparurocks` Comics: Season Beta - IIMT - Tapika's Comic Emporium Gavla's Comics 4.0 - Darcsyde's Comics Version 2.0 - Alternative Reality Inc. (3L)˛: Live, Learn and Lawsuits™ - Ben Toa Of Fire Comics - SK Inn |
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Jul 29 2008, 12:20 AM
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QUOTE(lavaside rahi @ Jul 29 2008, 12:18 AM)  Oh boy! The movie continues! The grape soldiers were genius. And your animations rival Dark's!
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Jul 29 2008, 12:22 AM
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Toa Group: New Members Posts: 137 Joined: 24-November 06 Member No.: 48174
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I knew it, Bionicles do have blood. Although they are half fruits.
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Jul 29 2008, 12:38 AM
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QUOTE(Takanuva Toa of Twilight @ Jul 28 2008, 10:20 PM) And your animations rival Dark's! Yeah...no they don't. Dark can do some awesome stuff and he has shown the courage to try new things every now and then. I'm too stuck in my old ways. QUOTE(Domek the DK @ Jul 28 2008, 10:22 PM) I knew it, Bionicles do have blood. Well, Grape Juice anyway...
-------------------- My Comics Are Over Now... but I did write a bit about comics on my blog... In no particular order, my favorite comic series: Nuparurocks` Comics: Season Beta - IIMT - Tapika's Comic Emporium Gavla's Comics 4.0 - Darcsyde's Comics Version 2.0 - Alternative Reality Inc. (3L)˛: Live, Learn and Lawsuits™ - Ben Toa Of Fire Comics - SK Inn |
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Jul 29 2008, 12:42 AM
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QUOTE(lavaside rahi @ Jul 29 2008, 12:38 AM) QUOTE(Takanuva Toa of Twilight @ Jul 28 2008, 10:20 PM) And your animations rival Dark's! Yeah...no they don't. Dark can do some awesome stuff and he has shown the courage to try new things every now and then. I'm too stuck in my old ways. QUOTE(Domek the DK @ Jul 28 2008, 10:22 PM) I knew it, Bionicles do have blood. Well, Grape Juice anyway... I guess, but the action was cool
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Jul 29 2008, 10:20 AM
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 Turaga Group: New Members Posts: 71 Joined: 25-May 07 Member No.: 57674 
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yay! the movie is still on!
so the comic land is joining in this now? this is gonna get interesting... -------------------- The First Annual CCC Awards! Check it out! |
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Jul 29 2008, 01:11 PM
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 Tohunga Group: New Members Posts: 37 Joined: 2-June 07 Member No.: 58080
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YAY! A new clip! Awesome Ideas, great battle!
One Idea: Glue their compasses into a position where they think they are going in the right direction, but have the wheel stuck in a position where the ship hits a cliff. -------------------- PLEASE RESPOND! I am Requesting questions for ASK THE VOYATORAN!
Also worth reading: The Kikianlo Launching Competitions! I'm a railroad nut and proud of it. Are you? Take the train. Do it. Ever wondered what a Burlington Northern Genset would look like? I built one. |
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Jul 29 2008, 03:09 PM
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You know, I'm actually kinda confused by the timeline of Mata-nui. In Dark709's 2nd movie some matoran are migrating to the comic land (which I presume is after the "mask of light" saga). Then, a couple years later, LR's movie comes out with The matoran of Mata-nui gleefully living thier lives (until the Grapes come along), NOT BUILDING BOATS TO RIDE TO METRU-NUI LIKE THEY ARE SUPPOSED TO! Can someone explain this time related plothole to me?
