 Aftermath: Book I: Review Topic, Review my very first Epic here. |
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 Jul 6 2008, 08:21 PM
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I loved the last few chapters, they were awesome.
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Jul 6 2008, 09:23 PM
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 Tohunga Group: New Members Posts: 38 Joined: 27-September 06 Member No.: 45906 
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Hey, Scar; long time, no see. XD
Glad you liked 'em! I have a question: Do I need to improve on anything? Cause, like, you're pretty much the only person who actuallys reads this, so I'm a little concerned about BU's wellbeing. --------------------  (Credit to Kal the Guardian for the banner.) Broken Unity/Review Current Status: Updated as of 12/14/10 (Chapters till completion: 6) Night Ride ~ Day Run: The Garden ~ Rise of the Rockets ~ Day Run/Night Ride/Broken Unity Universe Characters -- in Photoform! 8D ~ |
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Aug 31 2008, 09:41 PM
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ooh... these recent chapters are good, Levious is beat by these new spiders, Levrok learns how to fire a bow blind, and Vuelo is a Nidhiki in thought to honor of a Toa
QUOTE QUOTE QUOTE - Identify all the Orbs earlier as well Hm... I don't know; I find that if I do that, it will take away from BU's mystique... well, you could name them or reference to them without talking about their power, creation or location (talk about some in riddles maybe.) ex. what is the element to this riddle: I devour dragons, ruin kingdoms, and eat all flesh away. What am I? - Time And congrats on the game and the Premier Membership, you deserve it. This post has been edited by SCAR: Aug 31 2008, 09:47 PM -------------------- |
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Aug 31 2008, 10:00 PM
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Tohunga Group: New Members Posts: 38 Joined: 27-September 06 Member No.: 45906
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Heh; just goes to show that you should never judge by looks or handicaps. =P
(BTW, I have new Xaeda pictures.) Hm... Not bad, not bad... Only problem would be finding an appropiate place to put them. XD Thanks!  So, thinking of what to do for the next chappy. I'll probably drop in on Dága again -- he gets way too many breaks. I might see what Kitheus is up to, though not completely sure about that... Aaand, once again, I'm updating the Kovian and Vuelo storylines. Stay tuned! -------------------- (Credit to Kal the Guardian for the banner.) Broken Unity/Review Current Status: Updated as of 12/14/10 (Chapters till completion: 6) Night Ride ~ Day Run: The Garden ~ Rise of the Rockets ~ Day Run/Night Ride/Broken Unity Universe Characters -- in Photoform! 8D ~ |
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