A Life Of Open Wounds - Review Topic, "... Move along. Nothing to see here..." Options

[Moutekea]

The Epic Thread - You'd have to read this before posting here, of course.
Epic "Blogside": For reviewing chapters individually, or to read the latest chapters before they are posted in the actual Epic thread.

Ancient Mirrors - Epic Thread: For all you Epic lurkers. 8D
Ancient Mirrors - Review Thread: Because it would be irresponsible not to link it. *chuckle*
Ancient Mirrors "Blogside": For reviewing individual chapters.

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Rules are simple. Just follow the board guidelines, and you'll be just dandy. Also, if you are going to talk about the plot, please use spoiler tags. I don't like people spoiling the Epic's plot for themselves by reading this thread. *grin*

With that aside, feel free to discuss away.

-Mout

EDIT: linkfix.

This post has been edited by Moutekea: Sep 3 2008, 11:24 PM

[King Kobra]

A good start to what looks to be a fantastic prequel =D the storyline is great so far and the Artisan is a good character that I got attached to really quickly. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I do have one gripe, though. You seemed to give half the Matoran you mentioned a Ruru. I dunno if I just read something wrong but like 3 people in a row had it, so my suggestion is cut back on the Rurus XP


KK=-

[Moutekea]

*notices a the typo*

Shoot. Ahkmou never wore a Ruru... he wore a Rau. Thanks for the heads up, King Kobra. I'll get that fixed. *grin*

As for the Artisan, his Le-Matoran friend, I chose the Noble Ruru simply because it's a simple mask, and after seeing so many Matoran in 2001 wearing that particular mask, I figured it was super-common. Plus, unless it's really dark, the Ruru is just a mask, and nothing more. The 'common-ness' and 'plain-ness' of the Ruru just helps compound the fact that the Artisan and his friend are just your run-of-the-mill Matoran. Hafu on the other hand... Hafu was one I can't avoid, as Hafu is a canon Bionicle character and he has always 'officially' worn a Ruru.

Anyways, many thank yous for the review. After I fix that typo, I'll be putting up the next chapter tonight.

-Mout

[King Kobra]

Wow, that chapter was all you needed to permanently get my attention for the rest of the Epic lolz

What a show! Loved everything about the chapter, and I think it would be cool to see a video version of it XP already can't wait for the next installment!


KK=-

[Moutekea]

I'm pleased you enjoyed it, King Kobra. *grin*

As for an animated verson of the chapter, that was the original idea for it, but time and life got in the way... Ah well.

Anyways, chapter 3 is up, and tomorrow. I'll start getting the table of contents ready for you guys.

Thanks for reading! 8D

-Mout

[King Kobra]

Aw, I SO wish that you could've ha time for the animated version. I've actually been thinking about making an animated Bionicle Music Video (hand-drawn) and I'm currently looking for In-Betweeners in the animating process, if you're up to it =D

Chapter 3 is awesome, I love the whole outlaw deal with StealthShadow, it brings some extra excitement and a good dose of action to the story. The I'm very much hoping the conflict between Kalile and Sailaye ends out happily.

Oh and just out of curiosity, how do you pronounce 'Sailaye'?

And on a side note, if you would like a banner for this epic, I would be happy to make one! After reading this much of it I want to show my support of such beautiful writing


KK=-

[Moutekea]

By all means, feel free to make a banner for this Epic, King Kobra! It would be an honor. *bows with a smile*

I'll give your offer on working the tweenings, King Kobra. Right now is a rather chaotic time, so I'll let you know when things have slowed down, ay?

Anyways, I've finished getting the thread set up. Thank all of you for your patience. Watch for chapter 4!

-Mout