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  Mind of the Past  Group: Premier Outstanding BZP Citizens Posts: 8349 Joined: 9-March 06 Member No.: 39713 
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"Gorast is a fierce warrior, but once you have finished discussing dismemberment, slaughter, carnage, and decapitation, she has nothing much left to say."-Mutran  Well, I finished my colouring of the Pre-Mutation Gorast from my artpile. And I thought I might as well give it it's own topic. ^^ C&C is encouraged. But remember what our good Nikki said. Enjoy! -VF -------------------- |
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Sep 3 2008, 04:49 PM
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 Encountering Protodermis  Group: Banned Members Posts: 861 Joined: 25-November 07 Member No.: 68429 
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Ooo...
This is probably the best art I've ever seen. Her color scheme look great here. I also like that 'sword of darkness' effect. I think I'll set it as my avatar, can I? 
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Sep 3 2008, 09:02 PM
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 Conqueror of the Swarm! Group: Members Posts: 721 Joined: 29-September 06 Member No.: 46008 
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That is a really cool picture. The mask looks just like her mutated one, and she looks very feminine, while still a makuta. I like how the rest of her body is completely covered in shadow. Good job
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Sep 3 2008, 09:29 PM
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 Master of Shadows Defeated Group: Outstanding BZPower Citizens Posts: 7332 Joined: 21-October 03 Member No.: 15910 
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Yes. YES. Thank you for feminizing the least feminine female ever released. Thank for for being one of the select few to even realize that the Makuta Mistika never used to look the way they currently do. Thank you for adding personality and depth to an otherwise faily uni-dimensional character.
Excellent piece. The light reflections may have been applied a tad overzealously, the right arm's pose might be a tad off (as are the size of the fingers, but this was probably intentional), and I would have liked more shadow rather than the white in the upper left hand corner, but these beefs are minor. Great stylization of the Kanohi. Nice job. 
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Sep 3 2008, 10:31 PM
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 Descending into Protodermis Group: Members Posts: 977 Joined: 10-December 05 Member No.: 37374
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Wow. I didn't like the sketch, but this is simply amazing. I'll look at that picture every time I read Brothers in Arms.
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Sep 3 2008, 10:35 PM
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 Exo-Armored Toa Group: Members Posts: 780 Joined: 26-February 08 Member No.: 74988
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it looks cool but...
i cant tell how we are looking at her what is the point of perspective? what pose is she in? good job on feminizing her BTW -------------------- DEATHTOFOOLS!!!!!!!11111!!!!!11!!1
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Sep 4 2008, 04:28 AM
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 Toa Metru United  Group: Premier Outstanding BZP Citizens Posts: 8455 Joined: 13-March 06 Member No.: 39803
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She'd be a good Lariska too...
I love the arms and I find the weapon fantastic. Good job. 
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Sep 4 2008, 07:47 PM
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 Mask of Time Discovered Group: Outstanding BZPower Citizens Posts: 4082 Joined: 1-March 07 Member No.: 53408
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That is incredible. When I first read her being called "Mistress of the Acid Falls" I imagined her like this, not her set form, this looks more feminine, more deserving of the title "Mistress", 10/10.
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Sep 4 2008, 08:39 PM
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Like Dokspit said:
QUOTE Yes. YES. Thank you for feminizing the least feminine female ever released. I can't help but love it looks alot like the set mask but not... insectish... Three cheers for Vezon's Friend This post has been edited by Alovath: Sep 4 2008, 08:40 PM -------------------- Signature Guidelines: Avatar and signature total file size may not exceed 100 KB!
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Sep 5 2008, 03:52 AM
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I love the way she seems to be emerging from darkness. The sword is held at an odd angle, one that would certainly give me a broken arm. But then she's a Makuta.
I also enjoy the green armour on her back just below the head. it gives the impression of hair. the shadows around the sword and her hand add to the menacing effect.10/10   REGITNUI
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Sep 5 2008, 06:16 AM
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 Fluidic Master Nuva Group: Members Posts: 1312 Joined: 8-November 05 Member No.: 36379
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YES. Finally. Great art returns to BZPower.
Absolutely fantastic job with the shadow effect on both the sword and the ball in her left hand. 10/10 KUTAW!
