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Bahrag Kal
post Mar 17 2005, 10:07 PM
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Well, Hybrids didn’t work out so well, and even though I didn’t finish Twisted Reality, I thought I’d make the sequel. The CH1 in this story was meant to be the final CH in TR.

Religions: All religions (almost) believe in the same thing, but worship different Great Spirits.

Believers: Pure good, as they worship the Creator. They view Nameless Evil as someone to be hated and the Reaper as a being of good (which he is).

Followers: It is said the ancestors of today Followers sold their souls to Nameless Evil. All Followers have twisted minds and strange views on faith.

Lovers: Lovers are considered neutral. They worship the Reaper and view death as a gateway to “where you belong” (Heaven or the Abyss). Lovers also see the Creator as one that tests people, to see if they sin or not. Lovers and Believers are alike, they just worship different spirits.

Great Spirits:

The Creator: Kind, merciful, loving, yet all powerful. The Creator is the one that created all reality. His power is unlimited. Recently, he has lost most of his energy. He has chosen five people to aid him in ending Nameless Evil's reign of toruture.

Reaper (a.k.a. Grim Reaper): The Reaper is not the evil being that most people today see him as. He is actually a being of good, but he never shows it. He doesn’t cause death he just takes the souls of the deceased to Heaven or the Abyss.

Nameless Evil: A being of pure evil. Nameless Evil causes corruption among mortals, all negative emotions, and death. When the world becomes too corrupt, the Creator orders him to destroy reality. Recently, Nameless Evil has gained control of the Mortal World in 2005.

Characters:

Mana: Mana is a simple Gold Feathered Guardian Angel. Although, he has dreams of becoming a Platinum Feathered Seraph. He is kind and caring when he doesn’t need to fight.
Appearance: Looks like a young man (maybe 18), silver hair, slight glow, golden wings.

Armageddon: Armageddon is the only one of his kind, a Demon with a soul. After Nameless Evil took control and reality twisted, a Demon was spawned with a soul. He may be good at heart, but he still is a Demon physically, he drinks goat blood, eats souls (but he tries eating animal souls only), eats goat hearts, and is affected greatly by holy attacks. He isn't all that serious unless he needs to be. Appearance: ram skull shaped head, bat wings, cloven feet, long thin spaded tail, orange eyes with yellow pupils, extremely thin.

Htiaf (pronounced Tee-aff): Said to be the Blessed One. Little is known about his personality. However, he is young. Appearance: Young, silver eyes, black hair

The Creator: [see Great Spirits]

Skull: The crazed son of Nameless Evil. Something happened in his past to make him hate his father. He was not chosen by fate to help the Creator, but the Creator is now stuck with him. Appearance: Thin, black ruffled hair, metalic hands.

Ornoth: This strange being has a shadey past. We do know that he worships the Creator. He also hates his life due to some curse, and he wants to die. He is also the oldest being in creation, surviving the death of several corrupted realities. Appearance: Click (sorry about the pic, I'm used to drawing cartoon style)

Lenore: A Lover Priestess who, as of now, is very mystrious.

Chapter 1: He Has Been Found

Htiaf, Mana and Armageddon walked slowly through the abandoned city. “We’ve been here for days and still no Creator!” complained Armageddon. “Patience Demon, patience,” said Mana. “Uh, guys,” said Htiaf “I think I know where he might be.” Armageddon and Mana walked up to Htiaf to see him standing in front of a huge Believer church. “Ya think?” said Armageddon, sarcastically.

The companions walked slowly into the church, strangely, it was in perfect condition, as if Nameless Evil hadn’t set his evil hand upon it. Walking further down the hall, Mana gasped in surprise as he saw something. “What is exclaimed!?” exclaimed Htiaf. Mana, not able to find any words, simply pointed at what he saw. Armageddon and Htiaf looked and sure enough they gasped as well. It was the Creator! He cocooned organic matter with pulsating veins and large eyes. His size was reduced to that of a man’s and his eyes were shut, showing that he was asleep, but he looked as if he was in unbearable torture. Htiaf and Mana began to cheer. “Yeah, isn’t that great, we found him,” said Armageddon, “one problem, how do we get him out?” Mana and Htiaf then realized the problem.

