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Purple Pohatu
post Oct 9 2003, 03:32 PM
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If you've ever looked at my sig, (and you should, because I think you'll like my epic) then you know that I am Purple Pohatu, Pohatu Nuva's long-lost twin brother (only purple) and Bio-Musketeer of Unity. However, we were both born human. How is this true, you ask? Well, when Pohatu and I were little, Mata Nui chose Pohatu to become one of his heroes that would defend the island of Mata Nui if anything happened to him. He was taken from our family, and for many years, we didn't see him again. sad.gif Then, one day, a Lego employee came to our house and told us what had happened. Since TLC would now be creating a toy line revolving around my brother's story, they would be able to have some of the Toa's Earth families come see their relatives. But, he warned, my brother had been drastically changed by becoming one of Mata Nui's Toa, and my parents probably shouldn't see what he looked like now. My parents agreed to let him take me to see my long-lost brother, and we left for the nearest Lego headquarters. When we arrive, I was taken to the Bionicle area. I saw amazing things that I am not at liberty to reveal there, along with GaliGee (who I didn't know at the time) becoming a prototype so they could make the toys. But most of all, I remember seeing my brother. He looked completely different, even from the other Toa, but as soon as I heard him say something to one of them, I knew it was him. We were very emotional then. After all, we had been closer than even normal brothers and sisters, and I hadn't seen him in years! After all the gooey showing of emotion was over, he offered to show me some stuff. That included pretty much every current non-Toa toy, some of which he wasn't allowed to see because he was part of the storyline. Then, I decided to go back and see what was happening to the person I now know as GaliGee. When I got there, they had finished getting the specs of all the forms and transformed her into a shorter version of Gali. When she had left, I asked the person working with the equipment that had been used on her if he could change me to look like my brother. We are twins, after all, and he now looked nothing like me. The guy agreed and started up the machine. However, there was a strange error in the color, and I wound up purple! I told him I could deal with that, since purple is my favorite color, but I definitely could no longer live a normal life looking this way. But those Lego guys have an answer to everything. They gave me a hologram projector I could wear as a watch to look like I did before. I thanked them and the man who had brought me there took me home and gave me a phone number to call to get the Mata Nui operator. After the Toa became Toa Nuva, I came back and was changed again, just like GaliGee. I told them to keep the purple. It looks cool. psychotwitch.gif

What do you think? It's my second-ever "fanfic" (although it's not a fic), so it might not be that great. Tell me your opinions!


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post Oct 9 2003, 03:38 PM
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I always wondered why you were purple. Interesting story. I like it.

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post Oct 9 2003, 04:58 PM
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It was good, but, as I have said before, Purple Pohatu, Why isn't your name Purple Pohatu Nuva?


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post Oct 9 2003, 05:07 PM
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Because the alliteration is just too cool to get rid of, and besides, I already have this cool emorphicon (Big thank-you to my mask, Purple Kakama, for that) and my sig to show what I look like. user posted image

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post Oct 10 2003, 04:08 PM
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Well, Purple Pohatu, thanks, that clears up the mystery! Good thing you like purple (and I like blue). My kid, pohatu jr, saw your name the other day and just about flipped, her favorite color is purple and her favorite Toa is--you guessed it--Pohatu.

That's a really cool story, the way your twin was taken and changed, and you got to, too. That holographic 'watch' sounds useful. That way the little kids at the grocery store don't point and stare...
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post Oct 10 2003, 06:15 PM
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Ha yeah about lets see 5 years ago i was doing the same(note im 12 1/2 i just act older) and the holograhic watch is cool well PP good job


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post Oct 17 2003, 04:18 PM
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QUOTE (GaliGee @ Oct 10 2003, 04:08 PM)
Well, Purple Pohatu, thanks, that clears up the mystery! Good thing you like purple (and I like blue). My kid, pohatu jr, saw your name the other day and just about flipped, her favorite color is purple and her favorite Toa is--you guessed it--Pohatu.

That's a really cool story, the way your twin was taken and changed, and you got to, too. That holographic 'watch' sounds useful. That way the little kids at the grocery store don't point and stare...
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Thanks, GG! Yeah, I would definitely have to be homeschooled or something if it weren't for that watch. I'd try and get one for you, but I don't think they made any more, because the one I have was their prototype and they probably would have contacted me again if they started to make the real thing. Sorry.

And thanks for everyone else's comments, too! Just because you aren't one of the best writers on BZP doesn't mean I don't appreciate your feedback.

Also, if you liked this, go check out my epic, Fandom (and review, please). The link is in my sig if you want to see it.


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post Oct 17 2003, 04:44 PM
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Nice story! I thought GG was the only other Toa thing... I say thing, since I'm a hybrid, and she's a prototype... I like Purple, too. It got replaced by red and green a couple years ago, though. I like the watch... I need one of those... Hey, GG, I'll fight you for it! sly.gif Anyway, I have a question. How did your mask make the Purple Pohatu emoticon? Did you slam your face into the Keyboard until something happened? tongue.gif Heh-heh, the note at the bottom is funny, too. "Although it's not really a fic". LOL! I may do a story of me one day, but I doubt anyone'd care... but no one ever goes into short storys besides me and GG anyway... tongue.gif
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post Oct 17 2003, 08:44 PM
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Well that explains so much. Although i would rather like to be some color like orange or something if i had the choice. But i'm kinda stuck with this black nuva armour and it's not like i can have surgery on it because the doctors freak out if they see me.

