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post Feb 1 2008, 09:17 PM
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Yay, my first COT Epic that hopefully I won't forget to update tongue.gif Anyway, here's the first part, the prologue.

Chapter 0: Prologue

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6 years ago...

"Gotta... Hurry..."
A boy of around 7 years old rushed through a school's lawn, mentally reminding himself to get an alarm clock. He had gotten up late... Again... Because he had decided to try to get up earlier, and kept sleeping in.
I definitely need an alarm clock. He thought, turning the corner rapidly, though that wasn't the best thing to do as a young girl was doing the same thing at the same time.
"Huh? Ack!" He yelled out, before crashing into her, making them both crash to the ground hard, and scattering their books and other such items.
"Urgh... Are you ok?" He asked, sitting up, shaking and rubbing his head, while not really focusing on the rest of him that was hurt.
"Yeah, I'm fine..." She said in reply as he looked at her. She had Reddish-brown hair, and brown eyes, plus a Blue shirt and Lime-green shorts.
"Uh, who are you anyway?" The boy asked, as the girl gathered her things back up from the collision.
"My name's Sonia. How about you?" She replied, as the boy rubbed his head and stood up.
"My name's Kaze. Nice to meet you Sonia..." He said, as the bell started ringing.
"Oh dang! That's the bell! Sorry to leave so suddenly, see you Sonia!" Kaze said, running off again, leaving Sonia standing there.
I bet we will... She thought, going into the school and to her class.
"ACK! Sorry I'm a little late..." Kaze said, sitting at his desk finally. A minute or two later the door to classroom opened again and Kaze looked over, then did a double-take.
"Y-You've gotta be kidding me..." He said, as Sonia walked in, and took a seat two to the left from him.
"Heh, I knew I'd be seeing you sooner than you thought." She said to him with a wink, before opening her books.
"Didn't think it would be this soon..." He replied, shaking his head and opening his books too.


smile.gif Well, what do you think?

This post has been edited by Ichigo Kurosaki: Shinigami: May 14 2008, 04:11 PM


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Neo Blademan Seed Destiny   Destiny Of A Hero   Feb 1 2008, 09:17 PM
Toa Rakoua: Toa of Sonics   Huh, nice epic, Blade. And to think it's still...   Feb 3 2008, 02:01 PM
Neo Blademan Seed Destiny   Chapter 1: Consequences ***** 6 Years later... ...   Feb 3 2008, 02:04 PM
General Grevious   A good enough story, mediocre spelling and punctua...   Feb 3 2008, 02:12 PM
Neo Blademan Seed Destiny   1. Short...? Hmm... Might have to stop that then.....   Feb 3 2008, 02:35 PM
~Phoenix Wright~   Interesting, I like the idea. As it has been said,...   Feb 3 2008, 05:50 PM
Neo Blademan Seed Destiny   Spelling? I'm using my Firefox SpellChecker an...   Feb 3 2008, 05:56 PM
Toa Rakoua: Toa of Sonics   Nice new chappie. Abozt the spelling and other pro...   Feb 4 2008, 12:08 PM
Neo Blademan Seed Destiny   Rakoua: Err... Oops for the time thing. And the So...   Feb 4 2008, 12:11 PM
Neo Blademan Seed Destiny   Chapter 2: Trap ***** "Rrr..." I growl...   Feb 4 2008, 01:51 PM
~Phoenix Wright~   Very good, better than the first chapter. When Bla...   Feb 4 2008, 05:24 PM
Neo Blademan Seed Destiny   Yeah, got a point, but what could I replace it wit...   Feb 4 2008, 05:32 PM
~Phoenix Wright~   QUOTE(Neo Blademan Seed Destiny @ Feb 4 2008,...   Feb 4 2008, 05:47 PM
Neo Blademan Seed Destiny   Ok, a little delay, I'll try to get it up by t...   Feb 12 2008, 03:05 PM
Ichigo Kurosaki: Shinigami   ... Slight time problem, but seeing as I have more...   May 14 2008, 03:25 PM
~Supersonic~   Okay, kinda confusing... Couldn't keep up. How...   May 14 2008, 03:35 PM
Ichigo Kurosaki: Shinigami   Yeah, now I know I should've split it >...   May 14 2008, 03:41 PM


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