Review: Final Convergence, Review Masters of the Void 3 Options

[Toa of the Stars]

Okay! This is the review topic for the last book in my Masters of the void seiries. If you haven't read the other books in the story, you probably should read them first. The plot is confusing enough as it is.

Here is a link to the epic: Final Convergence

The other parts of this series are in my sig.

Please check them out!

I'll be posting a lexicon in a little bit.

[<daydreamer...]

Ooh, I saw the new epic and it was sweet!! That Matoran was an eye-opener. Where did he come from? (I suffer from short term memory loss ) Small yet strong, luv it!

[HauNuva]

In an effort to relocate my review to the proper place, I have moved my review for the first chapter here from the WfOM review topic:

Amazing. Simply amazing. Your first chapter was wonderful; I don't remember this Toa, but I do remember Chrunus (spelling?). Presumably that chapter was set on the world where Kopaka was sent...it's amazing that you can keep all these plot threads going! I can't wait to find out what's happened to Antati and Co, last I heard they picked up those void-slaying weapons...

Your descriptions were are as stunning as always. The images of 'verdant novas' and 'domes of blue fire' crackled with the energy of a high-budget movie. It's amazing how high-quality you've made this story! I could imagine the frantic battle going on, and in the midst of it, the one character debating if it's really worth it.

Your character depictions were so incredibly realistic. I love the 'variation' in the way you portray emotion. Some of your characters despair; others burn with anger and a desire for revenge; others simply soldier on in the face of adversity. This person was definitely near despair, and I thought you portrayed that marvelously well. The way he kept wondering if 'it was still worth it' was stunningly realistic.

And the plot seems to be developing...the Dark Gods are going for the Source around here, whatever that is. Your convoluted and wonderful plot may be a bit...confusing to new readers, though, because it has so much depth and tone. You could post a sort of 'lexicon' explaining terms, gods, and Toa, so readers could keep the new Gods and Toa straight.

BTW, I'd like to say that I think Desh Narizan is one of the coolest villains BZP has ever seen.



Sorry for the repeat, but hey, I'm still looking forward to the new chapter!

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[<daydreamer...]

Ok guys, Toa of the Stars PMed me to tell you all this:

He is laden with a lot of homework so he is not able to read all your stories. He might when he comes online again.

That's all and hopefully he will come back soon.

[HauNuva]

We'll miss you, TotS! Good luck with all your work!

In the meanwhile, I suggest anyone interested in TotS work read over his previous stories (if you haven't already), and then go check out some of the good work of other authors.

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[Satterthwaite]

Hope to see you soon Toa of the Stars. The epic was really good. I'll be glad to see the next chapter. Well, I can't wait to see Lewa back in action.

[Toa of the Stars]

Sorry I've been off BZP for two weeks. I have a new chapter coming, but dirst, I want to have some time to read your epics.

Thanks for your unending patience!

Keep in mind, with about a month's worth of posts in each of your epics, its gonna take me a while.

This post has been edited by Toa of the Stars: Nov 22 2003, 07:16 AM