Well, I cant change my color but Courage is a cool power to have so I guess i can't argue.

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post Oct 22 2003, 03:04 PM
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QUOTE (Toanuvafreak123 @ Oct 17 2003, 04:44 PM)
Nice story! I thought GG was the only other Toa thing... I say thing, since I'm a hybrid, and she's a prototype... I like Purple, too. It got replaced by red and green a couple years ago, though. I like the watch... I need one of those... Hey, GG, I'll fight you for it! sly.gif Anyway, I have a question. How did your mask make the Purple Pohatu emoticon? Did you slam your face into the Keyboard until something happened? tongue.gif Heh-heh, the note at the bottom is funny, too. "Although it's not really a fic". LOL! I may do a story of me one day, but I doubt anyone'd care... but no one ever goes into short storys besides me and GG anyway... tongue.gif
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What about Tapaka the TH? And GG doesn't have one of the watches, because they didn't make any more. And Purple Kakama is a member, who apparently looks just like my mask. And, uh, yeah, I hate to agree with you, but nobody actually goes to Short Stories by clicking on "Short Stories" at the Library Forums list. I've only ever come here through links in people's sigs. Thanks for your comments, people. And remember, if you like this, read my epic in progress, Fandom, and review, please!


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I don't need one of those watches. If people start looking at me wierd, I shrink-wrap them.
Nice origin story. I like stories that blur the line between fantasy and reality. (Which is one reason I enjoy GaliGee's comedies so much.) Now I'm off to read your epic.

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post Oct 25 2003, 08:57 PM
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QUOTE (Exo-Toa of Plastic @ Oct 23 2003, 05:21 PM)
I don't need one of those watches. If people start looking at me wierd, I shrink-wrap them.
Nice origin story. I like stories that blur the line between fantasy and reality. (Which is one reason I enjoy GaliGee's comedies so much.) Now I'm off to read your epic.

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laugh.gif You shrink-wrap them? Wouldn't they suffocate? laugh.gif
And what line am I blurring here? This is 100% true... if you're willing to believe me. See, you can deal with this two ways. Click the blue link, and you can stay at home and just talk online about Bionicle, and keep thinking it's fiction, like you do now. Click the red link and read that page, and you can find out how much of the truth you never believed, just because you didn't know for sure. It's time to choose.


Red Link.... or Blue Link?

Believe what you want. wink.gif

And thanks for reading Fandom, ToP, and anyone else who did! Remember to review it!

Okay, the "Red Link"/ "Blue Link" stuff was a cheap Matrix knockoff. The red link takes you to Fandom, and the blue link takes you back here. Deal with it, and if you go red, review, please!
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post Oct 28 2003, 05:54 PM
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i like your epic and this, musketeer of unity. even though ive heard it before
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post Oct 28 2003, 07:53 PM
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QUOTE (Purple Pohatu @ Oct 25 2003, 09:57 PM)
QUOTE (Exo-Toa of Plastic @ Oct 23 2003, 05:21 PM)
I don't need one of those watches. If people start looking at me wierd, I shrink-wrap them.
Nice origin story. I like stories that blur the line between fantasy and reality. (Which is one reason I enjoy GaliGee's comedies so much.) Now I'm off to read your epic.

- ToP

laugh.gif You shrink-wrap them? Wouldn't they suffocate? laugh.gif
And what line am I blurring here? This is 100% true... if you're willing to believe me. See, you can deal with this two ways. Click the blue link, and you can stay at home and just talk online about Bionicle, and keep thinking it's fiction, like you do now. Click the red link and read that page, and you can find out how much of the truth you never believed, just because you didn't know for sure. It's time to choose.


Red Link.... or Blue Link?

Believe what you want. wink.gif

And thanks for reading Fandom, ToP, and anyone else who did! Remember to review it!

Okay, the "Red Link"/ "Blue Link" stuff was a cheap Matrix knockoff. The red link takes you to Fandom, and the blue link takes you back here. Deal with it, and if you go red, review, please!
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That's kind of funny to me because I live on Mata-Nui Just my dad Makuta won't let me go out and play.


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post Oct 30 2003, 05:07 PM
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QUOTE (Niushirra @ Oct 28 2003, 05:54 PM)
i like your epic and this, musketeer of unity.  even though ive heard it before

Hey, that makes this an historic event! This is the first topic to be posted in by all three Bio-Musketeers! And thanks for both the compliments, Musketeer of Destiny! (Must we really call each other that?)

Oh, and Mirahk, thanks, but this is for discussion of the story, and why the

Censorahk from the Minor Stories of Iti-Ao: Watch your language, you purple freak!

Hey, get out of my post, you little..

Censorahk: I said watch your language!

Watch your own language, you pitifully powered product of protodermis!

As I was saying, why in the world did you have to quote that post? You have made the text that is not to be known public knowledge! Please change it.

Keep posting! And if you feel inspired to read Fandom, please do so and review that as well! (Toa of Plastic is not a good example of this glare.gif )


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