Vahi, the mask of the new-comer 2: Return of Tinju, A sequel to Vahi, mask of the new-comer Options

[Eviltoa Nuva]

Does anyone remember the story I wrote called Vahi, mask of the new-comer? Well, this is going to be a sepuel. 1st Chapter over the weekend, hopefully tommarrow.

[Kamion]

That was great! I cant wait until you post!

[Eviltoa Nuva]

Chapter 1: Tinju Returns

Tinju's POV
  I climbed out of the rubble that was left from the battle with the Bahrag Nuva. Not much was left, but enough to almost bury me alive. None of the toa nuva were still there like they had been at the end of the battle, I thought to myself how long had I been asleep. I began to limp towards Ta-koro, maybe Tahu would be there. Nothing much had changec since the battle except that I could see no Bohrok, as I walked I could sense matoran of different villages that were out on potrol watching me from bushes and trees. I paied no heed to them, my one goal was to get to Ta-koro and see Tahu. As I reached the blazing heat of Ta-wahi, I remembered when I first woke up in Ta-koro, the heat was unbearable! It was still a little dark, it must have been only dawn. I entered Ta-koro and the first thing I saw was a statue of me right next to Tahu's shrine. I walked over to it and it read the following: Tinju, Toa of Time, Hero among heros, sacrificed his life to save Mata-nui.
  " Sacrificed!? I'm still alive! They think I'm dead!?" I yelled. all the matoran and Vakama peeked out there huts to see what all the comotion was. They all slowly walked out of their huts, following Vakama was Tahu. He stared in amazement.
  " Tinju, you're still alive..." He said. I noded and said.
  " I have questions that need answering."

Well, how was that? Please post comments.

[Eviltoa Nuva]

Chapter 2: Reunited
  Tahu and Vakama led me to Vakama's hut to answer my questions. " Alright, what are the questions?" Asked Tahu.
  " How long have I been gone?" I asked, curious to now what I missed.
  " You've been gone for about a month now, we asummed you were dead, so we made that statue of you to remember you by." Tahu said. " We couldn't find you after you destroyed the Bahrag Nuva so we left asumming you were dead."
  " But I wasn't, was I?" I asked, Tahu shook his head. " What has happened since I left? Any new enemies?"
  Tahu shook his head again. " No, surprisingly, nothing has stood to fight us yet."
  " But prophecies say a great evil will arive." Vakama said solemly. " It will take seven Nuva to defeat it."
  " At first we thought the Turaga were misinterpreting it, but now that you're here, we don't think so anymore." Said Tahu. I looked at him funny, he had to be wrong. " Didn't you see yourself yet? You're Nuva!" I looked at myslef and sure enough, I was a Nuva.
  I walked out of the hut, all of my questions had been aswered. I felt like going to see the other toa, so I started with Gali Nuva. I walked out of town towards Ga-koro, I couldn't wait to see the other toa. As I got to Ga-koro I could see the faint imiage of Gali Nuva sitting at the shore watching all the matoran playing and working. I walked up beside her.
  " Greetings, Tinju. What took you so long?" Asked Gali Nuva. I said nothing. " You're wondering what I meant, aren't you? When the Turaga cae with the prophisy of the seven Nuva, I knew you where the seventh. I didn't tell anyone else because I didn't want them to get their hpoes up in case I was wrong."
  " I see," I replied quietly.
  " Come, Nokama whises to speak with you."
  We went to Nokama's hut, where, as usual, she had more of the prophisy to tell. " As you can see, the only mask you have is the Vahi Nuva. You must collect the other Kanohi Nuva to defeat this evil." She said.
  " But this will not be enough, will it?" I asked.
  " No, you must also find a special orb of power, these will give your elemental powers a boost. Now I must get back to uncovering these prophisies." Nokama said. I walked out of this hut to begin my search. Gali Nuva wlaked up to me and said.
   " Have you visited Onu-koro yet? You should go see them." And so I did. I was on my ay to Onu-koro now. But what I would find along the way, was not what I would call 'lucky to find'.

[Eviltoa Nuva]

Where is everyone? PLEASE POST!!!
EDIT: Alright! I'm a seeker!

[Eviltoa Nuva]

Chapter 3: Darkness Reveiled
  I continued to walk to Onu-koro, I could feel a threat groing in my mind, but I just couldn't tell what it was. Maybe Onua could tell me. I began to enter Po-wahi and desided to pay a visit to Pohatu. As I got closer to Po-koro the threat seemed to go away a little. I entered Po-koro to see all of the matoran working hard. I could see Hafu in his hut slaveing away to make another statue, and Huki practicing at Koli in the field. And Onewa talking to Pohatu in his hut. That was where I needed to be. I walked into the hut and they both stared at me in amazement.
  " Tinju, is that really you?" Asked Pohatu in astonishment.
  " Yup! Last time I looked at myself I still was." I replied.
  " We thought you where dead!" Pohatu said.
  " Nope, still alive." I said.
  After talked for a while I asked him if he felt the threat as well.
  " Yes, I'm afraid so." He said, I could see his face getting worried. He seemed to act a little older for a second. " I thought it was just a side effect from the battle with the bahrag, but, now I think different. Come, follow me." He led me to the entrence of Po-koro and pointed to an oasis not to far from Onu-koro. " See that oasis?"
  " Yes." I replied.
  " There's a Hau Nuva there, I think it's yours." He said to me. Every time I heard him talk, I heard a happy voice, no matter what the predicament, now I heard a solemn voice.
  " Okay, thanks." I nodded and left. I arived at the oasis and looked around. I couldn't see a Hau Nuva anywhere, then I realized that it must be at the bottom of the lake. I took a deep breath and dived in, I swam down, realizing this wasn't a normal oasis. I swam and swam down for what seemed a mile, then I found. Almost out of breath I swam as fast as I could and got out. I put on the mask and winched at the power. I began to walk again until I got to the cave entrance, I looked down and continued again. Once I got to Onu-koro, I talked to Onua and he showed me a statue of my Matoran form that was made for my heroics from when I was a matoran. I read the statue which read the following:
  [i]One day a swarm of Nuhvak and Tahnok threatened this village to extinction, but a brave matoran named Tinju thought quickly to put an end to those swarms.[i]
  I looked at Onua, than back at the statue remembering that day I almost kill myself trying to say Onu-koro. But my memories where invaded. The earth began to shake and the statue shattered, A voice that seemed to come from everywhere said " You make me sick, is this all I have to deal with tyo destroy Mata-nui?"
  " Who are you!? Show yourself!" I barked.
  " I am your worst nightmare! Don't bother hideing your fear, I can look into your mind and heart and see your afraid." The voice said.
  " Well, are you going to show yourself!?" Onua yelled. A strange super-natural force seemed to hit Onua out of nowhere and knock him across the village.
  " Now you." The voice said. I activated my Hau Nuva and felt the force trying to get through my shield. the force surrounded me with some un-natural force and a pair of eyes appiered out of nowhere. " You resest, little one, why?"
  " Because, I know that I can defeat you. Maybe not now, but sonner or later I will." I replied.
  " Well, I'll give you your time then, but you will never be able to defeat me." The voice said and dissapeared with the darkness.

Well, how was that? Please post!!!