 S&t Contest #6: A Thousand Years Untold 2, Six Settings---Six Short Stories---Six Winners |
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 Jun 14 2010, 02:19 AM
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QUOTE(Xander004 @ Jun 10 2010, 01:57 AM)  QUOTE(bonesiii @ Jun 8 2010, 11:11 PM) As an authorized Contest Judge, I have read and judged this entry: Nektann’s Trial by Xander004 I see problems with this entry. Mostly grammar, a few minor story problems. Easily fixable. I've edited my entry according to what was pointed out in the review, and I also reworded a few things that I felt needed to be done. EDIT/UPDATE: Another mistake was found in my entry dealing with a few things (grammar/spelling). May I have permission to edit it. Yes, you have permission to edit the story again. --------------------  |
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