The Mercenus Chronicles: Season Zwei, New Dawn Over the Shadow Horizon Options

Awesome! But I do spot some cursing.

This post has been edited by The Bohrok Lord: Jun 22 2008, 02:33 PM

[Mercenus: confus...]

Khols: You're basically pointing at him.

The Bohrok Lord: Mind telling me WHERE exactly? The only cursing I see are alien-esque...

Mercenus

[philipnova798]

That says D*mn? I thought it was DANATION... which isn't even a word... thanks for pointing that out.

Edit: Censored to "Dalmation" XD .

Mercenus

I still see D*mn.

That says D*mn? I thought it was DANATION... which isn't even a word... thanks for pointing that out. Edit: Censored to "Dalmation" XD .Mercenus

I still see D*mn.

It's changed to Dalmatian, but I see the same word in a different spot. And the way you used h*ll is considered cursing.

This post has been edited by The Bohrok Lord: Jun 22 2008, 02:52 PM

[philipnova798]

That says D*mn? I thought it was DANATION... which isn't even a word... thanks for pointing that out. Edit: Censored to "Dalmation" XD .Mercenus

I still see D*mn.

It's changed to Dalmatian, but I see the same word in a different spot. And the way you used h*ll is considered cursing.

I was pointing out how Rangan's Character said D*mn. But I didn't see the word h*ll anywhere.

[Mercenus: confus...]

Wow, people are so tight about cursing these days, I used to use "H*ll" a lot in the old comics, and you never cared then. You're like mosquitoes trying to suckle on every "bad" spot in the comic, couldn't you of at least gave some contructive critism instead of griping on about minor language? I'm starting to regret EVER starting these comics again...

Mercenus

[philipnova798]

Wow, people are so tight about cursing these days, I used to use "H*ll" a lot in the old comics, and you never cared then. You're like mosquitoes trying to suckle on every "bad" spot in the comic, couldn't you of at least gave some contructive critism instead of griping on about minor language? I'm starting to regret EVER starting these comics again...

Mercenus

Hey, don't put the blame on me entirely, I only pointed out D*mn. It was Bohrok Lord who pointed out H*ll.

[Mercenus: confus...]

I never said that, Phillipnova. How about we get off the off-topic and focus on what is actually the point of this thread? There is no D*mn, there is no H*ll, and there certainly isn't a point in going on about it.

Mercenus

Wow, people are so tight about cursing these days, I used to use "H*ll" a lot in the old comics, and you never cared then. You're like mosquitoes trying to suckle on every "bad" spot in the comic, couldn't you of at least gave some contructive critism instead of griping on about minor language? I'm starting to regret EVER starting these comics again...

Mercenus

Hey, don't put the blame on me entirely, I only pointed out D*mn. It was Bohrok Lord who pointed out H*ll.

Sorry. I just felt like pointing it out. I'll take the blame, if you want.

[Lewajohnson: Toa...]

Your comic are back! Yay! I can't wait for the new comic!

Lewajohnson

YAY! New comics and stuff! it's good that you've made the plot slower, but in a good way, it really makes alot more sense and honestly I like the plot alot more even though it's relatively the same. I love the graphical effects as well, that and anything that involves brainwashing get 10 bonus points Also, the swearing really made these comics seem alot more... real in a way, I mean, teenage warriors? 4Kids might make them into pun-loving, overpowered, unrealistic characters, but you definately shouldn't. My only gripe is that some of the lines seem a bit forced, not really fitting the moment, but ah well.
Maybe to avoid this whole swearing thing though, you could start replacing H*ll with Karzahni as you get more and more accustomed to the Bionicle World, like at first you still say H*ll alot, but then after the end of, say, part 1, you've simply spent so much time around Bionicles you say things like Karzahni? Because face it, alot of members here are under 13, let alone 14, and will probably complain that this isn't their precious 4Kids...
Anyways, I'm now going to check this new poster I've heard about...

[Mercenus: confus...]