-Blademan out
-------------------- Apparently I'ma EMERGING ICE WARRIOR...SCOTT PILGRIM STILL RULES, SEE THE MOVIE IF YOU HAVEN'T ALREADY!! |
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Jul 29 2008, 03:44 PM
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QUOTE(Blademan Toa of Eternal Doom @ Jul 29 2008, 04:09 PM) You know, I'm actually kinda confused by the timeline of Mata-nui. In Dark709's 2nd movie some matoran are migrating to the comic land (which I presume is after the "mask of light" saga). Then, a couple years later, LR's movie comes out with The matoran of Mata-nui gleefully living thier lives (until the Grapes come along), NOT BUILDING BOATS TO RIDE TO METRU-NUI LIKE THEY ARE SUPPOSED TO! Can someone explain this time related plothole to me? -Blademan out ... LR's Movie doesn't always have to be canon with Dark709's movie nor the Bionicle canon. It's his movie. He can do whatever he wants with it. Great episode LR! I really like how you always manage to make your episodes-even just as gifs-as smooth as possible! I especially liked the battle in 38.-Ker -------------------- [Banner pending]
Comics will be back.... At some point Credit to Dark709 and Razor for the sprites in my avatar. |
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Jul 30 2008, 12:14 AM
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LRs movie can barely be said to fit into a canon other than his own: The Matoran of mata-nui are aware of Rahaga and Rashkshi, yet live peacefully, meanwhile Bormatus role in episode 33 is impossible because of his role in ~~~~~~~~~~~3~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Soo... yeah. Anyways LR, I absolutely LOVED the new episode, the quailty was amazing, and you yet again got so much across with very few bits of animation, I like how the swimming animation literally used two premade parts, and notihng more, and Jallers fight was great, using 3 poses you got across something you might see in an action movie. Flashified version coming soon... Oh and I'm playing around with a Flash based mini-project, keep an eye out for some reason! |
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Jul 30 2008, 04:25 PM
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I just had a thought: If the Matoran form of these grapes are grapes, then the Turaga form of the grapes are... raisins?
-Tomdroidser -------------------- Now Entering: The Rise of DarkSaber
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Aug 4 2008, 12:29 AM
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 Conqueror of the Swarm! Group: New Members Posts: 698 Joined: 6-March 05 Member No.: 30160
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Yeah... and if they had Toa, they would be cranberries! Or something else grape-related...
Well, I loved the new part, it was amazingly smooth and I liked when the explosion hit. Screenshakes FTW! ~ToT~ -------------------- "You wake up in the morning, and your missing your curtains, carpet, and the water's boiling. Which one of those problems do you deal with first? None of them! The building's on fire!" -House "I think we can all look forward to the time when these three theories are given equal time in our science classrooms across the country, and eventually the world; One third time for Intelligent Design, one third time for Flying Spaghetti Monsterism, and one third time for logical conjecture based on overwhelming observable evidence." -Bobby Henderson Daisy, Daisy, give me your answer, do. I'm half crazy all for the love of you. It won't be a stylish marriage, I can't afford a carriage. But you'd look sweet upon the seat of a bicycle built for two. Daisy Bell, Henry Dacre. |
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Aug 4 2008, 12:31 AM
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 Battling Makuta! Group: New Members Posts: 521 Joined: 1-April 05 Member No.: 31026
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I agree with Superkid: I loved the part with the bomb! Things definitely aren't improving for the matoran. They may be holding off the grapes for now, but how long will it last? This movie just keeps getting better!
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Aug 4 2008, 03:09 PM
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Wow, that's some pretty gruesome grape-murderings!
That episode was awesome. KUTGW It'd be impossible for all the movies on BZP to fit into the same canon. Although many use the comic land and Hapori Tohu etc.     
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Aug 4 2008, 10:08 PM
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this movie is great I love the battle against bormatu
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Aug 13 2008, 09:17 AM
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Nice movie, great storyline! But the beginning had a slow frame rate. And razor doesn't have a good walking movement, so next time (if there is a next time), you should use a different kit.
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Sep 11 2008, 10:02 AM
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Sounds interesting... JJ gets an upgrade to full animator?
Glad you're doing something to speed the process along. |
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