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> Review: Legends Of Malu Nui, my first epic
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post Jun 29 2008, 08:49 PM
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new writing style... no more big paragraphs!

next chapter is up. read it now!


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post Jul 28 2008, 06:01 PM
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dose this mean I need to start making more characters? huh.gif


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post Jul 28 2008, 06:53 PM
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the next epic i have all the characters for, its not so much focusing on a toa team as much as it is a single toa in an army... like a journal. but once i do the second malu-nui i will need some characters.

btw: new chapter up, id say 2 chapters left... then an aftermath chapter.

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