Review: The Tales Of Shika Nui Options

[ExoFat]

ECC Review.

So sorry that I have abandoned this epic, and glad to see that you've continued despite lack of feedback and such. I applaud you for that.

You've really evolved the whole story, environment and characters very well. I actually feel like I know this little band of bandits gone Toa. Great job on that.

Grammar wise you seem to be average, or slightly above. You don't have a remarkable vocabulary but you do understand grammar rules and your spelling is good.

Decription has drastically improved, now I know what things look like, and what people are feeling.

Overall, I love this story, and am sorry to have neglecetd it. It is an amzing tale that deserves much more than it's getting. I am deeply impressed.

P.S: Put me on a PM list.

This post has been edited by Exo-Fat: Sep 22 2008, 11:04 AM

[TNTOS]

Cool, a review, finally .

So sorry that I have abandoned this epic, and glad to see that you've continued despite lack of feedback and such. I applaud you for that.

Yeah, I know. I was having doubts a long time there, but I followed this one simple piece of advice that every author should follow: "Keep on writing, even if no one ever reads it."

Decription has drastically improved, now I know what things look like, and what people are feeling.

That's good to know. I have been working on description more than anything else ever since you suggested that I do so. Glad it finally paid off. Of course, I can still get better, but I do believe I am better than when I first started the story.

You've really evolved the whole story, enironment and characters very well. I actually feel like I know this little band of bandits gone Toa. Great job on that.

Thanks ! Glad I actually made characters who people can actually feel like they know. I especially like writing for Barilo, personally.

Grammar wise you seem to be average, or slightly above. You don't have a remarkable vocabulary but you do understand grammar rules and your spelling is good.

Well, I learned my grammar and spelling mostly on my own, reading books and stuff, with a little help from my Mom, too.

Overall, I love this story, and am sorry to have neglecetd it. It is an amzing tale that deserves much more than it's getting. I am deeply impressed.

Thank you! It's all right. The only real advertizement I use is my sig, which just has a link to my epic. A tiny little link. I would like to get a banner, though. Besides, you're probably busy, reviewing other peoples' fics and all.

P.S: Put me on a PM list.

Sure .

Thank you for the review. It was very nice(BTW, do you have a favorite Toa? As I said above, Barilo is my favorite to write for).

-TNTOS-