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post Sep 19 2002, 06:23 PM
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Chapter 1 Prologue
In the beginning,there was a mighty king toa,of goblin tohunga.He was a mighty warrior,and in which carried the great mask,Gomiru,in which the mighty king had the power to
create life,either after death,or if another soul was needed to assist,he could create it.But,only he could use this mask.So,in the Great battle of the Before Time,he was killed by the most vicious soul.Ancient Makuta.He swore to Ancient Makuta that when the time comes,his ancestor will kill his ancestor.So,three hundred years later,a Le-Koroan tohunga found a small baby in the jungle.But,this baby had the mark of the king,his Gomiru.He was named Lewatu.
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post Sep 19 2002, 06:44 PM
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Chapter 2 The watchfull Toa
Lewatu had long since grew up,and the Le-tohungans loved him.In fact,Lewa was his best friend.Instead of being a tohunga,though,he was a Toa!Matau Had named him Toa of Goblins,because he carried the mask.But,since Mata-Nui had awaken,he told Matau Lewatu needed to search for his Masks.So,Lewatu packed his things,and was about to leave,when Lewa showed up."I'm going with you."Lewa said,in a stern voice.*push*"No,your not.I have to do this on my own."Replied Lewatu."No one will help me."And with that,Lewatu sped off,into the trees."Ah....The trees."Lewa thought."I shouldn't of taught him how to leap trees."Now,Lewatu had found an abandoned Kakama,and thought it looked like a good peice of armor,but since his mask made life,He was able to use the kakama withought even putting it on.So,we left off with Lewatu flying through the trees.Running,he found a miru,and blew it off the branch with the explosive bomb-power of his hatchet.Ahh...."Now with speed and hovering,I can fly."He thought.So he bounced off the tree,and went for a little test drive.Oh,and if you didn't look,he has hand made leaf armor.
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post Sep 19 2002, 08:26 PM
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Chapter 3 First Fight
Note:Lewatu has found all of his masks.Since he believes he cannot stay in one Koro for long,he rights a note.....
Dear Lewa,my best friend,I have to leave.Being older than I,you should know what I am talking about.I have to live my own life.I will make my own island,on the Kumu inlets.You and any of your people are welcome.Expect many a tohunga on my island,The Island of my great grandfather,the Goblin King.Matau should know what I am talking about.Goodbye,friend.
And with that,Lewatu traveled to Onu-Koro to buy a lightstone.
He was in a deep cave,maybe lost."What is this place?Where am I?"Questions flew throughout Lewatu's mind as he walked on.Sudennly,He saw a dark figure,running very fast."STOP!STATE YOUR NAME!"Lewatu yelled as the figure got closer and closer.Lewatu would have to fight his first fight.


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post Sep 19 2002, 08:34 PM
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Chapter 4 Geomancer vs. Lewatu
And with a loud CRASH!Lewatu was flung into a wall."Geomancer.....but how do I know this being's name?!?!"
And with another swipe of his sword,Geomancer attacked."GET AWAY FROM ME!"Bellowed Lewatu as he shot an energy bomb at Geomancer.Stunned,Geomancer tried standing up.Lewatu noticed and infected Miru on his face.With another explosion,Lewatu knocked off the infected mask,and Geomancer was on his feet again."Uh....who are you?"Geomancer wondered."I am Lewatu,Toa of Goblins,and,I,just,defeated you in a battle!""SO?Big whoop."And with an elbow in his chest,Geomancer was on the ground again.


