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 Jun 23 2008, 11:53 AM
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Hm, true...I'll ask my Editing Team and a fellow writer and see what they think about the Sub-Element Forbidden Attacks. As for the site, hope to update it today! I've fallen far behind on the Orb List, plus I might want to cut and redesign some pages...
Also, Chapters 103 and 104 are up! Chapter 105 is written, and will soon be typed, and I shall start writing Chapter 106 soon. And yes, I'm going to start putting "Exo's Wisdom" at the beginning of every post with chapters. 
--------------------  ("Coming Soon" actually means "sometime between now and 2013".) Technic Coliseum--The Visorak have been recruited! Bioni-Lords: Book 1; Book 2: Sekai: Chapter 130 is up. Blog Posts: --Bioni-Lords Lecture: Names --Delays |
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Jul 6 2008, 01:03 PM
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Another bit of foreshadowing for the ever growing mystery
Kohena did it for the greater good  , even if it means allowing Makuta to be horrendously devoured, but he's a villian, so no one cares...First artifical dread's, next it'll be orbs with a red paint job CTK |
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Jul 16 2008, 04:32 PM
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Hehe...Khadaz was a bit overconfident and the 10th really showed how strong he is...the next chapter is gonna be a good one
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Aug 1 2008, 10:03 AM
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Turaga Group: New Members Posts: 77 Joined: 16-June 05 Member No.: 32656
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Amy, dead, yeah...that was unexpected, although I would've thought the 10th wouldn't of cared for someone else death, but then again that's probably what a generic villian would do
So the 10th's finally defeated, but who is this familiar foe, I can take guesses, but I doubt they'll be right CTK |
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Aug 2 2008, 06:25 PM
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Hm, didn't think about him absorbing the beam...meh, I didn't think through it.
Let's just say he didn't think about it because he was in pain.And...I have finished writing Chapter 109! Might be the longest chapter...no idea yet when it'll get typed, but be on the lookout! -------------------- ("Coming Soon" actually means "sometime between now and 2013".) Technic Coliseum--The Visorak have been recruited! Bioni-Lords: Book 1; Book 2: Sekai: Chapter 130 is up. Blog Posts: --Bioni-Lords Lecture: Names --Delays |
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Aug 7 2008, 03:16 PM
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QUOTE(Chibi Toa Kopaka @ Aug 7 2008, 08:21 AM)  As Nk said, the chapter was great, Was expecting Omni to say that the cake is a lie when the orb hit the cake, but anyways, still great, the chapter was well planned out with the foreshadowing and such, answered some bits such as if Union was still alive or not, but also opened up more question, Cannot wait for Book 2! CTK Me neither. I submitted 3 characters to be GS'ed: Neya, Darkaea, and Keelie. And oh, can Darkaea be Knight #5? His signature orb (found in Book 2,) is...nasty. And BionicleKeyblade's worst nightmare. Just a hint. But nice job tying up loose ends. Lol. At least Dread can't "take the cake!" Neya Darkaea Out.  ...
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Aug 7 2008, 04:00 PM
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Sorry, but I already have the whole Knights roster filled out. Although I am thinking about working in a kind of "apprentice" system with the Knights; I just need to ask the person who came up with the group.
-------------------- ("Coming Soon" actually means "sometime between now and 2013".) Technic Coliseum--The Visorak have been recruited! Bioni-Lords: Book 1; Book 2: Sekai: Chapter 130 is up. Blog Posts: --Bioni-Lords Lecture: Names --Delays |
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Aug 7 2008, 04:24 PM
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Yep, Dark Knights are filled up, the system is good and yeah...in a few weeks/days book 2 starts I think?
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Aug 7 2008, 05:08 PM
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You think Book 2 will start in weeks or days...? Heh...funny. Quite funny.
It might take me a couple months to finish Rewriting, actually...still, I'll work hard to finish it as soon as possible so I can put Book 2 up. -------------------- ("Coming Soon" actually means "sometime between now and 2013".) Technic Coliseum--The Visorak have been recruited! Bioni-Lords: Book 1; Book 2: Sekai: Chapter 130 is up. Blog Posts: --Bioni-Lords Lecture: Names --Delays |
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Aug 13 2008, 07:13 AM
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I got a lil behind since shcools been out but I only got 3 more chapters to go
I cant wait to read the end And I believe I know of some things in book 2 but only cuz you told meGood job -------------------- |
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Aug 13 2008, 10:39 AM
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Glad you like it.
And yes, Toatoa, I'll add that to your profile, and your character WILL have an important part in Book 2. -------------------- ("Coming Soon" actually means "sometime between now and 2013".) Technic Coliseum--The Visorak have been recruited! Bioni-Lords: Book 1; Book 2: Sekai: Chapter 130 is up. Blog Posts: --Bioni-Lords Lecture: Names --Delays |
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Sep 2 2008, 03:59 PM
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Well, Zadakh made a map, and I added onto it some fan locations for Book 2. Enjoy.
 Neya Darkaea Out.
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Sep 2 2008, 04:20 PM
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Erm...I would have preferred if you had sent the modified version to me first so I could approve it...
-------------------- ("Coming Soon" actually means "sometime between now and 2013".) Technic Coliseum--The Visorak have been recruited! Bioni-Lords: Book 1; Book 2: Sekai: Chapter 130 is up. Blog Posts: --Bioni-Lords Lecture: Names --Delays |
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Sep 3 2008, 09:35 AM
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I just finished the first book of the Bioni-Lords series and just wanted to say great job. It was worth sticking with for 3 years
And I also wanted to let you know that you can count on me to be there for Book 2Out of all your stories I've read, this one has always been the inspiration for me to write Elemental Arts, and my only hope is that one day I can finish it and that it would be half the story Bioni Lords is. Daxam Madatu This post has been edited by Daxam Madatu: Sep 5 2008, 11:45 AM -------------------- |
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Sep 3 2008, 07:03 PM
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Glad you liked it! It's nice that some people who read the beginning of the story stuck with it to the end.
Elemental Arts has potential, I'm sure it'll turn out nicely. Also, I re-edited the map a bit: The Bioni-Lords World -------------------- ("Coming Soon" actually means "sometime between now and 2013".) Technic Coliseum--The Visorak have been recruited! Bioni-Lords: Book 1; Book 2: Sekai: Chapter 130 is up. Blog Posts: --Bioni-Lords Lecture: Names --Delays |
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