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 Jul 17 2008, 03:28 AM
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 Turaga  Group: New Members Posts: 70 Joined: 2-February 07 Member No.: 51933 
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Don't know what's wrong with Kopeke but he might be right.
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Jul 17 2008, 06:20 AM
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Very good, one of the best ive read here. 9/10
-------------------- Reviews include - "good story; great plot, great idea, great twist" - Nukaya Cloud Fire "This story was awesome" - ice dino land "Whoa. Creepy. Good story, though, pulled me in." - Tehina-toa of lava |
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Jul 20 2008, 06:26 AM
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Turaga Group: New Members Posts: 70 Joined: 2-February 07 Member No.: 51933
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Right. When could I expect the next chapter?
-------------------- Thank you Bionicle. Farewell. |
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Jul 20 2008, 08:26 PM
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Much sooner then the last one. I have been busy on fanfiction on other sites but I have already started wrighting the beginning of the next chapter here.
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Aug 18 2008, 04:11 AM
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Turaga Group: New Members Posts: 70 Joined: 2-February 07 Member No.: 51933
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Mental damge?
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Aug 21 2008, 02:23 AM
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Turaga Group: New Members Posts: 70 Joined: 2-February 07 Member No.: 51933
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Ok. Can't wait for the next chapter!
This post has been edited by Lhilertoro: Aug 21 2008, 02:23 AM -------------------- Thank you Bionicle. Farewell. |
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Aug 31 2008, 02:09 PM
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me neither. i a a big fan of this epic i really like how you portrayed the makuta especially Teridax.
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