Hm... I can definitely see Rangan eventually becoming accustomed with all the Matoran dialect, maybe I should include that... young-lings...

Comic making for me will be definitely less frequent then in the past, it won't be the "One comic a day" formula I used to do, probably two every week...

Mercenus

(PS: the latest poster will last longer then the others (it's the best so far too!), which makes it all the better; I'm running out of fresh ideas for these things :/)

This post has been edited by Rangan Mercenus™: Jun 22 2008, 03:52 PM

So Rangan, when do you think the Mastra shall come in the story?

[Mercenus: confus...]

Glad to see these comics back i missed them allot, but i probably won't be posting much...

I saw number 3 while all of you were going to stupid comics like Galva's.

thats just mean.

I know, Gavla is my friend and that is just mean calling his comics dumb. That's like me calling your comics dumb. Apologize to Gavla before I report that post.

Oh calm down, he has the right to have his own opinions (even if it did come out a bit rude), I don't like Gavla's comics particularly either, so stop complaining in my topic and just DO WHAT MUST BE DONE (IE, "report it, don't post it", as the mods say)...

Anyway, comic news: I'm half way through the next comic, more rubble, more story, more cheesy sun glaze effects!

Mercenus

[Commander 'T...]

Actually, that was a joke about something Mercenus said in an MSN conversation when we were moping over no replies -
Mercenus:
Nobody likes comics with a cool plot anymore
Mercenus:
They're all over the Galva comics, which isn't cool
It's not my opinion, it was a joke on Merc's.
Sorry Galva if it seemed rude. :/
EDIT: And he isn't Mercenus on msn, so don't ask.

This post has been edited by Tapika of Shadows: Jun 23 2008, 01:56 AM

wow, your the first comic maker I've seen use German in (for a season) the title.

This post has been edited by Jaller's child: Jun 30 2008, 03:28 AM

So Rangan, like in the first series, will we see the buisinessmen in the next comic?

I have one question. What happened to the other comics?

[Mercenus: confus...]

OTHER comics? I'm not entirely sure what you mean, care to elaborate?

Mercenus

Can you post the comics you are redoing on the front page? I can't find them in all these posts

~Dylan the Seeker

[Mercenus: confus...]

Erm... they are, it's called "1.5: remake", I should put a "NEW" sign on...

EDIT: DONE.

Mercenus

This post has been edited by Rangan Mercenus™: Jun 23 2008, 10:35 AM

Erm... they are, it's called "1.5: remake", I should put a "NEW" sign on...

Mercenus

Ahh, that's better Nice comics! Can't wait for the rest

~Dylan the Seeker

Great, the new comics are up! I can understand how you had such a big problem with guest stars, since everyone probably wants to be in these super special effect-ified comics. I've never actually had that problem, since I've only had two or three on the waiting list, but once I finish those I get another two or three . I think you should probably do a "Don't ask me, I'll ask you" rule for guest starring.

On topic: These are much better than the old ones, and I see you've been explaining the beginning more. The poster's really awesome as well.

And I realized this a while ago, but I couldn't post it because there was no longer a topic to post in. Is Commander Conor based on the guy who posted the "Secret Stomach Meassage"? That would make a lot of since, because that was some really famous spam, and the guy's name was Conner.

[Mercenus: confus...]

I think you should probably do a "Don't ask me, I'll ask you" rule for guest starring.

And I realized this a while ago, but I couldn't post it because there was no longer a topic to post in. Is Commander Conor based on the guy who posted the "Secret Stomach Message"? That would make a lot of since, because that was some really famous spam, and the guy's name was Conner.

1. that is what I am doing, I have a fairly good idea about who I want guest starred .
2. Exactly, and you can guess what else will be featured in this series...

Mercenus

[Johnuva]

Off-topic: Woah... season zwei... nice to see you're back in action, Mercenus!