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Sep 5 2008, 08:23 AM
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QUOTE(Alovath @ Sep 5 2008, 02:39 AM)  Like Dokspit said: QUOTE Yes. YES. Thank you for feminizing the least feminine female ever released. I can't help but love it looks alot like the set mask but not... insectish... Three cheers for Vezon's Friend QUOTE I think maybe you wanted someone else … I’m Vezon with an ‘n,’ you see, not Vezok with a ‘k,’ and --” I'm Vezok's friend ^^ Not Vezons...though I like them both. QUOTE(Regitnui @ Sep 5 2008, 09:52 AM) I love the way she seems to be emerging from darkness. The sword is held at an odd angle, one that would certainly give me a broken arm. But then she's a Makuta. I also enjoy the green armour on her back just below the head. it gives the impression of hair. the shadows around the sword and her hand add to the menacing effect.10/10 REGITNUI Thanks for the comment! She actually isn't holding her sword at all, she just has it levitating like this, because it looks cool. Thank you all guys (and gals)! -------------------- |
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Sep 5 2008, 11:39 AM
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Wow. This is great. She looks a little like the mutated Gorast, but at the same time more Makuta-like. I like how she looks really evil and threatening.
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Sep 5 2008, 02:13 PM
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 Scavenger Va Group: Members Posts: 650 Joined: 4-February 08 Member No.: 73118
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I see you colored it in.
Good job, it looks so much cooler this way. I love all the shadow, she's definitely a Makuta. I don't have any criticism to offer, I am sorry to say. Just keep it up, I hope to see more from you
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Sep 5 2008, 02:36 PM
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Wow. I like how you made the background a gradient, which really makes her look nice. It's definitely Gorast. She has the mask, non mosquito version. I luvs how you made the arms....all spike-insecty but stillo Toa like. Also, not REDICULOUSLY feminine. Just perfect.
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Sep 5 2008, 02:41 PM
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 Emerging Stone Champion Group: Members Posts: 1453 Joined: 27-August 08 Member No.: 91971 
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Wonderful.
The head is done very well, it seem like she has hair!
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Sep 5 2008, 06:13 PM
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That's real good. I like the darkness effect alot and her mask looks very cool. You should draw the other two Mistika Makuta.
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 Sep 6 2008, 03:45 AM
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 Defender of Mata Nui Group: Members Posts: 2127 Joined: 10-November 07 Member No.: 67570
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Wow, Hello sexy
No really, I love your Drawings VF, like 'In The Rains Of Ashes' Well Gorast Is Awesome.  
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Sep 6 2008, 05:01 AM
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 Emerging Mata Nuian Protector Group: Members Posts: 1688 Joined: 8-August 08 Member No.: 90650
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Wow!
 Awsome one of the best in whole bzp
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Sep 6 2008, 06:08 AM
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AHHH!
THIS IS THE BEST ART I'VE EVER SEEN! 10/10I really like how did the shading effects! I also love the realistic look and the glowing parts! She looks really cool! -------------------- Vieta's Formula states "2/PI = 2/2 * ( 2 + 2 )/2 * (2 + ( ( 2 + 2) ) )/2 * ...c"
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Sep 6 2008, 07:32 AM
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 Stone Champion Nuva  Group: Premier Outstanding BZP Citizens Posts: 1557 Joined: 13-February 05 Member No.: 29619 
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Unbelievable VF! This looks so awesome and I think you should really do the graphics for books like Journey of Takanuva
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Sep 6 2008, 03:37 PM
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 Stalwart Defender Group: Members Posts: 469 Joined: 1-June 07 Member No.: 58026
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Wow this is really good, especially the sword thats amazing.
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Sep 7 2008, 11:01 AM
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 Seeker Group: Members Posts: 236 Joined: 4-January 08 Member No.: 70839
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 WOAH!! That is amazing! 10/10
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Sep 7 2008, 01:48 PM
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 Turaga Group: Members Posts: 66 Joined: 22-August 07 Member No.: 62032
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Good Job,
It doesn't look very Bionicle like but I still think it is Awsome! I'll rate it 8.7 outa' 10! DINOMILL
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Sep 7 2008, 11:38 PM
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 Makuta Conquered! Group: Members Posts: 551 Joined: 3-September 08 Member No.: 92526
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i love the sword, and the way she's shrouded in darkness... and those eyes are just... evil. definately better art than i could ever do.
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Sep 11 2008, 12:41 PM
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Mind of the Past Group: Premier Outstanding BZP Citizens Posts: 8349 Joined: 9-March 06 Member No.: 39713
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QUOTE(~Ballom~ @ Sep 6 2008, 05:01 PM) I definately have to agree with Dokuma, you've made a very un-feminine set look like her gender. Plus, she has an actual figure, not to mention hair around that otherwise flat head. The colors look about the same, which is good, and I presume you didn't add the translucent wings and other pair of arms because those might have been caused by the mutation. And the effects are great too, including the purple vortex around her right hand, the shadowy blade coming out of her right, and the fading to black around her waist. Overall, good job. Maybe you should do Bitil or Krika, to improve on their designs also.~B~ Both are in the making. Krika is inked and waiting for me to colour him, Bitil is still a work in progress in the sketching stage, but I am getting there. Thanks for the comments guys! I really appreciate them! -------------------- |
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