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Chapter 5midlogue{just like prolouge,but in the middle}
Lewatu had parted with Geomancer,and had gotten a lightstone.He then met with Pohatu,and Pohatu greeted him in to Po-koro for a game of koli.As soon as the game started,a battle issued.The Ancient Makuta's ancestor,Makuta,had just attacked.Pohatu and Lewatu had used their speedy kakamas to power up their kicks and punches,and severely injured Makuta.He returned to the shadow world.After relaxing,Pohatu asked if Lewatu would join the fight with the other toa against Makuta.He replied"No.This is the original toa's battle.My destiny might be to destroy him like his Great grandfather did to mine,but I will face him after you defeat him.The profecies say Makuta will not die.He will retreat.Then will it be my time to face him."
Lewatu packed new supplies and headed for Ga-Koro.
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Chapter 6 Water Heart
Now Lewatu had arrived in Ga-koro.He knew most of the villagers,but had never met the Toa of water,Gali.He traded,restocked,and packed his supplies.But he needed a place place to stay.He told Nokama."Why,yes,Lewatu,you can stay.Won't this be your first time meeting Gali?""Yes."
Then,suddenly,a beautiful blue body appeard.It was Gali."She looks so beautiful.And graceful."Lewatu thought."Hello,great toa."Nokama replied."Ahhh,my lady,I have never met a more beautiful girl than you.""Why thank you.Oh,your Lewatu!Your cute!"Gali said cheerfully.



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Chapter 7 Red mind
Lewatu had left Ga-koro after a splendid time with Gali.He was on his way to Ko-koro to deliver some news to Nuju and to meet Kopaka.While on his way to Ta-koro to go to Ko-koro from cable car,he was attacked by a Kane-ra!The giant beast launched forward and threw him into the air with it's horns.Lewatu landed with a loud THUMP!The Kane-ra began to charge.He{Lewatu} was hit by a large hoof,and got his arm broken.By now,he was dazing in and out of consciousness,and the Kane-ra was about give him the final blow,when none other than Tahu,Toa of fire,came to his rescue.Tahu knocked the infected masks off,and with that the beast was gone.Lewatu blacked out,and Tahu brought him to Ta-koro.
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Chapter 7 part 2 Red mind
"Tahu,come here.Look at this."Vakama said quietly."What is that stuff"Tahu questioned."An infectious wound.That Kane-ra did him good.But look at this!His wounds are healing!And at a rapid speed,I might say so myself."Then,WHOOSH!Lewatu fliped over,trembling with fear."Lewatu!Lay down now!"Tahu roared.Lewatu suddenly felt his body aching and healing,all at the same time.His back was blistering hot.He felt it."WHAT HAPPENED TO ME!?!?!?!"He screamed."Apparently,he doesn't remember anything about the Kane-ra."Tahu wispered.
When Tahu and Vakama looked up,Lewatu's bag and body was gone.Tahu ran outside the hut.Lewatu was running with his bag up the stairs to the cale car.He was going to Ko-koro with a ripped-to-shreds back.Tahu pondered how it must feel to have that kind of back,flesh being smelt from one hundred miles around."Nuju will heal him.I know he will."Vakama sighed."That toa is one crazy villager."


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Chapter 8Makuta's power
Well,Lewatu had gotten to Ko-koro.Nuju healed him.He was asleep.Dreaming."NO!NO!"He screamed in his mind.*evil voice*"I will destroy you!I will rip you to shreds!Your blood will be mine!Your strength will be mine!Behold my power!"Makuta roared.Suddenly,a giant black beam of energy went to hit him,when he jumped up."AAAAHHHHHHH!"Nuju entered the room."Is everything alright?""Makuta wants to kill me!"Lewatu replied."Well,I think we all know that{duh!}."
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Now,the toa have desended into Makuta's lair."Makuta!You shall pay for what you did!LEAVE THIS ISLAND!"All of the toa screamed,Lewatu watching.Suddenly,all of their powers merged together and sent Makuta to the underworld."I will return!"Makuta snarled.Lewatu knew he was right.Suddenly,all of the toa and Lewatu fell far beneath Mata-Nui.Swirling,choking,changing,all of the toa arised."WE HAVE BECOME THE TOA NUVA!"The toa cried.{yatayatayata,you know how they get out,but Lewatu is with them}Suddenly,Lewatu was ripped into a black fog.He was going to fight Makuta on his own island.{In season 2}And yes,in my story,the bahrag come after Lewatu destroyes Makuta!They became the Nuva now!THE END!EVEN THO IT WAS SHORT,I AM GOING TO MAKE A SEASON 2!Reply in the new review topic!



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