You should change your sig....
1- Good idea 8O
2- Weird... 8|
3- Yey! 8D
4- MGS 4 For The don't have dah system ... I mean... 8P
New Comic tommorrow? Sounds gooo...
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[Mercenus: confus...]

New Comic tommorrow? Sounds gooo...
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And now to answer your needs: A NEW COMIC! This new comic is a re-imagination of the first encounter with Bradon, and revelations first unknown are revealed...
Intro6: United by burning wood

Plus, a new(ish) banner!:

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This post has been edited by Rangan Mercenus™: Jun 25 2008, 06:20 AM

New Comic tommorrow? Sounds gooo...
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And now to answer you're needs: A NEW COMIC! This new comic is a re-imagination of the first encounter with Bradon, and revelations first unknown are revealed...
Intro6: United by burning wood

Plus, a new(ish) banner!:

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[url="http://www.bzpower.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=278793"][img]http://www.majhost.com/gallery/mercenus/start/Comics/coming_back.png[/img][/url]

Haha, Bradon slapped you. And Bradbot's line; "I am a robot sir, I do not believe." So, when do you think the 'Tessco Buisinessmen' be?

[Mercenus: confus...]

Haha, Bradon slapped you. And Bradbot's line; "I am a robot sir, I do not believe." So, when do you think the 'Tessco Buisinessmen' be?

When he needs to, by the way, Tesco Businessmen have a secret not yet revealed... minus cloning.

Mercenus

This post has been edited by Rangan Mercenus™: Jun 25 2008, 06:23 AM

Haha, Bradon slapped you. And Bradbot's line; "I am a robot sir, I do not believe." So, when do you think the 'Tessco Buisinessmen' be?

When he needs to, by the way, Tesco Buisinessmen have a secret not yet revealed... minus cloning.

Mercenus

So Mercenus, this question is sort of unrelated to the topic but, are you a Transformers fan?

[Mercenus: confus...]

Not really... why? However, there may be some transforming stuff appearing in the later chapters, like Chimera, well, Spamera...

Mercenus

Not really... why? However, there may be some transforming stuff appearing in the later chapters, like Chimera, well, Spamera...

Mercenus

Well, I asked you because if you could create the Tesco mystery, would you would have happaned to know where Optimus Prime's trailer goes when he transforms? And transforming Chimoru Omega sprites? Awesome!

THEY ARE BACKK!!!!! YAYZ!!! I've been waiting for... not that long... But, THEY ARE BACK! a new season! yes!

By the way, I think the ending to the first chapter was originally quite... rubbish, I'm thinking about sprusing it up a bit with a train battle, what do you guys think?

Mercenus

that would awesome i cant wait
and the spam foot soldier thing how about mindless droning slave creatures with blue av matoran heads

This post has been edited by sharkboy937: Jun 28 2008, 07:30 AM

[Mercenus: confus...]

Erm... most of the SPAM army already ARE Mindless drone slaves :/, though thank you for actually suggesting something.

Mercenus

[Imold]

I noticed the I Made This reference with the "Toaster-bot insurance".
And by the way the name of the desert is the Skaroon Desert not the Mohu-wahi desert.

*stabs Rangan for crying*baby...*ahem*very good new comic,Merc,glad to see you kept the salesmen

like i said before,don't expect me posting much...




BTW:does this mean that you're going to remake my GS comic?

[-GukkoPilot709-]

OMIGAD!

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I never really went to your comics before, and now I find that they're great! Original story, awesome effects, and not ALL of it is sprited! HOORAY!

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On a side note, you should do the Photoshopping for my comics. XD

[Speeder the Sun ...]

WOW! The effects in this are awsome! Great job! I see that mt brother is in here KIU!

Speeder

[Mercenus: confus...]

Yay.

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You were her SERVANT? Servants aren't supposed to fall in love with their masters.

Well, Rangan was an cool dude at that age... that, and there were very strange circumstances involved, such as Royalty, Loyalty, and that I had my hands bound together by hand-cuffs...

Mercenus