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Bahrag Kal   Twisted Faith   Mar 17 2005, 10:07 PM
GMan   What!? You gave up onHybrids ! Noooo! ...   Mar 19 2005, 07:47 AM
Bahrag Kal   Chapter 2: He is Free The companions pondered on ...   Mar 19 2005, 02:14 PM
GMan   Woo hoo! *Patriots touchdown song plays* I lik...   Mar 19 2005, 06:30 PM
Bahrag Kal   I hope this isn't revival, but I'm thinkin...   Mar 29 2005, 01:15 AM
GMan   I say go for it BK. You are a great author and you...   Mar 29 2005, 06:50 AM
Bahrag Kal   Chapter 3: Spawn of Nameless Evil “Well,” said Ma...   Mar 31 2005, 03:42 PM
GMan   This is pretty good, and I do like it. KUTGW, hope...   Mar 31 2005, 03:58 PM
Bahrag Kal   Chapter 4: The Escape. New Member The companions ...   Apr 1 2005, 12:41 PM
GMan   Bravo, bravo, very good with skull and the intro o...   Apr 1 2005, 08:28 PM
Bahrag Kal   I don't use sidekicks, I fear that I will make...   Apr 1 2005, 09:52 PM
GMan   I posted that before the new article. The sidekick...   Apr 1 2005, 10:16 PM
Bahrag Kal   So, in a way, Ornoth and Skull are alike (in age),...   Apr 1 2005, 10:22 PM
GMan   Yup. Another power of Skull's is he can turn a...   Apr 2 2005, 07:38 AM
Bahrag Kal   Yes, that is very, uh.......interesting. Ya know,...   Apr 2 2005, 05:29 PM
Bahrag Kal   Chapter 5: The Horrid City Days after days of tra...   Apr 6 2005, 10:04 PM
GMan   Oh yeah! Funny how Armaddgeon called room serv...   Apr 7 2005, 07:11 AM
Grunty 2.0   Heh. Heheheh. Armageddon using Room Service. Lol, ...   Apr 7 2005, 11:05 AM
Bahrag Kal   Thanx. Was Armageddon calling room service really...   Apr 7 2005, 03:24 PM
GMan   I mean go, not goo. Y'know, like Goooo Tigers...   Apr 7 2005, 07:20 PM
Bahrag Kal   Interesting.... You didn't know Htiaf was ...   Apr 7 2005, 08:31 PM
Bahrag Kal   Chapter 6: Needed Information. New Member. The c...   Apr 11 2005, 04:36 PM
GMan   Hoo yeah! I like it! Funny how Skull did t...   Apr 11 2005, 08:06 PM
Bahrag Kal   Oh I do want to know. I've added Lenore's...   Apr 11 2005, 08:44 PM
GMan   Ok, he's boiled them, shot them, sliced'n...   Apr 11 2005, 08:52 PM
Bahrag Kal   Yay! They were tortured severly! Doncha l...   Apr 11 2005, 08:55 PM
GMan   Yup, I do. Skull is NE's first born. Did you k...   Apr 12 2005, 06:16 AM
Grunty 2.0   QUOTE (Bahrag Kal @ Apr 7 2005, 03:24 PM) Thanx. ...   Apr 12 2005, 11:37 AM
Bahrag Kal   Yes. Poe is my favorite poet..... Thanx. BTW: I ...   Apr 12 2005, 03:02 PM
Grunty 2.0   Heh, nice banners. *GMan Voice* Goooo Nameless Evi...   Apr 12 2005, 04:32 PM
GMan   Nice banners. I'm using the Skull one right n...   Apr 12 2005, 06:55 PM
Bahrag Kal   OK, and what about Lenore? Also, what should the i...   Apr 12 2005, 09:12 PM
GMan   Ok, the Htiaf sig looks like shining light, and it...   Apr 13 2005, 06:09 AM
Grunty 2.0   Wowzers, Big G seems to be helpin' alot with t...   Apr 13 2005, 04:28 PM
Bahrag Kal   Chapter 7: Utopia, the Once Proud, the Once Beauti...   Apr 13 2005, 09:33 PM
GMan   Whoa, nice... Poor Creator, that must have been hi...   Apr 14 2005, 05:27 AM
Bahrag Kal   Yeah, pretty much... Who many authors just go and...   Apr 14 2005, 07:19 AM
Grunty 2.0   Nameless Evil. Its Obvious. The Apocolyptic Minion...   Apr 14 2005, 10:16 AM
Karectahn   Wow, you lack fans. This is brilliant, really...   Apr 14 2005, 02:36 PM
Bahrag Kal   Thanx. Yeah, Mana and Htiaf aren't seen all t...   Apr 14 2005, 02:50 PM
GMan   QUOTE (Bahrag Kal @ Apr 14 2005, 08:19 AM) Yeah, p...   Apr 14 2005, 05:20 PM
Bahrag Kal   Chapter 8: Vendettas Never Die “Tell me again why...   Apr 17 2005, 06:33 PM
Bahrag Kal   Chapter 9: Noddvane Forest: the Land of Torture T...   Apr 18 2005, 04:03 PM
Grunty 2.0   Hm, good. I cant believe you made TWO CHs with no ...   Apr 18 2005, 04:26 PM
Bahrag Kal   Thanx. Well, Goth was GMan's idea....... The...   Apr 18 2005, 04:44 PM
GMan   I'm baaack! Nice spin on my idea. I was aw...   Apr 19 2005, 02:42 PM
Bahrag Kal   Thanx. I kinda wanted to make Lenore a little bit...   Apr 19 2005, 02:56 PM
Bahrag Kal   Chapter 10: Ornoth’s Last Stand Suddenly, million...   Apr 20 2005, 03:24 PM
GMan   *sniff* May Ornoth finally rest. Goth's full n...   Apr 20 2005, 07:22 PM
Karectahn   ...wow... poor Ornoth, although, he did want his l...   Apr 22 2005, 06:10 AM
GMan   Uh, no, coz I just liked the idea of an undead com...   Apr 22 2005, 08:56 AM
Bahrag Kal   I'll hafta go with Twisted Life, it seems very...   Apr 22 2005, 03:22 PM
GMan   Whoa! I like 'em! Yeah, three parter, ...   Apr 22 2005, 05:16 PM
Grunty 2.0   Gotta agree with Big G, BK. KOP. *Jumps off Buildi...   May 1 2005, 08:41 AM
Bahrag Kal   The next CH!? Grunty, TF is over. Once I finis...   May 1 2005, 12:07 PM


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