Lotw, by Seth Options

[Seth 360]

Meanwhile waiting the Doom of Mata Nui-book two, you can keep your hats on, becouse now starts to freeze! Seth proudly presents: Lord of the Wolves.


"My name is Kaapu. I wasn't always a hero. I was supposed to be a normal Tohunga, a farmer. I had a hut somewhere at Mount Ihu's snow fields. I also had lot's of chikens flowers and my dear Ussal, Hatu.
I lived happily in my hut. But one day, when I was on a hunting trip, Tahnoks attacked my hut. They destroyed it, burnt my flowers and killed my chikens. Why? Back then, I didn't have any answers... Now I do! It all started 2 years ago: I was coming back from my hunting trip. The sun was shining and the snow shined like silver. I was walking in the forest. All trees were in a snowy cover and I felt happy. Then i saw some smoke above the trees. "Did I leave the campfire on?" I tought. I walked a bit forward and then I noticed, that the smoke was too big for a campfire. I started to run. I ran about five minutes, and then I arrived to my hut. It was all in fire. My chikens were dead on the snow. And Hatu had disapiered. I ran to find him, but without succeed. I fell on my knees on the snow and looked in the sky. That day I sweared: "I hate these Bohroks! I swear, that some day, I will punish them from what they have done!! And I won't rest, until all of them are DEAD!!!!!"

Months passed, a year went over like a lightning bolt. One year and four months later I was walking at the Ko-Koro bazaar. I was on my way to the blacksmith, Kaporu. I asked for a sword from him two weeks ago and he said it should be ready in two weeks. So now I was on my way to get the sword. His hut was kinda big compared to other huts. I went in. Kaporu saw me coming in and said: "Hello Kaapu!" and I answered:" Yes, hi again, Kaporu. I came to take my sword." "Ah! Yes! Your sword, let's see..." he started to move some stuff and then he finally found the sword. It was dusty, gray and the holder looked like 100 years old. "That?" I asked. "Don't let the outlook to fool you. It's a good sword." Kaporu said and gave the sword to me. I bought the sword and left from Ko-Koro. I was awalking at the Mount-Ihu's only forest.(In that forest was his old hut too.) Then suddenly, the ground started to shake. I grabbed from a tree that I wouldn't fall down. Then the shaking stopped. I continued walking, untio I came to a waterfall. I dropped my sword and took my bottle from my bag and filled it with water and putted it back to my bag. I was just about to leave when I heard some howling. I didn't see where the howling came, but it came somewhere nearby the waterfall. I looked to the waterfall a bit closer. And then I went to the water. It was warm and I started to swim to the waterfall. I swam under it and there was a cave. And now I saw where the howling came. It was a big wolf two times bigger than I and the cave seemed to have collapsed on it's feet. "Poor animal." I said. I went next to it and it seemed to be scared. I didn't know why I started to take away the stones. I quess i didn't want to see the Wolf to die in it's pains. When i had taken all the stones away the Wolf stopped howling and started to lick me. And after that we were always friends.

After 4 weeks the Wolf was totally healed. It could walk well again. When I was swimming in the little lake the wolf came to watch on the beach. "What shall be your name?" I asked and the Wolf sat down. "How about... Drake?" I suggested, but the wolf goed on it's stomach on the snow and covered it's ears. "Not then..." I said. "What about, Fenris?" the Wolf seemed to like that name so I kept it. Then was the time for the long planned revenge. After two months, me and Fenris went back to Ko-Koro. Iwas riding on Fenris's back. Other tohunga stared at us but we didn't care. We went through the village, from the gates and then we got on the other side of the lava river. And at last, we got to the Tahnok-cave and we went in. It was dark, but I took my lightstone from my bag and we could see again. After a little while of walking I heard something. "Stay here, Fenris." I said and Fenris sat down. I took my sword from my back and sneaked forward. The cave took us into a big hall. There was a lot of lava and rocks. There was also 4 Tahnoks. I whisteled silently that the Tahnoks wouldn't notice me. When i had whisteled, Fenris came. "Ok, Fenris. Now as we planned, remember?" I commanded and Fenris nodded. It sneaked on the other side of the hall without voice and sat down for wait my signal. I rised my sword in the air-the signal. Fenris bounced on one Tahnok and started to scratch it. All the other Tahnoks looked that way, as they were planned. I waved my sword backwards and threw it to one Tahnok. The Tahnok didn't even see what killed it when the sword pierced into it's body. I ran quickly and took the sword from the Tahnok's back and jumped on another Tahnok and thrusted the sword threw it's shell. "Two left!" I thought. I jumped on the nextby being Tahnok, cutted it's hand and jumped above the lava pool. I would have dropped there if we wouldn't have practiced this with Fenris. Just before hitting the lava Fenris jumped and grabbed me into it's back and we flew on the other side of the lava pool. Other of the remaining Tahnoks tried to catch us by jumping on the other side of the pool, but Fenris jumped at the same time. And when the Tahnok and we were at excatly same place above the lava pool I cutted it's other hand of with my sword and the Tahnok fell into the lava pool and melted. But then the last Tahnok hitted Fenris and it flew far away. And I ofcourse fell down becouse I was on him. The Tahnok tried ot hit me, but i dodged it just. Then it got a shot to me. I flew on the other side of the hall. My sword flew away from my touch. The Tahnok took a big stone and walked at me and threw it. I thought that was my end. But then when the stone was wery close at me, Fenris jumped, pushed me away from the place where the stone would crash. He tried to jump away himself but the stone crushed his back feets. He howled loudly when the stone hitted his legs. The Tahnok looked at Fenris in wonder and meanwhile I got my sword back. I jumped hardly and thrusted the sword in to the Tahnok's torso. "Now! Tell me! Why did you attack my hut and destroy all I had??!!" I screamed. "We.... We were on a hunting trip and we saw your hut and we wanted to destroy it." the Tahnok mumbeled. "Why?" I asked again. "For fun." said the Tahnok. "For fun? FOR FUN????" I screamed. "How do youself feel if I do THIS for fun!?" I screamed and pulled the sword and cutted the Tahnok's head of. I breathed there heavily for a while. I dropped the sword and ran to Fenris. It's legs were still stuck behind the stone. I tried to push the stone away, but it was too heavy. I tried couple more times but the stone was way too heavy. I breathed a little bit and looked at the wolf into it's blue eyes. Into it's pretty blue eyes, and I said: "Not like this." I took some speed and rushed to the stone. And it moved. It moved away enough, that Fenris could take his feet away from there. I looked that the wolf was okay, and then I fell on the ground. And I smiled. First time in 1 and half a year I smiled. Then i felt so tired. I closed my eyes and sleeped. In the morninng I took some sticks from the trees outside and patched his legs up with them so it could somehow walk. And we walked back to Mount Ihu. This is how my story ends. Now I live at the cave behind the warerfall with Fenris. And from that on, the people of Ko-Koro call me: Kaapu-Lord of the Wolves.

THE END

[shataranuva]

that is real good.your a good author.wright another one!

[Beisbeis]

A rather interesting piece of literature. Quite enjoyable with some nice action.

A tip I would give you is to try breaking up your paragraphs, especially with the last large chunk of writing. It helps conversations flow smoother, and your story will be quite better for it.